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Originally posted by: Priyal_10

Such a pyaara OS❤️

Her pain, silence, heartbreak and his curiousity to get answers from her❤️

Conversation ka toh pata nhi kab milega but would love an emo scene of him questioning and raavi trying to hide and breaking eye contact❤️..that would be intense🔥 like a parallel of scene where raavi tries to manao him to sleep in their room

Also, The intensity when he asked her..tujhe uss durdasha se kya problem hai and her denying..pr baad mein komedy kr di vaha bhi makers ne🤡

Thank you so so so much bub.

Makers ne tho chop kr di meri manifestation ki 💔💔

This is beautiful ❤️❤️❤️ thanks for the tag!

Thank you for writing this! I loved every bit of it. Both secretly caring for each other and finally opening up to one another. Especially Raavi. No room for misinterpretation. Kaash they show it to us like this minus the date. I will puke if he goes on date with that durdasha in the show. I'm already upset with high and handhold and kiss. Date is not needed. But beautiful OS❤️

Thank you for tagging! I loved this a lot!! ❤️

ShiVi's confrontation and care ❤️❤️

Just one emotional outburst of any kind, aur fir sab theek ho jayeega!! I wish we got something like this in the show too

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

This is beautiful ❤️❤️❤️ thanks for the tag!

Thank you for writing this! I loved every bit of it. Both secretly caring for each other and finally opening up to one another. Especially Raavi. No room for misinterpretation. Kaash they show it to us like this minus the date. I will puke if he goes on date with that durdasha in the show. I'm already upset with high and handhold and kiss. Date is not needed. But beautiful OS❤️

Thank you so so so much for this lovely comment. I feel its high time with all the comic element they've maintained till now. It is time for the damn to finally broke and have some intensity in the scenes.

The last time we had a minute one was when she returned and he asked her 'Tho tu ladna band krna chahti hai mujhse? Ye btane waps ayi hai?' After that it has all been comic.

Date ke spoiler padh ke hi ye hogya mujhse 😆

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

Thank you for tagging! I loved this a lot!! ❤️

ShiVi's confrontation and care ❤️❤️

Just one emotional outburst of any kind, aur fir sab theek ho jayeega!! I wish we got something like this in the show too

You're welcome bub.

Exactly! The one emotional outburst and flood of intensity we all been craving ever since.

Thanks for commenting. ❤️

Ritu, I needed this! 😍

This conversation is what I needed. Them to let everything out. All the pain. All the frustration. The ticking time bomb waiting to explode. If only they had a proper outlet in the show.😭

Raavi giving up her portion of the food just because her Bhootnath was hungry.....can I just hug them both already?

I understand Suman Kaki wanting the best for her child. I get that. I may not agree with her ways but I do get her intentions. But putting Raavi down every time. That wasn't necessary now, was it? Can't they both be right and wrong from their situation? Must she always try to hurt Raavi just because she made one mistake in her anger? 🥺

That "Nahi chod sakta" got to me so bad....they knew their truth. They understood the hurt. And they are trying to right the wrongs.

This piece is soooo beautifully done! 😍💖

Apologies for the long rambling. I am prone to verbal vomit sometimes. 🙈

Originally posted by: barbieflora

Ritu, I needed this! 😍

This conversation is what I needed. Them to let everything out. All the pain. All the frustration. The ticking time bomb waiting to explode. If only they had a proper outlet in the show.😭

Raavi giving up her portion of the food just because her Bhootnath was hungry.....can I just hug them both already?

I understand Suman Kaki wanting the best for her child. I get that. I may not agree with her ways but I do get her intentions. But putting Raavi down every time. That wasn't necessary now, was it? Can't they both be right and wrong from their situation? Must she always try to hurt Raavi just because she made one mistake in her anger? 🥺

That "Nahi chod sakta" got to me so bad....they knew their truth. They understood the hurt. And they are trying to right the wrongs.

This piece is soooo beautifully done! 😍💖

Apologies for the long rambling. I am prone to verbal vomit sometimes. 🙈

This comment omg.

HEARTSSS.

Yeah I mean she has good intentions she's just.. complicated. I don't know.

Bro I am the FAN of rambling. KEEP DOING IT ALWAYS.

I LOOOOVEE long comments. They made me so happy. ❤️

Ah this is so beautiful:((

I read it already! But I re reading this still gives me peace !

Also do tag me from next time you post ! Thanks!!

Originally posted by: Clouds7

Ah this is so beautiful:((

I read it already! But I re reading this still gives me peace !

Also do tag me from next time you post ! Thanks!!

Aww Thank you so much. Sorry I must have missed the comment somehow.

Will surely tag you in my next story. ❤️

Oh man, first of all, what do you mean by lambhi cheezen pasand hai lmao, size doesn't matter 🤣

And that line, source of his sleepless night, haaye, took me to another zone

I loved the maturity between these two. All of it was beautifully explained, firstly Raavi not fighting, giving up and wanting to leave and Shiva was so used to her bickering but not her teary eyes. Their soft confrontation will always be > than their fights, hands down. I'd rather see Shiva Raavi for once act like a mature couple (yes hinting at GauRa) than behave like two fighting kids. And thank you for bringing it out in this OS.

I'm still mad that Shiva won the competition, he should not have participated IMO, but nevertheless, subah ka bhula stuff so ya 🥳

This the first of your work I've read and the words you use (a little too much for someone as me, I'm not very fluent with the language) but the essence and the flow and the way you write I'm totally all up for it.

Kudos Ritu 🤗