Jaan hazir, par vo...... (Updated part lV page 17) completed - Page 12

this is lovely...

raavi😭😭se is so pure...

bas gombi proof dundele🙏🙏

The only two people who actually care for Raavi are out finding proof ❤️

Raavi is so kind hearted ❤️ Even though a part of me wished her to remain aloof and save herself and made Shiva work for repentance, the Raavi we all know is a sweetheart who forgives ❤️

Amazing update ❤️

Oh My God!!!!Iam a crying mess now😭

My Raavi😢....she needs to escape the creep soon😖

I hope Ashok rots in hell😡

Loving this story alot♥️

Waiting for the next part🤗

Loved it!!!! You explained raavi's innocence too perfectly❤❤❤ she is too forgiving..

Waiting for next part update soon

Originally posted by: virangna2005

this is lovely...

raavi😭😭se is so pure...

bas gombi proof dundele🙏🙏

Thanks for reading 📖📖

Originally posted by: Paru95

Oh My God!!!!Iam a crying mess now😭

My Raavi😢....she needs to escape the creep soon😖

I hope Ashok rots in hell😡

Loving this story alot♥️

Waiting for the next part🤗

Originally posted by: Tanvi-Agrawal

Loved it!!!! You explained raavi's innocence too perfectly❤❤❤ she is too forgiving..

Waiting for next part update soon

Will update soon.........

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Originally posted by: aimmyangle

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PART-lV

Ashok woke up early out of curoisity as today Raavi has to tell him her decision.........

He was hell bent to know what she wants but if she says no also he is for surely going to change her mind by hook or by crook he smirks thinking this.

He walked towards her room and opens the door. When he opens the door he was shocked, his mind lost control his eyes became blood shot as Raaci was sleeping on tge bed in shiva's arm and he shouted out loud,

"Raaviiiiii........ "

Raavi and shiva open their eyes due to the sound but before they understoid or can react in the situation Ashok cane and hold Raavi's hair draaged her down the bed and slapped her before Shiva could cone to her rescue ashok's security hold him and Ashok hold Raavi's face with his hand squeezing it and hurting and says,

"Ikk baar samjh nahi aata tumhe pyaar karta hoon tumse.......

Aur sirf pyaar nahi paana chahta hoon tumhe aur tum uss usss shiva ki baahon mein.....

Jab main tumhare kareeb aaya tab toh mujhse ghin aa rahi thi tumhe ......... Aur jisne tumhe bech diya uske saath raatan haseen kar rahi ho...... "

Shiva roars,

"Ashok...... Raavi ko chod de...... "

Ashok looks at him still holding Raavi from her hair and entangling them even more badly and says,

"Chod du........ Chod du ise..... "

He cones behind Raavi and encircles his arm on her stomach and engulfs her in a hug from behind Raavi wriggles and shiva continuously tries to free himself from the guards and shouts but ashok now trailed his free hand on Raavi's arm and says,

"Isko apna banana chahta hoin main......... Har tarike se..... Issko tym diya tha par issne jo nahi karna chahiye tha vo kiya abb toh ise meri hona hi hoga chahe mujhe kuch bhi karna pade....... "

He comes near her ear and whispers,

"You would regret not choosing me.......... "

Raavi looks at him with tears and says,

"Ashok please leave me........ Main tumhari kabhi nahi ho sakti...."

Ashok wipes her tears and says,

"Inhe bacha kar rakho....... Abhi toh maine kuch kiya bhi nahi hain..... "

Shiva says,

"Mujhe aise gaurds se pakadwa kar rakha hai ikk baar free kar de fir raavi ko torture ki saza dunga tujhe........

Abhi bhi tym hai chod de use...... "

Ashok still holding raavi cones near shiva and says,

"Abhi toh maine shuru kiya hai sab........... Tu khud regret karega ki tu kio aaya yahan pe....... "

He signals the guard and gaurd hands ashok a gun he keep it on Raavi's forehead and says,

"Meri baat na manne ka natija dekhna chahti ho............

Ikkk minute maik tumhe kyon maru marna toh mujhe iss shiva ko chahiye....... "

He points gun at shiva and says,

"Par kya karun yaar dosti beech mein aa jati hain........ Itne saalon ki dosti main aise kaise tujhe maar du. .....

Acha bol bhai tujhe do raaste diye yaa toh jaan de de yaa fir Raavi..... "

Shiva's eyes shot up and he says,

"Jaan hazir hai....... Par vo nahi..... "

Raavi nodes her head in a no Shiva looks at her and they share an eye lockand ashok smirks,

"Chal fir teri marji..... "

He keeps his gun on shiva and sets the trigger and suddenly soneone barged in the room and ashok missed his aim and he felt a tug on his shirt and someone pulled him back it was tge police force with gaumbi.

Police force freed shiva from guards and took ashok away. Raavi looks at shiva and hugs him and gaumbi says,

"Ghar chalte hain baki bateein baad mein...... "

They settle in the car and gaumbi tells,

FLASHBACK STARTS,

After shiva left, gaumbi firstly traced where is house of ashok and than calls his friend who was the single CCTV unit in somnaath and everyone called only him for this purpose. Than his friend told him that he is the one who did the connnection in ashok'a house. In morning before the sun rises gaumbi goes to his friends check cctv foitage by hacking it and than they traced the lawyer who did all the scamand than presented the lawyer to the police and they came to their rescue.

FLASHBACK ENDS

Shiva thanks gaumbi. Raavi was unsual quite and gaumbi says,

"Maaf karde Raavi...... Humne teri raksha nahin kii kal jab vo ashok tujhe lae jaa raha tha..... "

Raavi just whispers,

"Nahi gaumbi apne toh hume bachaya hain....... "

She gives him a smile and they all drove back to home. After reaching home everyone bombarded them with ques of care and everything but Raavi's eyes were not leaving shiva's sight. Finally they went inside the room as they needed rest. Raavi was sitting on the bed still quite and shiva came near her and says,

"Raavi tu chup kio hai......... "

Raavi just pounces on him and hugs him tightly and cries. Shiva stumbles and both fell on the bed raavi on his top and she was continuously sobbing and shiva moves his hand in to and fro on her back and says,

"Ro kio rahi hai Raavi.........."

Raavi mumbles still sobbing,

"Tu theek hai na shiva....... "

Shiva says,

"Kya hua raavi....... Main theek hoon ikk dum...... "

Raavi was sniffling still face buried in his chest and tightening her hold and says,

"Shiva agar tujhe kuch ho jata na toh main...... "

She was unable to complete her words and her voice become cracking. he kisses top of her head and says,

"Kuch hua toh nahi na........ "

Raavi was still sobbing and hugs him more tightly and whispers,

"Mera dil kaanp gaya tha shiva jab goli ki awaaz suni maine....... Ikk tym ke liye toh sari duniya bikhar gayi thi....... "

Shiva says,

"Raavi maine yere saath kya kuch nahi kiya..... Koii bhi aur teri jagah hota ya main khud hota toh kabhi bhi uss insaan par bharosa nahi karta jisne itna bura kiya ho........ Aur tu mere liye itna sochti hain...... Meri ikk baat kehne par tu maan gayi kio raavi............"

Raavi looks at him her eyes were glassy she says with utmost innocence,

"Cause i love you........ "

Shiva looks at her in amusement and Raavi says,

"Tujhpar bharosa hain mujhe........ Par kal itna sab kuch ho gaya toh mujhe laga ki tune mere saath galat kiya par mera dil jeh raha tha ki tu aisa nahi kar sakta uss waqt bas mujhe ikk assurance chahiye thi aur vo tune de dii....... Toh mujhe kisi saboit ki jaroorat nahi thi apne pyaar par itna bharosa hain mujhe......... "

Shiva says,

"Mujhe tu kaise mil gayi Raavi........tera pyaar tera vishwaas yeh sab mere liye........ Main bhut lucky hoon mujhe tu mili hain........

Par ikk promise kar sakta hoon main tujhe khushi ki kabhi kami nahi hone dunga aur tujhe apni jaan se bhi jyada pyaar karunga........ "

Raavi nods her head and a lone tear escape her eyes and she put her head on his chest matching her breathe with his his heatbeat and sleep with a smile on her face as now her life is leading towards a new light.

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