Can we get our lost love back? AvNeil RiKara SS

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thank you very much Animagus_Shiri for this nice cover.





This FS is inspired from the tamil movie Raja Rani with some twists.The story of this FS is different from the movie.I dedicate this to Shameena who is my friend's friend.I dedicate this to Shiza who requested me to write on this plot for her friend.

Thank you so much my dearest friend Sydell for this lovely cover page.

An engagement ceremony....

The couple stared at each other.

The boy took the ring to put it on her finger.But she did not show her finger to him.Everyone got confused.

The girl's father Ashish gave her a pleading look.She nodded emotionally.

She extended her hand towards him.Ashish was relieved.The boy put ring on her finger.

Some flashes of someone putting ring on her finger came into her mind.Her eyes became wet.

She put ring on the boy's finger too.

They were Omkara and Avni.



Another day...

Omkara and Avni were at the restaurant.

They were looking at each other with irritation.

Omkara:I am not interested in date and all.It's my parents who forced me to come here.

Avni:Don't think that I am interested in this date.I came here only because my dad requested me.

Omkara:So our parents planned this date together.

Avni:Exactly.Because they think that we a date will bring us closer.

Omkara:It will never happen.

Avni:I know that.Because we are not meant for each other.

Omkara:When I came to see you in your house itself I noticed that you were not even smiling.

Avni:As if you smiled.

Omkara:Why should I smile when I am not interested in this marriage?

Avni:Even I am not interested.That's why I did'nt smile.

Omkara:This marriage is only a compromise for me.

Avni:For me too.

Omkara:Glad that you have my thoughts about marriage.So you will not expect anything from me or from our marriage.

Avni:I am also happy that you are not interested in marrying me.So don't expect anything from me.

Omkara:Done Alina.

Avni:Alina?My name is Avni.

Omkara:Oh!Whatever!Your name starts with A.

Avni:But my name is Avni.Don't forget it Kara Om.

Omkara:Kara Om?My name is Omkara.

Avni:I said both Om and Kara.Just the position of the words got changed.

Omkara:But still my name is Omkara.

Avni:Ok Fine.It's so strange that we are engaged,still we don't even know each other's name.

Omkara:Ya...right.Because only for others we are each other's fiance/Fiancee.

Avni:Ya.

Both Avni and Omkara's parents were sad that they were not getting closer to each other.So they arranged an excursion for Avni and Omkara hoping that it will bring them closer to each other.Omkara and Avni could'nt refuse it as they did'nt want to hurt their parents.But they did not want to go for the picnic alone.So they called their friends to join them.



Avni's best friend Ali:What is this Avni?How can I come for the excursion which is meant for you and Omkara?It's like coming between you and Omkara.

Avni:What nonsense!We are not a couple and we will never be a couple.Then why can't you come with us?I will be alone if you don't come with me.

Ali became dull.

Ali:I thought you will try to work out this relationship.But you are still in your past.You are not even trying to move on.

Avni said painfully:I can never move on Ali.I prefer to live in my past.

Ali became upset.

Ali:But Omkara...

Avni:He does'nt mind it as he is also not interested in marrying me.

Ali was shocked.

Ali thought:What a strange relationship!Where will this relationship go?Will this excursion close the distance between them?




Omkara's best friend Agni too came to the picnic spot.

Her foot slipped and she was going to fall down.Suddenly Ali caught her.She caught him tight fir balance.They looked at each other.

Ali:Are you ok?

Agni:Yes.Thank you for saving me.If you had not saved me,the whole excursion would have been ruined.

Ali smiled.

Ali:By the way,I am Ali.Avni's best friend.

Agni:I am Agni;Omkara's best friend.

They smiled.Suddenly Ali realized that he was still holding her.He released her.

They smiled slightly.

Avni and Omkara came.

Ali:Omkara?

Omkara:Yes,I am Omkara.

Ali:Hi..I am Avni's best friend Ali.

Omkara:Hi.

Agni:Hi Avni,I am Omkara's best friend Agni.

Avni:Hi Agni.

Agni:You are prettier than I expected.Omkara is lucky.

Omkara and Avni looked at each other with irritation.

Omkara whispered:Don't think that you will enjoy this excursion.I can't enjoy with you.

Avni whispered:Even I can't enjoy with a person like you.So go from my way.

Both turned off their faces and walked away.



They took 2 rooms in a resort.In one room,Avni and Agni planned to stay and the other room was for Omkara and Ali.

They were getting bored.So they gathered together.

Omkara:It's so boring yaar.

Avni:There is a medicine to get rid of boredom.Ali can sing well.

Omkara:Really?

Agni:That's cool.Then you sing Ali.

Ali started singing.All of them enjoyed his magical voice.

Agni Vayu Serial Title Song // new romantic song // SC_EDITS_// - YouTube


Agni:You sang so beautifully Ali..better than I expected.

Ali smiled.

Omkara:Really you are fantastic Ali.

Avni:He is the best singer since his childhood days.

Agni:You both are childhood friends too?

Ali:Yes.We studied together in school and college.

Agni:That's cool.

Omkara was not interested in their talk.



They all went out for a walk.

It started raining.Ali opened the umbrella and kept it above Agni too.

She smiled.

Agni:Thank you so much for being so caring Ali.

Ali smiled.

Ali:Don't thank me.As a friend,I have to do this for you.

Agni looked at him in disbelief.

Ali:I mean you are my best friend's fiance's best friend.So that way we are also friends.Right?

Agni smiled.

They had a sweet walk in the rain under the umbrella.

Omkara imagined romancing a girl in the rain.

Male : Chillena oru mazhai thuli
Ennai nenaikudhae pennae
Siragugal yaar koduthadhu
Nenjam parakudhae munnae

Un vizhigalilae oh ho
Naan vazhgiren pennae
Un kanavugalaah ho
Naan maarinen kannae

Male : Oh hoo oh hoo oh hoo oh hoo
Oh hoo oh hoo oh hoo oh hoo

Female : Ada karupatiyae en cheeni kilangae
Sirichi kavukaadha
En kannukuttiyae kamma karayae
Nee kappal ottaadha

Kannaala paakaama kannaalam pannalaama..
Kai korthu pogalaama ..

Male : Konjam paarthu vidu
Konjam pesi vidu endru
En vizhigal haiyayo ennai thitta
Kodai kaala mazhai


Vandhu pona pinnum
Salaiyoram maram thanaalae neer sotta


Avni imagined romancing a boy in the rain.


Male : Ennai thaakum puyalae

Iravodu kaayum veyilae
Unnaalae unnaalae.. noolilaa
Kaatraadi aanenae
Adi pennae .. adi kannae
Naan vilundhaaal unpadham servenae

Un vizhigalilae oh ho
Naan vazhgiren pennae
Un kanavugalaah ho
Naan maarinen kannae

Male : Kadhal vandhavudan kaichal vandhadhadi
Meendum naan pilaikka
Muthangal tharuvaaya
Kobam kolgailum
Kiranga vaikudhadi meendum orumurai
Nee kobathil paarpayaa

Male : Aalai kollum azhagae
Nizhal kooda aazhagin nagalae


Oru naalummmmm .. mmmmm..
Kuraiyaadhaa ohooo…
Pudhu bodhai kannoram
Thandhaayae
Anaithalum mmm anaiaadha
Oru theyaai nenjoram
Vandhaayae..


Adi idam valamaa
Naan aadinen pennae
Oru idi mazhayaai
Ennai thaakinaai munnae

Male : Oh hoo oh hoo oh hoo oh hoo
Oh hoo oh hoo oh hoo oh hoo(Raja Rani).

They both became emotional.

They ignored each other and walked separately.

Thinking of that someone special ,Avni falls down with fits.All were shocked.

Ali screamed:Avniiiiiiiiiiiiii

Omkara:Avni!

Agni:Oh no..

Edited by jasminerahul - 3 years ago

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Gold.Abrol thumbnail
Posted: 3 years ago
#2

Nice start dear

Loved it

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 🤗🙏💕

coderlady thumbnail
Posted: 3 years ago
#3

Avni doesn't want this engagement. So why is it happening?

coderlady thumbnail
Posted: 3 years ago
#4

Their parents set them up but they are not happy.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#5

Why don't they just tell their parents they don't want this rather than being irritated?

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Posted: 3 years ago
#6

Congrats on the SS!

Amazing update

coderlady thumbnail
Posted: 3 years ago
#7

What happened to Avni? Does she have a problem?

coderlady thumbnail
Posted: 3 years ago
#8

Agni and Ali have hit it off. They will make a good pair.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#9

Congratulations on your new SS


Title sounds Captivating


Part 1


Interesting Start

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Posted: 3 years ago
#10

Thank u very much Coderlady,Golden_Ginni,Khwaishfan,Taahir.

Can we get our lost love back? Part 2

Thinking of someone special who was her ex ,Avni falls down with fits.All were shocked.

Ali screamed:Avniiiiiiiiiiiiii

Omkara:Avni!

Agni:Oh no..

Omkara and Ali went towards Avni.

Ali:We will take her to hospital now.

Omkara and Ali carried her to the hospital.

The doctor examined Avni.

Doctor:As of now,she is alright.

All were relieved.

Doctor:You are...?

Ali:I am Avni's friend.

Omkara:I am her fiance.

Doctor:Ok.What is her age?

Omkara was silent.

Omkara:I don't know doctor.

The doctor stared at him.

Doctor:Had she got fits before?

Omkara:I don't know doctor.

Suddenly Ali said:Avni is 25 years old.She had fits one year back.She was taking medicines too.But I guess she missed her medicines in the last few days.

Doctor:Thank God!Atleast you know about Avni.

He looked at Omkara.

Doctor:You better try to know everything about your fiancee..after all you are going to spend the whole life with her.

Omkara became dull.

Omkara looked at Avni who was in deep slumber.

He went near Ali.

Omkara:Ali...Avni is not interested to marry me.But I did'nt care.I did'nt even ask her the reason.But now I feel ashamed of myself to be clueless about my own fiancee.Do you know why she hates to get married?In what circumstance did she have fits before?

Agni:Yes Ali.You tell us.Only you know Avni well.

Ali:I will say.



Flash back...

Avni went to the police station.

The ACP Neil Khanna was sitting backwards.

Avni:ACP Sir,I have a complaint.

He turned and looked at her.

Avni:Sir,my name is Avni Mehta.One guy was walking behind me and disturbing me.He proposed me.When I rejected it he pushed me to the road and my forehead got hit.After getting my wound bandaged in the hospital,I am coming straight to the Police station.Please don't leave that guy Sir.He should not do that to any girl.

Neil was lost in Avni while she was talking.

Avni:ACP Sir,are you hearing what I am saying?

Neil:Yes.Give me a written complaint.I will catch him and make sure that he will rot in the jail.But you should stop calling me Sir.You can call me ACP Neil.

Avni smiled:Thank you ACP Neil.

Neil smiled.

Within 2 days,Neil caught the culprit,punched him and put him in the jail.

Avni was very happy.

Avni:Thank you very much ACP Neil for getting me justice.

Neil:No need of thanking me.It's my duty.

Avni smiled:I am impressed with you ACP.

He smiled happily.

Avni:I am working for NGO.I work for helpless people.I may need your help again to give justice to many such victims.

Neil:Sure.I will be always there to help you.

Avni smiled.



Thus Avni kept meeting Neil for the poor people she was helping.Neil helped her a lot.Slowly slowly they became friends.

Once Avni came to the police station during the lunch time.She spent time with Neil by chatting with him.Neil was drinking water after lunch.

Avni:You know Neil?You look very cute while drinking water.You sip water like a small kid who drinks milk.

He smiled.

Avni:You look so cute that I feel like hugging you...

Avni embraced Neil.

Neil was surprised.He enjoyed that moment.

Avni:You look so cute that I feel like kissing you.

Avni pecked his cheek.

Neil was lost in her kiss.

Neil caressed her face romantically.Avni was lost in him.

Avni came back into senses.

Avni:Ok...bye Neil.

Avni went out.

Neil's colleague Police officer Dakhal Dayal laughed.

He:Guess Avni loves you.

Neil blushed.

He:I know that you also love her.That's why you were enjoying romancing her forgetting that it's a police station.

Neil became shy:DD...stop it.

Dakhal Dayal laughed.




Neil brought Avni to a decorated place.

Avni:Why did you bring him here Neil?

Neil:Don't tell me that you did not understand anything Avni.I know that you know everything.I know that you hugged and kissed me that day out of love,not because I was looking cute.

Avni blushed.

Avni:You understood my feelings for you.So I lost a chance to confess my love to you.

Neil smiled:No Avni.I am waiting to hear the 3 magical words from you.

Avni blushed:I love you very much Neil.

They shared a romantic eye lock.

Neil took a ring and said:You know Avni?I fell in love with you at first sight itself.

Avni was surprised.

Neil:Now I can't control my feelings anymore.I love you Avni.

Avni let Neil put the ring on her finger and embraced him romantically.


Avni introduced Neil to Ali.Ali,Neil and Avni were one team.

Present...

Agni:They loved each other so much.Everything was going so well.Then what happened?Was Avni's father against their relationship?

Ali:No.Ashish uncle supported them.He liked Neil very much.Neil's father became a villain in their love story.Though Neil was a strict police officer to the wrong doers,infront of his father he was a kitten.



Flash back...

Neil broke down into tears before Avni.

Neil:However I requested,dad is not allowing me to be with you.He wants me to marry another girl chosen by him and that girl is none other than my childhood friend.I am scared to lose you Avni.

Avni:Don't break down like this Neil.Be strong.No one will be able to separate us Neil.

Unnale meimarandhu nindreney
mai vizhiyil maiyaludan vandheney

They both caressed each other's face emotionally.

idai vidaadha nerukkangal
thodarumaa uyire


Neil:I know that you want us to get married with my parents' blessings.But with my dad's permission,we won't be able to get married.So we will do register marriage.Will you support my decision Avni?

Avni:Yes Neil.I will always support you decision.We will have register marriage if there is no other way.

mozhi illaamal thavikiren
mounamaa ingae

They embraced each other emotionally.

un thozhil saaindhu kolla vandheney
idhu podhum .. eppodhum(Raja Rani).



Avni and Ashish went to the register office.But Neil did not turn up there.Avni tried to ring him up.But the phone was switched off.Suddenly Dakhal Dayal rang her up.

Avni:DD,where is Neil?His phone is switched off.

Dayal:Don't wait for him Avni.He won't come.

Avni was shocked.

Avni:What kind of joke is this DD?

Dayal:This is not a joke.I am telling you seriously.He won't come.Today was his wedding.

Avni was shocked.

Avni:No,this can't happen.Neil loves me a lot.He can't cheat me.

Dayal:He loves you a lot.But he can't go against his father.So even though he did not want to marry anyone other than you,he had to marry his childhood friend for his father.

Avni was shattered.

Avni:You are lying.I will not believe it.

Dayal:I will send you a photograph.You will believe it when you see the photograph.

Dayal sent her Neil's picture with a girl.

Seeing the photograph,Avni was shattered.She cried loudly.

Avni:How could Neil cheat me?

Ashish could not bear Avni's pain.

He was in tears.

Ashish:Avni,please control yourself.Don't look at this photograph and hurt yourself.

He snatched the phone from her.

Suddenly Avni fell down with fits.

Ashish was shocked.

Ashish:Avni beta....



Present...

Agni:Oh no...Avni suffered so much because of love.


Ali:That was the first time Avni had fits.Even after the betrayal,Avni could not move on.That's why the marriage alliance with Omkara gave her a lot of stress and tension.So she even forgot to take her medicine.That's why she had fits again.

Ashish uncle forced Avni to move on with a nice guy like Omkara as he does'nt want Avni to go through trauma again.


Ali looked at Omkara:He really trusts you Omkara.He thinks that only you can keep her happy.

Omkara became so upset and he walked towards Avni.

Slowly Avni opened her eyes.

Omkara looked at him emotionally.

Omkara:How do you feel now?

Avni:I am alright now.Don't worry.First of all dislike me.Now I became a burden for you.Sorry.

Omkara became upset.

Omkara:I am sorry Avni.I was too rude to you.I did not know that you were also hiding the pain of love in your heart.

Avni was stunned.

Avni:How did you know that?

Omkara:Ali told me everything.

Avni was shocked.She did not know what to say.

Avni:Leave it Omkara.It was my fate.But why did you say that like you,I am also hiding the pain of love?Did you also show disinterest in our marriage alliance because of your past?

Omkara was silent.He walked out of the room painfully.



Avni got discharged from the hospital.She was taken to the resort.

Omkara:You take rest here.You are weak now.When you become completely alright,you can go go back home.

Avni:Ok.But please don't tell dad that I had fits.He will be worried.

Omkara:Ok.

Omkara's phone rang.It was Ashish.He picked up the call.

Omkara:Hi uncle.

Ashish:Omkara beta,how are you all?Avni is not picking up her phone since along time.

Omkara:We all were roaming around the places.In some places there was no range also.That's why we did'nt hear the ringtone.Now Avni is so tired that she is sleeping.

Ashish:I am relieved now.Anyways I have no worries when you are with her.I know that you will protect her and make her happy.

Omkara's heart was pricked with guilt.


Omkara sat outside and cried.

Agni sat near her and asked him:Why are you crying Omkara?Avni is alright now.Then why?

Omkara:Ashish uncle trusts me a lot.He will be shattered if he comes to know that I can never live upto his expectations.After a painful betrayal,Avni deserves the best.She deserves a lot of happiness in her life which I can be given only by a person who loves her wholeheartedly.I can never love her or give her the happiness she deserves.I feel guilty.

Agni felt sad seeing Omkara's tears.

Agni:You can atleast try to move on Omkara.

Omkara:No,I can't.You know that very well.

Omkara walked away.

Agni became upset.She turned back.She saw Ali near her.

Ali:Why did Omkara say that he can never love Avni or move on?

Agni became upset.

Ali:Say Agni.

Agni:Because Omkara has a tragic past.

Ali was shocked.

Agni:Though Omkara is a famous business man,he was a known painter too.He went to a village for getting the inspiration to make the best paintings.Omkara was permitted to stay in the outhouse of a famous musician named Harshwardhan.


Flash back...

Omkara was welcomed to his home by Harshwardhan.

Harsh:Today is your first day in our place.It's a good beginning as our family temple's festival started today.

Omkara smiled.

Harsh:Have kheer and go.It is the prasad from the temple.

Omkara smiled:Yes.

Harsh:Gauri....give him kheer.

Gauri:Ji papa....

Omkara looked at Gauri.He could not see her face as she was facing backward.

Harsh:She is my daughter.

Omkara smiled.

Gauri turned back and gave him kheer.

Omkara-Gauri saw each other.

Gauri was lost in Omkara.

She thought:He is so handsome like Gandharva.

Harsh:He is the painter Omkara who will stay in our outhouse for some time.

Gauri looked at Omkara without blinking eyes.

Omkara:Namasthe!

Gauri:Namasthe!

Edited by jasminerahul - 3 years ago

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