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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hello. Here is a Drabble i wrote. Anyone who wishes to write in continuation is welcomed. I am stuck. Hope you enjoy and leave encouraging comments.


Aryan: Di have you seen Imlie?

Arpita:She said something about going in the garden I think.

Aryan:l will be right back.

◇He goes outside looking for Imlie and what he saw at the end of the garden made him mad ◇

Aryan: Tripharti!

◇Aditya does not manage to turn around because Aryan grabs him and throws him away from Imlie◇

Imlie:A...ar..

◇Aryan puts his jacket around the front of her blouse because it was all ripped up and embraces her tight enough as to not make her feel uncomfortable but Imlie just hides deepee in his arms not wanting to let go◇

Aryan:Its ok I am not goinng anywhere.

◇ He takes out his phone and calls Arpita Narmada and the Triphartis outside◇

◇As Aparna was to take a step forward Imlie lets out a scream for them to not come close to stay away◇

Aryan:Maa, take Imlie to the car. Di if you could go and and say we had to leave due to an emergency as to not rise suspicion.

Narmada&Arpita: Ok.

Imlie: Maa...◇Aryan catches her before touches the ground and takes her to the car◇

Aryan:Maa wait here . Call the doctor to our house I will take you home in a few minutes.

Narmada :Ok.

◇He goes to where Aditya was still on the ground sleeping due to being drunk and drags him in front of his family◇

Aparna:Adi! What happend to him?

Aryan: You will find out soon. But be prepared. I will meet you at the Rathore Mansion.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hello. Here is a Drabble i wrote. Anyone who wishes to write in continuation is welcomed. I am stuck. Hope you enjoy and leave encouraging comments.


Aryan: Di have you seen Imlie?

Arpita:She said something about going in the garden I think.

Aryan:l will be right back.

◇He goes outside looking for Imlie and what he saw at the end of the garden made him mad ◇

Aryan: Tripharti!

◇Aditya does not manage to turn around because Aryan grabs him and throws him away from Imlie◇

Imlie:A...ar..

◇Aryan puts his jacket around the front of her blouse because it was all ripped up and embraces her tight enough as to not make her feel uncomfortable but Imlie just hides deepee in his arms not wanting to let go◇

Aryan:Its ok I am not goinng anywhere.

◇ He takes out his phone and calls Arpita Narmada and the Triphartis outside◇

◇As Aparna was to take a step forward Imlie lets out a scream for them to not come close to stay away◇

Aryan:Maa, take Imlie to the car. Di if you could go and and say we had to leave due to an emergency as to not rise suspicion.

Narmada&Arpita: Ok.

Imlie: Maa...◇Aryan catches her before touches the ground and takes her to the car◇

Aryan:Maa wait here . Call the doctor to our house I will take you home in a few minutes.

Narmada :Ok.

◇He goes to where Aditya was still on the ground sleeping due to being drunk and drags him in front of his family◇

Aparna:Adi! What happend to him?

Aryan: You will find out soon. But be prepared. I will meet you at the Rathore Mansion.

Edited by AriyaArjunRiya - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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If itbis not to much. I would like to read your opinion on it. How should i continue how to improve.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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It's good..you can start with why Imlie and Aditya were in the garden..and later how Aryan handle Imlie..

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Posted: 3 years ago
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You can continue further what aditya did to imlie that aryan has to come infront of imlie and hide her in arms... And why aryan shouted for calling doctor... Want to know what aryan will do as he said i will be talking to you aprana aunty... I just want aryan ab sabak dikhaye in Triptahis ko

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Priti1610

You can continue further what aditya did to imlie that aryan has to come infront of imlie and hide her in arms... And why aryan shouted for calling doctor... Want to know what aryan will do as he said i will be talking to you aprana aunty... I just want aryan ab sabak dikhaye in Triptahis ko

Thank you for your ideas. Here is a second part of my story.

Part 2

◇Aryan takes Imlie to his room and tells Narmada to change her clothes and stay with her◇

Imlie:A..Aryan...I know you will not accept what I am about to say but please listen. I know you want him in jail for doing this but i know it will Aparna Ji. So even if it hurts her beat him up . After this i do not want to meet and talk to anyone from that family.Please.

Aryan:Ok . Stay here with Maa.

Staff: Aryan Babu the Triparthi have arrived.

Aryan: Ok. Please get me a bucket of water and some food for Imlie.

◇Arpitas friend Dr. Sheetal comes in◇

Aryan: Thank you for coming on such short notice.

Dr. Sheetal: No problem. If you could step out the room would be perfect. Kaki you can stay .

Imlie:Maa. Can you call my parents to come here? Please ? Can we wait until she calls them?

Dr. S:Of course. How about i help you change .

Imlie:Thank you.

◇After talking to them and arranging with Aryan to bring them here she comes back after Sheetal checks on her and prescribes some medicine and leaves◇

Imlie: Maa I want to go out . Please .

Narmada: Ok. But...You are going to sit down.

◇Outside the room while Imlie was checked Aryan simply told the Triparthis to lay Aditya on the ground◇

Aparna: I dont know what happend but my son will not be treated like this.

Aryan: I will tell you what happend. Your pathetic excuse of a son tried to abuse Imlie.you should be thanking heavens i didnt kill him right there. You should be thankful to Imlie for being so kind that i did not call the police for you.

Aparna:For me? My Adi wouldn't be capable of something like that...

Aryan: Of course.The alchool in him made him crazy. ◇He thtows the bucket of water on Aditya and he wakes up instantly◇From today ....

Imlie :Aryan...◇She falls to the ground and Aryan rushes up and doesn't have the chance to say anything because Imlie hugs him tight◇

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Posted: 3 years ago
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O wow let aditya be out of his state.. Uske baad jo hoga uske saath he should be send to prison so much of pain he already given n this was worst... You write amazing keep writing

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thank you . Well i will try to show that no matter how old you are how old is your relationship trust should come first. Like imlie said in todays episode . Where i live i can only watch on instagram snippets or full episode if uploaded . But it would be 6 in the morning and have to wait the whole day for the next one.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Priti1610

O wow let aditya be out of his state.. Uske baad jo hoga uske saath he should be send to prison so much of pain he already given n this was worst... You write amazing keep writing

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