~Tera Fitoor~ A shivi TS (part-2→page2) (pt-3→pg2) {completed} - Page 2

Originally posted by: rayt_si

I love that tum ne misunderstanding clear karadi .. unlike the show where it keeps dragging and dragging. Please do write more ❤️

Thank you @rayt_si

hey guys kaise ho?

yeh waali storyline kaisi lagi aap sabko?

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Raavi: kisne kaha yeh tujhse?

Shiva: te..teri diary mein bhi toh likha hua tha..?

Raavi: kisme? Usmein jo meine jala di? Yaa usmein jismein meine jhooth likhe the?

Shiva: jhooth?

Raavi: haa jhooth... Kyuki tere se shaadi krne ke baad mujhe realise hua ke dev mere liye kabhi perfect tha hi nahi... Mein usse pyaar krti hi nahi thi.. woh just ek crush tha... Tuune kabhi bhi mujhe dekha? Ki mein Dev ke liye kuch kar rahi hu.. yaa kuch aur... Bas meri shaadi se pehle takk ki dairy padhi aur khud hi sab assume krliya ki mein Dev se pyaar krti hu.... Aur mein? Mein idhar dev ko just apne pati ka bhai manne lagi thi... Kyuki woh toh dost kehlane ke layak bhi nahi... Usne mujhe bataaya bhi nahin ki woh kisi aur se pyaar krta hai... Aur tu pata nahi kya anaap shanaap bake ja rha tha ki... Chee.. Shiva? Tuune naa kabhi mujhe bharose ki nazar se dekha hi nahi... Meri galti kya thi? Sirf yahi na? Ki mein Teri maami ki behen ki beti thi... Mein idhar puure din guilt mein thi ki Sneha ke kahe taa tujhe bura laga hoga... Meine usse saare contacts khatam krdiye.. aur tu? Tu raat ko sharaab peeke aaya... Kya mujhe bura nahi lagega? Haa pata hai mujhe abb tu bolega meine use roka bhi nahi... Roka tha mein roka tha use... Jo bhi insaan tujhe kuch bolta hai naa.. tujhse pehle mujhe chubhti hai woh baat... Chahe woh shaadi ke baad ho chahe pehle... Har baar meine uss insaan ko roka hai jo tere liye bakwaas krta tha.. par afsos tab takk tu jaa chuka hota hai.... Pata nahi bhagwaan ji ko bhi mujhe har baar todne mein hi maza aata hai shaayad... Dekh naa? Har koi mujhe chod jaata hai... Pehle mumma papa.. chod gye... Woh accident jab bhi yaad krti hu naa toh aise hi sochti hu ki kaash mein bhi.. (couldn't complete as Shiva covers her mouth)

Shiva: ae! Paagal hai tu? Agar aaj ke baad aisi marne marane ki baat ki na toh mujhse bura koi nahi hoga... Bol raha hu..
(Frees her)

Raavi: yeh hi darr.. yeh darr lag raha tha mujhe jab meine mumma paapa ko blood mein dekha tha.. aur hua kya? Mera darr sach ho gaya... Mumma paapa chale gye... (Tears brimming her eyes) fir maasi aur mausa paa ne mujhe bada kiya.. unhone pyaar mein toh kabhi koi kami nahi chodi... Par fir bhi mein kabhi mumma paapa ko nahi bhula paayi... Har raat rokar soti thi... Fir meri aur teri shaadi ho gyi.. mein tere saath ladte ladte... Apna dard bhuulne lagi thi ki .. tabhi humme misunderstandings aani shuru ho gyi... Mujhe laga hum suljha lenge.. par nahi nahi suljha paaye... Baat hi toh nahi krta tha tu mujhse... Jis din hum alag hue na? Mujhe ghutan feel hone lag gyi thi... Haa tab ehsaas nahi hua tha ki... Kyu aisa lag raha hai mujhe... Par Shiva abb ehsaas ho gya hai... Socha tha kuch special karungi par agar kuch special krne ke chakkar mein fir hum alag ho gye toh?

Shiva: (holds her right hand with his left one... In laying position only) kabhi nahi... Hum kabhi alag nahi honge raavi... Mein nahi reh paunga... Tere bina... Dekh tuune jo aaj baatien ki hai naa mere bina bole pata nahi kaise tujhe pata chali... Aur meri saari insecurities tuune duur krdi.. abb yeh wada hai Shiva Pandya ka... Apni chipkali se... Kabhi kisi ko bhi humaare beech nahi aane dunga.. chahe koi bhi ho... Kyuki pata nahi kab ladte jhagadte pyaar ho gaya mujhe tujhse... Pata nahi kab meri zindagi ki musibat se zarurat ban gyi tu meri... Mujhe hi pata hai... Woh che mahine... Mein kaise duur raha hun tujhse... Har baar tuut jata tha mein jab bhi tujhe rotte dekhta tha.. par tab galatfehmi thi mujhe ki tu mujhe kabhi samajh nahi payegi... Tu mujhse better deserve krti hai.. paar aaaj teri baaton ne mujhe meri khud ki nazaro mein upar utha diya... I love you Raavi...

Raavi: I love you too Shiva.... Aur haa tu kisi se bhi kamm nahi hai... You have your own strengths..

after that a silence crept between them. A silence of love, a silence of assurance....

Shiva: Yaar bhookh bohot lagi hai abb kuch khaakar aaye?

Raavi: oh haan... Mei tere liye laayi thi gobhi ki sabzi aur methi ke pranthe... Par abb toh woh thnde hogye.. chal koi baat nahi hum kahin lunch kar lete hai..

Shiva: Haa.. chal

After having lunch they left for Pandya Niwaas... Outside..

Raavi: bass.. ek minute Shiva tu yahin Rukk mein apne bags le aau...

Shiva: chal aaja mein bhi help krdeta hu teri...

Raavi: rehnde... Maasi fir koi tamaasha karegi.. pehle kaaki ko manaalu... Fir hi aajayenge...

Shiva: hmm..

Raavi and Shiva enter the house hand in hand...

Shivi: Maa/kaaki?

Krish: Shiva? Raavi bhabhi? Shiva tu choota kaise?

Shiva: Raavi ne chudaya hai..

Suman: (coming out) aagya mera beta aagya! Par iss maarkundi gay ne kaise?

Rishita: Raavi! (Comes and hugs her, shocking Shiva)

Raavi: Sorry woh tujhe yeh wala part bataana reh gaya tha..

Suman: ee patraani duur hat usse... Pehle mujhe saari baat batao..

Raavi: ji kaaki... Pehle aap puuri kahaani suno fir mein aapko saboot bhi dikhaati hu..

Dhara: Raavi? shiva? tum log?

suman: haa shiva aur maarkundi gay hi hai... par abb sab chupp rahenge sirf yeh teeno hi bol sakte hai... chal shuru hoja raavi....

Raavi:

Flashback

since suman has ordered her to leave...

She leaves for packing her bags, noone follows her except Rishita

Rishita: (enters the room, and gets shocked) Raavi? Yeh tuune kiya?.... Matlab aaj tu Shiva ko confess karne waali thi?

Raavi: haan pagal thi mein, hogyi thi yeh galti mujhse, please Rishita jao yahan se..

Rishita: oh please haan... Mere saath toh yeh acting Matt hi karo... I know ki tum mujhe apna nahi samajhti.... But jinhe apna samjha tha unhone toh dhokha de diya... Mere pe trust toh krke dekho... Please... (With her most pleading voice)

Raavi: (quickly comes, and hugs Rishita, cries for her fate) Rishita? (Sobbing)

Rishita: (caresses her back) hmm... Bolo kya hua?

Raavi: rishita Shiva mujhe fir galat samjhega... But trust me yeh mere plan ka hi hissa hai

Rishita: plan baotogi?

Raavi: pehle promise karo kisi ko bhi nahi bataogi... Dev ko bhi nahi

Rishita: hmm.. promise kisi ko bhi nahi pata lagega...

Raavi: (tells her the plan)

Rishita: great! I am in.

Raavi: tum yahin pe rehna wrna kisi ko shaq ho skta hai...

Rishita: ok mam...

And both chuckle..

flashback ends..

Raavi and rishita smirk and see towards shiva...

aise partners bane the hum dono....

and smile...

Rishita: so lets again continue...

and they tell the whole story to all...

Suman: ae raavi bhai... tu bhi woh nahi woh kya kehte hain usse?.... sopparbuman...

dhara: maa! superwoman...

Suman: haa haa theek hai... waise meri toh teeno bahuyein hi su-per-wo-man hain....

all the 4 ladies hug...

Suman: tum dono bhi aao! ( to krish and shiva, who was smiling seeing everything was now alright finally)

they do a family hug... and all were heading towards their rooms only after telling that shiva was home now and the whole story will be told to them after dinner ... when suman goes behind shiva raavi...

suman: raavi... raavi.. (whispers)

raavi turns around..

raavi: ji kaaki?

shiva: Haan tu kar aa maa se baat mein chalta hu...

Suman: par kamra toh locked hai.. kyu maarkundi gay?

Raavi: woh.. h..haan.. par kaaki? shiva? aap log galat matt samajhna...

Shiva: par aisa hai kya usmein?

Raavi: do minute chup kar na bhootnaath... (gives keeys to him) jaa tu jaa.. me..mein kaaki se baat krke aati hu.. tu jaa...

suman: par aisa hai kya kamre mein?

Shiva: (opens the door and gets shocked)oh toh yeh tha? rokna hoga maa ko... idea.. (calls raavi)

Raavi: woh.. woh kaaki.. (nervously) woh... (gets a call from shiva)

suman: kya? jaldi bol...

Raavi: woh kaaki phone aa raha hai baadmein batadungi kya tah... (runs to the room)

suman: (understands that maybe now thing were all set between her stubborn children, smirks) mujhe bhi pata hai kya hoga! pakka shiva ke liye kuch krke gyi hogi... bass bhagwaan mere ghar mein khushiyan bhare rakhna...

In ShiVi's Room...

Shiva was hiding behind the door.. when Raavi enters.. he pulls her to himself by wrist.... resulting her to fall on him.. her hands on his shoulder and face so close that a little movement and their lips would meet.... his hands on her waist...

Raavi: (nervously) shiva.. yeh k..kya kar raha hai.. koi aa jayega chodd mujhe..

Shiva: abb yeh toh tujhe room decorate karne se pehle sochna chahiye tha na.. ismein meri toh koi galti nahi hai.. (smirking)

Raavi: woh..woh toh meine sorry bolne ke liye kiya tha... tera surprise kharaab kiya tha naa... usse compensate krne ke liye.. ( seeing him engrossed in talk, and his hold getting loose...... frees herself)

Shiva: (folds his sleeves up) tu rukk.... chipkali... (starts chasing her) par rukk pehle gate band karunga nahi toh tu baahar bhagegi... (locks the door)

and the chasing game starts again.......

Shiva: Kab tak bhagegi chipkali...! ( holds her from wrist and slowly starts walking towards her... soon her back hits the wall and he keeps his hands on the wall.. )

Raavi: (blushing) shiva chod na please... haa.. tujhe nahaana nahi hai? itne dino baad aaya hai.. nahaya bhi nahi hoga... dukaan nahi jaana?

shiva: Madam.. jab aap apna masterplan reveal kar rahi thi hum tab naha liye the... aur dukaan? wahaan se gaumbi ne aaj jaane ko mana kiya hai... koi aur bahaana hai? toh boliye...

Raavi: (runs crossing his arm from right side)

shiva: ae chipkali... yeh cheating hai haan? (running behind her and catches her from waist.. with so much force that they both fall on the bed.. Shiva on top of Raavi....shiva pushes her hair strands at the back of her ear) abb bata kahaan bhagegi?

Raavi: ( reaches her hands to his neck) I love you bhootnath.... (kisses his cheeks, shocking shiva)

Shiva: (leaning downwards) I love you too chipkali...

both chuckle...and soon their lips meet.. they share a slow and gentle kiss full of love and unsaid promises... soon they laid beside each other holding one hand.. and panting for air... smiling and blushing... finally Shiva and Raavi had their bundle of happiness to be experienced ahead in their lifes... finally they had confessed.

Raavi: oh shit! (suddenly, sits up)

Shiva: abb kya hua?

Raavi: Abb kaaki ko kya bolungi? shiva dekh tu hi batayega ki kaise nikalu baahar...

Shiva: (comes in sitting position) mei kyu? nahi mei nahi.... mein kya kahunga.. (afraid)

Raavi: chal abb pehle utaar isey... isse pehle ki kaaki room mein aane ki zidd karein..

Shiva: Haan, varna toh sab bina kuch kiye hi sab chidaate the.. yeh dekh ke toh pata nahi kya kya hoga... chal jaldi kar..

they remove the decor fastly... they were folding the things back when shiva noticed the heart below the pillow of Raavi's side.. takes it out...

Shiva:( goes to raavi whose back was facing ) Raavi? (sits on his knees)

Raavi turns around to see a cute site infront of her.. her bhoothnath was on knees for her.. with a heart written I LOVE YOU on it...

Raavi: (pulls his cheeks) Thank you...

Shiva: Tuune toh diya nahi toh meine hi de diya.. (cutely pouting)

Raavi: Accha? toh tuune mujhe time diya tha?

Shiva: oh haan (rubbing the back of his hair)

Raavi gets back to the work humming a song soon shiva too joins to sings the song... both perform a couple dance in their own little world..

Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re❤️
Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re❤️
Ishq jo zara sa tha woh badh gaya re❤️
Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re❤️

Tu jo mere sang chalne lage❤️
To meri raahein dhadakne lage❤️
Dekhun jo na ik pal main tumhein❤️
Toh meri baahein tadapne lage❤️

Ishq jo zara sa tha woh badh gaya re❤️
Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re❤️
Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re❤️

Haathon se laqeerein yehi kehti hai❤️
Ki zindagi jo hai meri❤️
Tujhi mein ab rehti hai❤️

Labon pe likhi hai mere dil ki khwaahish❤️
Lafzon mein kaise main bataaun❤️
Ikk tujhko hi paane ki khaatir❤️
Sabse judaa main ho jaaun❤️

Kal tak maine jo bhi khwaab the dekhe❤️
Tujhme woh dikhne lage❤️
Ishq jo zara sa tha woh badh gaya re❤️
Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re❤️
Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re❤️

Saanson ke kinaare bade tanha thhe❤️
Tu aa ke inhe chhu le bas❤️
Yehi toh mere armaan thhe❤️
Saari duniya se mujhe kya lena hai❤️
Bas tujhko hi pehchaanu❤️
Mujhko na meri ab khabar ho koi❤️
Tujhse hi khudko main jaanu❤️
Raatein nahi kat'ti bechain se hoke❤️
Din bhi guzarne lage❤️

Ishq jo zara sa tha woh badh gaya re❤️
Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re❤️
Tera fitoor jab se chadh gaya re❤️

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and here ends this story on a beautiful and happy note...

so guys enjoyed reading?

do tell me in your lovely comments how did you find it?.......

nice story💕💕💕

Write more plz💕💕

Originally posted by: kushigupta162

nice story💕💕💕

Write more plz💕💕

Thanks alot Kushi❣️✨... And yaa will surely write more...

I'm feeling all warm and fuzzy after reading this 😳❤️

What a lovely story .. please write more ☺️

Originally posted by: rayt_si

I'm feeling all warm and fuzzy after reading this 😳❤️

What a lovely story .. please write more ☺️

Thank you @rayt_si..... And will try my best to write more..

Love you🥺❤️

This was so heart warming.

Actually, this take on the kaand is very good.

PS- Maine Wattpad me ye nahi padha tha but I regret now.😭

Originally posted by: mr.Flawed

This was so heart warming.

Actually, this take on the kaand is very good.

PS- Maine Wattpad me ye nahi padha tha but I regret now.😭

Thanks bhai✨❤️

And abb padh liya naa.. so no regrets..😊