I agree⊠but, past a week we arenât doing dissections⊠just drama discussionsđ€Ł
we did so much dissection till may be shiv Parvati pooja⊠and ,
with v âs reverse entry, our brains short circuited.
We couldnât decipher their dialogues to actions to thoughts đ€Ł
There something laggy/disconnected⊠something is really not there⊠it is like we are watching the serial for entertainment, but in constant anxiety that it might become worse than what it is every next dayâŠđ€Ș
Honestly, check and tell, is there 1, atleast 1 track that was properly addressed? understood?and settled? ..none, nada!
So, #rayakasafar is as follows:
1 month, annulment with Shikki marriage.
2nd month bp se nose bleed, v drama,
3rd month quarantine, birthday and lohri âŠ
4th month pri was recovering , v day with kachori kand,
5th month Shivratri with a weird iv, finally when they are actually comfortable with eo, trust issues and muâs resurfaceâŠ
6th month pri knows the truth , Holi happeningâŠ
Does this look like rayakasafar?đ€
more like #raya.ke.chakkar.me.fd.suffer đ
Tell me, where is the arc/growth/ resolution?đ€
This is basic structure of a plot of protagonistsâŠ
storyâs leads have a motive, obstacle, action towards obstacle, raising action , major challenge(internal conflict/external influence), overcoming challenge, falling action and resolution.
Here , I donât see any one of them properly, except that of planning to separate raya⊠as if the neggies are the the protagonists, if that is the pov we have to carry⊠even then they seem to go nowhereâŠđ€·ââïž
Edited by TheCoolDocSid - 3 years ago