I agree… but, past a week we aren’t doing dissections… just drama discussions🤣
we did so much dissection till may be shiv Parvati pooja… and ,
with v ‘s reverse entry, our brains short circuited.
We couldn’t decipher their dialogues to actions to thoughts 🤣
There something laggy/disconnected… something is really not there… it is like we are watching the serial for entertainment, but in constant anxiety that it might become worse than what it is every next day…🤪
Honestly, check and tell, is there 1, atleast 1 track that was properly addressed? understood?and settled? ..none, nada!
So, #rayakasafar is as follows:
1 month, annulment with Shikki marriage.
2nd month bp se nose bleed, v drama,
3rd month quarantine, birthday and lohri …
4th month pri was recovering , v day with kachori kand,
5th month Shivratri with a weird iv, finally when they are actually comfortable with eo, trust issues and mu’s resurface…
6th month pri knows the truth , Holi happening…
Does this look like rayakasafar?🤔
more like #raya.ke.chakkar.me.fd.suffer 😂
Tell me, where is the arc/growth/ resolution?🤔
This is basic structure of a plot of protagonists…
story’s leads have a motive, obstacle, action towards obstacle, raising action , major challenge(internal conflict/external influence), overcoming challenge, falling action and resolution.
Here , I don’t see any one of them properly, except that of planning to separate raya… as if the neggies are the the protagonists, if that is the pov we have to carry… even then they seem to go nowhere…🤷♀️
Edited by TheCoolDocSid - 3 years ago