MaAn Drabble collection: Nuggets of Love - Page 15

Oh smitha, this was the voice of all our T members about lack of passion. How he flipped at the end about knowing tastes😜😜😜.

Nice one, it was. This is 2nd version about the dressing room scene I have read. Both of these are amazing.

I could imagine black cherry kiss☺️🤣

Loved it❤️

Aur imagine karo alternate scenarios aur hume bhi karwao😆

Scene: Post confession, Anuj had to leave for out-of-town meeting at Udaipur. Anu accompanies him. They are riding in a taxi. Both sitting at far corners of the backseat, her bag in between them

Anuj’s cup of happiness is overflowing, he cannot believe his dream of marrying the love of his life is coming true. Here they are together away from the daily grind. But, he has to part with her for a short time to take care of important business.

He wants to bask in the short time with in the cab.😳

He turns to look at her and she is uncomfortable. He asks..

Anuj: Kya hua Anu? You look uncomfortable. Are you alright?

Anu: (feeling awkwardly shy travelling with him alone) Shakes her head and says – Nahi, kuch nahi. Aise hi… bahut thak gayi hoon. ….. pehli baaar woh bhi anjaan sheher mein, ….. Kuch ajeeb sa lag raha hai....😲🤔

Anuj: Tilts his head and smiles. Takes her bag out and puts it down by their feet. Opens his arms and signals her to come closer and says " come here"🤗

Anu: obliges shyly, comes close.😳

Anuj: puts his arms around her shoulder and pulls her closer.😉

Anu: Inserts her hands in the nook of his elbows, links her fingers with his and tilts her head to rest on his shoulders.😳❤️

Moments later, she looks up to him. He smiles and touches his cheeks to hers.😳😉

She moves away…😲

Anuj: kya hua..?😒

Anu: runs her hands over his stubble….😳

Anuj: chub raha hai?😳

Anu: shakes her head, feels shy and nuzzles on his shoulders😳😳

Anuj: Holds her hands and makes her run them along his cheeks and asks…. “isse se chutkaara chahiye?”😳

Anu: Lifts her head up immediately and says “ nahi…. Aise rehne dijiye…. aap pe achcha lagta hai…." 😳gets excited and continues....."aur pata hai Samar ko bahut pasand hai ……”🤓

Anuj: bends to meets her eyes, raises his brow and asks …”aur tumhe ? ….” And comes close to face her….😳😳

Anu: nods to indicate she likes it… his eyes hover around her lips and is about to kiss….❤️😳😳

….the taxi comes to a grinding halt, jolting them. He has to get off…🥺💔🤔😳

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The taxi ride scene appeared to have been inserted forcefully. There was a weird aloofness around them.

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Originally posted by: SmithaRam

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Soooooo much better than the actual scene. Yeh Anuj itna thanda kyon pad gaya hai yaar.

"Tu toh gajab telented ladki hai".

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

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Originally posted by: SmithaRam

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Soooooo much better than the actual scene. Yeh Anuj itna thanda kyon pad gaya hai yaar.

"Tu toh gajab telented ladki hai".

Cannot get enough of MaAn ya☺️.. do din se wahi atki hu.. in MaAn duniya. so beautifully written. Write more please

And thankoooo for the tag🤗

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Scene: Post confession, Anuj had to leave for out-of-town meeting at Udaipur. Anu accompanies him. They are riding in a taxi. Both sitting at far corners of the backseat, her bag in between them

Anuj’s cup of happiness is overflowing, he cannot believe his dream of marrying the love of his life is coming true. Here they are together away from the daily grind. But, he has to part with her for a short time to take care of important business.

He wants to bask in the short time with in the cab.😳

He turns to look at her and she is uncomfortable. He asks..

Anuj: Kya hua Anu? You look uncomfortable. Are you alright?

Anu: (feeling awkwardly shy travelling with him alone) Shakes her head and says – Nahi, kuch nahi. Aise hi… bahut thak gayi hoon. ….. pehli baaar woh bhi anjaan sheher mein, ….. Kuch ajeeb sa lag raha hai....😲🤔

Anuj: Tilts his head and smiles. Takes her bag out and puts it down by their feet. Opens his arms and signals her to come closer and says " come here"🤗

Anu: obliges shyly, comes close.😳

Anuj: puts his arms around her shoulder and pulls her closer.😉

Anu: Inserts her hands in the nook of his elbows, links her fingers with his and tilts her head to rest on his shoulders.😳❤️

Moments later, she looks up to him. He smiles and touches his cheeks to hers.😳😉

She moves away…😲

Anuj: kya hua..?😒

Anu: runs her hands over his stubble….😳

Anuj: chub raha hai?😳

Anu: shakes her head, feels shy and nuzzles on his shoulders😳😳

Anuj: Holds her hands and makes her run them along his cheeks and asks…. “isse se chutkaara chahiye?”😳

Anu: Lifts her head up immediately and says “ nahi…. Aise rehne dijiye…. aap pe achcha lagta hai…." 😳gets excited and continues....."aur pata hai Samar ko bahut pasand hai ……”🤓

Anuj: bends to meets her eyes, raises his brow and asks …”aur tumhe ? ….” And comes close to face her….😳😛

Anu: nods to indicate she likes it… his eyes hover around her lips and is about to kiss….❤️😳😳

….the taxi comes to a grinding halt, jolting them. He has to get off…🥺💔🤔😳

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The taxi ride scene appeared to have been inserted forcefully. There was a weird aloofness around them.

How do you like this alternative? 😳Drop in your comment to meet me know.

This is good actually very very good. A ride atleast should be like this 😊😊😊

👌👌

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

Scene: Post confession, Anuj had to leave for out-of-town meeting at Udaipur. Anu accompanies him. They are riding in a taxi. Both sitting at far corners of the backseat, her bag in between them

Anuj’s cup of happiness is overflowing, he cannot believe his dream of marrying the love of his life is coming true. Here they are together away from the daily grind. But, he has to part with her for a short time to take care of important business.

He wants to bask in the short time with in the cab.😳

He turns to look at her and she is uncomfortable. He asks..

Anuj: Kya hua Anu? You look uncomfortable. Are you alright?

Anu: (feeling awkwardly shy travelling with him alone) Shakes her head and says – Nahi, kuch nahi. Aise hi… bahut thak gayi hoon. ….. pehli baaar woh bhi anjaan sheher mein, ….. Kuch ajeeb sa lag raha hai....😲🤔

Anuj: Tilts his head and smiles. Takes her bag out and puts it down by their feet. Opens his arms and signals her to come closer and says " come here"🤗

Anu: obliges shyly, comes close.😳

Anuj: puts his arms around her shoulder and pulls her closer.😉

Anu: Inserts her hands in the nook of his elbows, links her fingers with his and tilts her head to rest on his shoulders.😳❤️

Moments later, she looks up to him. He smiles and touches his cheeks to hers.😳😉

She moves away…😲

Anuj: kya hua..?😒

Anu: runs her hands over his stubble….😳

Anuj: chub raha hai?😳

Anu: shakes her head, feels shy and nuzzles on his shoulders😳😳

Anuj: Holds her hands and makes her run them along his cheeks and asks…. “isse se chutkaara chahiye?”😳

Anu: Lifts her head up immediately and says “ nahi…. Aise rehne dijiye…. aap pe achcha lagta hai…." 😳gets excited and continues....."aur pata hai Samar ko bahut pasand hai ……”🤓

Anuj: bends to meets her eyes, raises his brow and asks …”aur tumhe ? ….” And comes close to face her….😳😛

Anu: nods to indicate she likes it… his eyes hover around her lips and is about to kiss….❤️😳😳

….the taxi comes to a grinding halt, jolting them. He has to get off…🥺💔🤔😳

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The taxi ride scene appeared to have been inserted forcefully. There was a weird aloofness around them.

How do you like this alternative? 😳Drop in your comment to meet me know.

Lovely lovely 💕 💕💕…. Itna toh banta hai given their relationship status😳

Originally posted by: SmithaRam

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Thanks Smitha...No comparison of both scenarios .

The real one seemed so forced that it disappointed me.

I love this.

OMG so wonderful 😍😍

I wish they'd shown even half of this in the taxi scene🥲🥲

And it was actually unlike Anuj to not ask Anu where she would be and leaving her alone in a new city without proper plans...