Originally posted by: Gadbad_Ghotala
Oh man, first of all, what do you mean by lambhi cheezen pasand hai lmao, size doesn't matter 🤣
And that line, source of his sleepless night, haaye, took me to another zone
I loved the maturity between these two. All of it was beautifully explained, firstly Raavi not fighting, giving up and wanting to leave and Shiva was so used to her bickering but not her teary eyes. Their soft confrontation will always be > than their fights, hands down. I'd rather see Shiva Raavi for once act like a mature couple (yes hinting at GauRa) than behave like two fighting kids. And thank you for bringing it out in this OS.
I'm still mad that Shiva won the competition, he should not have participated IMO, but nevertheless, subah ka bhula stuff so ya 🥳
This the first of your work I've read and the words you use (a little too much for someone as me, I'm not very fluent with the language) but the essence and the flow and the way you write I'm totally all up for it.
Kudos Ritu 🤗
Okaayyyy so I was just about to proof read this today lol. and you read it. Dayuuum.
Well I've edited it now.
Comment Size Matters. ALWAYS DID. ALWAYS WILL. Maine bhi tho LAMBEEEEEEEE comments diye hain. Band kr doon matlb main over analyse krna? 😉🤪
Gaura was waayyyyy mature in their age and I'm saying this because of the preleap episodes. That was mature asf. G and D at 21 and 19 was more mature than these babzuuuus they're showing. Ohhh how its all ruined. HOW AND HOW.
Words? Oh you mean hindi??
Well I had actually stopped with the hindi after 2017 yk? The last couple stories I've written on IF on different forums didn't have them. But here? Shivi? They always bring the 'maatra-baasha' addiction in me. I've got to use it there yk? It just their vibe. lol. 😆
Thenkssss for readingggggggggggggg 🤗
PS : Imma working on something. Might actually come soon. 😉
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