~Tera Fitoor~ A shivi TS (part-2→page2) (pt-3→pg2) {completed}

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GunsNgulaabs

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Posted: 3 years ago

~✨Tera Fitoor ✨ ~

All the Pandya's ashamed of Shiva's act head towards the PANDYA NIWAS.

Suman: Ai Maarkundi guy! Rukk.. tu nahi aayegi andar... Mere Shiva ko jail bhijwa diya..

Raavi: par Kaaki...

Dhara: Raavi iss baar mein bhi tera saath nahi dungi... Jab tujhe pata tha ki anita galat hai toh kyu tuune Shiva ka saath nahi diya...

Raavi: par dhara di... Meri baat toh suno...

Suman: Raavi zada behes mat kar aur nikal ja mere ghar se.....

Raavi: Theek hai kaaki...

Raavi leaves Pandya Niwas. And goes to Her Maasi..

Raavi: Maasi? Aap kahaan ho... Dekho mein aa gyi...

Maasi: Aa meri dikri... Shukar hai tujhe samajh aayi ke woh parivaar tere liye sahi nhi hai...

Raavi: (hugging her)aur nahi toh kya maasi... Woh log mujhe apni maante hi nahi...(breaking the hug) Anita di kahaan hain mujhe unse bhi maafi maangni hai maine unn logon ke liye unhe bohot kuch sunaaya hai... (Loudly) Anita di...? Anita di... Kahaan ho aap?

Anita: Tu? Raavi mujhe tujhse koi baat nahi krni nikal ja mere kamre se..

Raavi: sorry na anita di... Dekho na meine hi toh uss jangli Shiva ko jail pohonchaya... Aap toh meri behen ho na please maaf krdo sorry...

Anita: (thinks: haa krdeti hu maaf... Waise bhi yeh hi toh meri madad karegi abb) (smiles) aaja... (Hugs her)

Raavi: Anita di? Abb na mein hi aapki madad karungi Gaumbi ko apna jiju banaane ke liye.. uss dhara di ko toh mei...

Anita: ohho! Shant hona meri bhen... Aisa kya hua jo uske itna khilaaf hogyi ekdum se?

Raavi: bss mujhe samajh aagyi yeh samajhlo...
Woh mahaanta ki murat sirf apna matlab dekhti hai...

Maami: hehe... Bhai raavi tu toh mujhse bhi aage hai..

Raavi: aur kya maasi maa... Apki hi toh beti hu..

They do a hug all three...

At night...

Raavi: chalo anita di batao mujhe kya karna hai...

Anita: abhi ruk ja... Mein bua ji se baat krke tujhe bataungi...

Raavi: kaun buaji?... Abb aap maasi ko buaji bolne lage... Fui accha tha..

Anita: nahi.. kamini bua ji... Rishita ki bua..

Raavi: woh kyu aapka saath de rhi hai?

Anita: uuse bhi toh Pandya's ko alag hote hi dekhna hai na? Isliye woh hmaari help kar rhi hai..

Raavi: oh.. Waise anita di usse sachme aapki help ki hai kabhi? Nahi matlab mujhe yakeen nahi ho rha... Ki woh apki help krti hogi... Sabse pehle aapne use jab bataaya ki aap gaumbi se abb bhi pyaar krti ho woh tabhi maan gyi?...

Anita: na na... Par tu itne sawaal kyu pooch rahi hai?

Raavi: nahi nahi bass aise hi... Woh abb mein bhi aapki hi team mein hu toh mujhe bhi toh pata ho na ki aap ne abb tak kuch kiya bhi hai yaa sirf plans hi banaaye...

Anita: (tells her all the plans) aur toh aur tujhe uss jangli se bhi meine aur bua ne hi bachaaya hai..

Raavi: kyu? Kuch krne waala tha woh?

Anita: aur nahi toh kya.. propose krne wala tha.. itni bhi akal nahi hai kahaan tu aur kahaan woh... Apni aukaat bhi nahi dekhi...

Raavi: huh!

Anita: aur kya... Chal aaj aaja dono behne saath mein soyenge..

Raavi: haa.. mein bass change krke aayi

Anita: (nodes)

(A/N: Yaar kahin maar Matt dena mujhe yeh sab likh diya...but trust me yeh likhte waqt mujhe khud ko bhi accha nahi lag raha tha... Par just wait and watch... 😂😂... )

Raavi leaves... To her rooms locks the door...

Raavi: (to Shiva's pic in her phone with so much of love) (very slow voice) Tu dekhta jaa Shiva.. mein tujhe toh chuda hi lungi par iss Anita di ko bhi expose krungi... Tujhe pata hai? Kitna bura laga mujhe tere baare mein woh sab bolna... Mujhe pata hai tu mujhse bohot zyada gussa hoga... Par mein tujhe mana hi lungi tu dekhna... I LOVE YOU... Yeh sach hai... Aur kabhi nahi badlega... (Kisses his pic and blushes) haaye kitna cute hai mera Bhootnath... Shiva meine naa uss buaji aur anita di ke saare kaale kaarnaame record krliye hai aur ek copy bhi safe krli hai ki agar unhone pakad bhi liya na toh mere paas proof toh atleast ho....... (Goes to window and sees the Pandya Niwas...) Mujhe pata hai aap sab bhi mujhse gussa ho uske liye sorry... But mujhe yeh krna hi padna tha.. nahi toh hum firse shikaar ho jaate... I love you... Meri family... But aap logon ne bhi mujhe apne plan mein shaamil nahi kiya tha toh mein kyu karun.. mein. Bhi nahi karungi...
Bass kal thode aur proofs le lu... Then I'll be there infront of you guys.. ummah..

Anita: (from outside) Raavi? Kiske saath khusar pusar kar rahi hai... Aaja jldi meine humaari night party waali maggi banaayi hai...

Raavi: aapne mera gaana toh nahi suna?

Anita: tu gana ga rahi thi? Mujhe laga jaise kisike saath baat kar rhi hai... Chal aaja jldi..

Raavi: haash... (Slaps her head) shukar hai... Nahi suna mera ganaa (chuckles) nahi toh mera mazaak udati di...

Anita: mein gyi nahi abhi... Chal jldi change kar..

Raavi: anita di... Aap yahan kyu khade ho jao na..

Anita: kyu tujhe kya krna hai?

Raavi: change..

They laugh...

Anita: abhi takk nahi kiya?

Raavi: Tch... Bass kar rahi hu..

Changes her clothes and gets out..

Raavi: (in kitchen) hmmm....aaah. Kya mast khushboo aa rhi hai di.... Shabaash... Mai maasi ko bula ke laayi...

Prafulla: Talk aaf prufhulla and prafhullha ijj hear...

All laugh...

Raavi: good English maasi.. (laughing)

Prafulla: kyu meine galat boli?

Anita: naa.. (sarcastically) bohot acchi thi.. very good fui aajao khaayein..

They eat the maggi. And head towards there rooms to sleep.

At night.

Raavi was sleeping when Anita decides to check Raavi's phone as this may be her plan. She gets up to check it.. Anita tiptoes towards the bedside table of Raavi... And picks up her phone.. but in vain... It was secured with password...

Anita: (murmurs) shit.. password lgaake rkha hai phone pe...

Raavi: (Wakes up due to commotion; but due to her shaking Anita quickly keeps her phone back) kya hua anita di? Aap yahaan kyu khadi ho?

Anita: nahi.. woh bass thodi bechaini c ho rhi thi.. toh walk kar rahi thi room mein tu soja...

Raavi: oh! Meri koi zarurat ho toh utha lena... Haa?

Anita: (carresing her cheek) hmm..hmm... Chal mein bhi abhi sonne ka try krti hu...

They both sleep.

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So hey guys! Kaise ho?

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Posted: 3 years ago

Kya mast acting karti hai ye raavi!🤣

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GunsNgulaabs

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Posted: 3 years ago

hehe... tabhi Shiva ki nautanki hai...

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Posted: 3 years ago

Hey Tanu
Welcome to the club!
Happy to help 🤗
Love that Raavi is hellbent on finding proof and proving herself right to Shiva! ❤️
Because the show isn't clarifying Raavi's innocence at the moment.
Looking forward to the next part!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Pinkbell
Kya mast acting karti hai ye raavi!🤣
Bechari anita👎🏼

Tabhi toh she's called 'Shiva ki nautanki🤣'

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Posted: 3 years ago

Hey!!

It's really interesting!! Looking forward to the next part. ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: VNuts
Hey!!
It's really interesting!! Looking forward to the next part. ❤️

Yaa, will put it up to the soonest... @VNuts❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

the next day too went collecting some more proofs and she also accomplished the toughest task, making buaji confess of all her deeds. day3 Raavi: good morning sir... Officer: yes mam.. boliye.. Raavi: mein Shiva Pandya ki wife ho usse chudwaane aayi hu.. Officer: oh madam... Aap bologi toh hum chod denge? Raavi: But sir uski koi galati hi nahi hai... Just yeh hai ki woh gusse mein jaldi aa jaata hai... Galti to Anita di ki thi... Anita meri behen hai jiske baal kaate the Shiva ne.. usne Dhara pandya.. Shiva ki maa samaan bhabhi ... Ko apne trust mein liya... Aur unka IVF khud mein krwa rahi thi... Moreover woh unke husband ko bhi paana chahti hain.. Officer: yeh kya manghadant kahaani hai.. tu bolegi toh mein maan lunga? Get out of here.. Raavi: Proof hai mere paas.... Unhone khud confess kiya hai yeh sab.. Officer: dikhaao.. Raavi: (shows him a video) dekh liya sir? Abb please mere husband ko chod dijiye.. Officer: theek hai.. yeh proof aap humein bhi submit krwa dijiye.. apne lawyer ke through.. Lawyer: yes sir... Raavi aap aaiye... Hum pehle yeh krlein fir Shiva ko bhi chudwa lenge.. They complete the formalities... And Shiva is released.. Raavi: (runs and hugs Shiva) Shiva tu...tu.. theek hai na? Shiva? Shiva: Raavi mujhse duur reh... (Breaking the hug) Raavi: Shiva please meri ek baat toh sunle? Shiva: nahi sunni mujhe... (Moving ahead) Raavi: agar mujhe tujhe sachmein jail bhejna hota toh mein aise chudwaati tujhe? Shiva: (halts) bol... Raavi: (pays lawyer his fees and goes to Shiva, holds his hand) bahar chal tujhe kahin leke jaana hai... They move out of the police station.. Shiva: Raavi dekh please yeh draame Matt kar mera dimaag already garam hai... Mujhe bhabhi ke paas jana hai... Raavi: (angrily) jab dekho bhabhi, bhabhi, bhabhi... Jaa tu bhabhi ke paas hi chala ja jisse teri koi fikar hi nahi thi... Aur jisne tujhe chudwaane mein din raat ek krdiya uski toh tujhe koi kadar hi nahi hai... (Tears streaming from her cheeks) Shiva: (angrily holds her from her shoulders) Raavi tu bhabhi ke baare mein aisa bol rahi hai? Chee... Tujhe yeh umeed nahi thi... Agar woh na hoti toh mein chut-ta nahi... Raavi: (crying) oh toh abb tujhe chudwaya bhi dhara di ne hai? Like seriously? Tere saamne mein sir se baat kar rhi thi.. proof meine unhe diya... Sab kaam meine diya aur phir sunne ko kya milta hai? Bhabhi ne mujhe chudwaya.... Shiva tu na kabhi bhabhi bhkti se bahar bhi dekh duniya exist krti hai.. (sobbing) kyu tujhe meri koi kadar hi nahi hai... Kyu tu apni patni ke upar hamesha apni bhabhi ko rakhta hai ... Jinhone inn 2 dino mein tere baare mein baat takk nahi ki.. teri family mein except Dev-rishita, kaaki aur krish... Kisi ne tere baare mein baat bhi nahi ki.. tu kyu mujhe kuch nahi samajhta?... Shiva: (breaks seeing her crying so badly) accha bol mein sun raha hu... Raavi: nahi bass mujhe nahi bolna tu jaa apni bhabhi ke paas... Ho sake kabhi meri baaton pe dhyaan se sochiyo... Shiva: Tu bol na raavi please.... Abb main nahi bolunga beech mein kuch... Raavi: Shiva.. (crying) kyu tu har baar mujhpe shaq krta hai... Kyu tu mujhpe trust nahi krta? Shiva: Raavi? Abb mein kya karun... Meine bohot baar yeh khayaal apne dimaag se hataaya... Par har baar kuch na kuch aisa dikh jata tha ki mujhe lgta tha tu uss anita ke saath mili hui hai... Raavi: tuune kabhi mujhe directly poocha? Nahi na? Khud hi sab assume krliya... Shiva: (understands that she maybe had a plan aginst anita) (caresses her hair) accha bol abb... Mujhe meri chipkali roti hui acchi nahi lagti.. Raavi: (chuckles in the hug itself, them breaks it) abb chalega mere saath? Tujhe wahin sab bataati hun... Shiva: agar naa bolunga toh bhi konsa maanegi... Chal... Raavi takes him to the top of a hill.. Shiva: kitna sundar view hai na yahan? Raavi: hmm... Meri place of solace hai yeh.. Shiva: oh.. tuune toh yeh bhi kitni sundar dhundhi hai.. Raavi: (makes him sit and sits besides him) chal abb tujhe bataati hu kaise kiya meine yeh sab. (Tells him the whole story) toh bol? hu naa mein smart? Shiva: ( Tearly eyed ) Sorry raavi!..... mein kaise bhool skta hun ki tu hi toh woh pehli insaan thi jise anita pe doubt hoya tha.... please mujhe maaf krde... (holding his ears) Raavi: (wipes away his tears & chuckles) iss baar apology accept kar rhi hu... par promise kar aage se aisa nahi karega? Shiva: promise... Raavi: waise, am too sorry.... Shiva: kyu? kya kaand krke aayi hai?.. Raavi: woh tera surprise kharaab krdiya naa!..... waise jo tu tab bolne waala tha abb bol skta hai! Shiva: (gets up, offers Raavi his hand who takes it happily, pulls her with so much force that their body get flushed. shiva pushes her strands of hair behind her ear) (innocently) kya bolne wala tha mein? Raavi: aa... rukk mein kyu bolu? (realises he is maing her confess first) Shiva: (teasingly) kya? par bolna kya tha mujhe? (pulling her more close) Raavi: Shiva? koi dekh lega chod mujhe... Shiva: par tuune hi toh haweli mein kaha tha... ki hum pati patni hai... toh humein koi saath bhi dekh bhi le toh koi farak nhi padta... (smirking) Raavi: (blushes) toh abb mein hi keh rhi hu chod mujhe please... Shiva: Par mujhe yeh baat nahi maanni..... meri marzi! (sarcastically) Raavi: Shiva!..... oh namaste kaki.. Shiva: (quickly leaves Raavi) kahan hai kaka? Raavi: (running away, laughing) koi toh keh raha tha nahi chodunga..... Shiva: (chasing her) Chipkalliiiiii..... tu rukk... (suddenly sits) ouch.... aah Raavi: (comes running to him) kya hua shiva? dikha mujhe... Shiva: ( again catches her by waist, due to sudden force they fall back... raavi on top of shiva) pakad liya.... Raavi: tune cheating ki hai... Shiva: everything is fare in love and war Raavi: (smiles) nice.... (settles herself by his side) waise shiva? ek baat poochun toh sach sach jawaab dega? Shiva: Haa.. bol? both staring the sky... Raavi: Shiva jab tu mujhe pasand krne laga tha toh tu hmaara talaaq kyu chahta tha? tuune mujhe divorce papers kyu bheje? Shiva: wo..wo.. Raavi: shiva please sab sach bolna... Shiva: kyuki tu mujhse better deserve krti hai... Raavi: kisne kaha yeh tujhe? ********************************* So guys here it is.... this is part 2 of tera fitoor. guys do comment and share your experience. do you enjoy reading these writings of mine... where should i improove and where you guys love it... lots of love ✨❤️ your writer❣️ Tanu💜