I agree⦠but, past a week we arenāt doing dissections⦠just drama discussionsš¤£
we did so much dissection till may be shiv Parvati pooja⦠and ,
with v ās reverse entry, our brains short circuited.
We couldnāt decipher their dialogues to actions to thoughts š¤£
There something laggy/disconnected⦠something is really not there⦠it is like we are watching the serial for entertainment, but in constant anxiety that it might become worse than what it is every next dayā¦š¤Ŗ
Honestly, check and tell, is there 1, atleast 1 track that was properly addressed? understood?and settled? ..none, nada!
So, #rayakasafar is as follows:
1 month, annulment with Shikki marriage.
2nd month bp se nose bleed, v drama,
3rd month quarantine, birthday and lohri ā¦
4th month pri was recovering , v day with kachori kand,
5th month Shivratri with a weird iv, finally when they are actually comfortable with eo, trust issues and muās resurfaceā¦
6th month pri knows the truth , Holi happeningā¦
Does this look like rayakasafar?š¤
more like #raya.ke.chakkar.me.fd.suffer š
Tell me, where is the arc/growth/ resolution?š¤
This is basic structure of a plot of protagonistsā¦
storyās leads have a motive, obstacle, action towards obstacle, raising action , major challenge(internal conflict/external influence), overcoming challenge, falling action and resolution.
Here , I donāt see any one of them properly, except that of planning to separate raya⦠as if the neggies are the the protagonists, if that is the pov we have to carry⦠even then they seem to go nowhereā¦š¤·āāļø
Edited by TheCoolDocSid - 3 years ago