Originally posted by: ishqdinoorhai9
A ward boy delivered him a box. He opened the box and smiled. It was her bracelet. The note read:
It seems to make its way to you anyway.
Yours, Gharelu Doctor.”
I was already floored by how convincingly you portrayed Abhimanyu frustration and need to have a distraction... He wanted to have a moment for himself to wrap his head around Akshara and her actions. But here I lost my heart a little. He wanted peace and as always his Akshu was there to cocoon him into her warmth. And frustrate him too, No peace for Abhimanyu anywhere, Kya kare bechara!
Then he remembered the last time he put this bracelet back on her wrist. She had called him” Koi Bhi.” All the pain and hurt came flooding back. His heart had burned that day.
But she not only brings peace, she also brought storm with her. She makes his heart flutter but if there was ever a race between heartbeat, his would win. He can make the world bow down for her and only her. His heart burns for her but she is the only one who extinguishes the fire. The thing is that Akshu knows exactly what buttons to push as Abhi is an open book as he always speaks his heart. Abhimanyu on the other hand at this moment does not know Akshu's ticking points. She has a better handle on him than he on hers.
The bracelet was a piece of him that would go everywhere with him from now on.
It played a significant role in tying them together and now once again, it's going to spread its magic to start their love story. And is not it beautiful how this bracelet has seen all the phases of Akshara and Abhimanyu love story as AbhiRa. Even before they met each other, they have the bracelet to be tied to each other. The first heart break during tilak to their first fall during his birthday to the heart burn during koi bhi sequence to finally back to the one who ruled the owner of the bracelet, this time, to remain with him forever, with love. The bracelet has seen everything, him falling in love with her voice, their first meeting, their first fight, their struggle, and their pain. It has witnessed all. If only that bracelet could talk, it will give Abhimanyu so much peace to hear that his Akshu is in the same boat as him.
Akshara was on a mission- to win her man back. Just for the man she loves. She could not believe that she could claim herself his even in her thoughts. She was no longer monitoring what she felt or thought. Her Abhi had given her freedom to her wishes.
This... I totally stan this. I was just so so glad of how beautifully you showed Akshara realised that she don't have to think 1000 times before she wanted to do something /ask. That she have the freedom to do what she want and Abhimanyu does not bind her in anything. Ki Akshara ke paas poora aasman aur ab usko bas khul kar udna hai. Abhimanyu will give her skies to fly and untie her wings. You watch Akshara flourish! I know that even when they will be together Akshara will but family first, his and hers as that is what she is; which is also very good for Abhimanyu cos that will ground him. He needs to be grounded a little, it will make him a better person. But for Abhimanyu, she will be first always and Akshu will take comfort in that there is someone in this world who will fight for her first.
He will at least not yell at her in front of the kids for showing up here while he had told her to rest. She, as usual, felt him before she could see him. She sang to pacify her love
How much she has progressed? How much love has changed her? How much did she actually come to understand Abhimanyu? She knew his primary concern would be her health and everything else, his own hurt would come next. And you have beautifully showed that growth. Here is hoping the show akshu takes a hint.
After keeping his promise to eat, Abhimanyu went about his day.
He is just immune to ignore her. He just can't bring himself up to ignore her. Dr. Biwi Bhakt ke Bas ka nahi hai!
Abhimanyu bedeviled himself for having such an unruly heart. He followed her voice like a charmed man follows his pied piper.
Can I say thank you? Even if you say no I will. Thank for writing this. This you know pretty much sums up why Abhimanyu fell in love with Akshara. He is a surgeon and doctors take pride in controlling their emotions as they should. But here comes Akshara, who makes him loose himself in her ocean orbs. He lost himself but he have never found himself until then either. She makes him go out of his way... He gets uncomfortable so that she should be comfortable (in show we can see that his decision of marrying Aarohi). So I really really love this part. You do not need to say thank you to me Noor. Akshara has a light in her that calls to Abhimanuyu's darkness. He does not get lost in her eyes Noor, he finds himself. Everytime he fights for her, protects her he is also protecting himself. His love is selfish and there is nothing wrong with that. His selfishness gives her confidence and strength to be her as she know he will be there when she needs him. Abhimanyu will be there everytime Akshara falls, to gather her in his arms and save her.
Abhimanyu felt his temper rise. She was supposed to be resting.
Daant khana kisi ko nahi pasand par aisi daant ke liye log taras jaate hai. I don't know why but this made me emotional a little. I don't know if there was a more pure form of love. His love for her is heartwarming, something that gives you tickles in your stomach and make you smile wide as happy tears descend down your status Remeber that dialogue, "Yeh Bhi daant ke Kaho naa As Always" and then Abhimanyu says, "pehle tum bachon ki tarah behave karo, mera patience test karoo" and then she cut him off and he stopped. That is what they are.
Today she had taken special care to dress up, just for the man she loves. He loved her in sarees, so that was her outfit. He loved looking into her eyes, so she layered them with Kohl. He loved to caress her hair off her forehead, so she opened them. Her bindi was signifying his claim on her. Her bangles chanted his name while her anklets reminded him of her existence. Love shone in his eyes, and then they stormed in anger.
What should I say about this part? This is just my favourite favourite part and I am in just awe of your writing. Here, I would have become your fan, if I was not already. But yes, I fell in love with the writing a little more... Bas thoda aur ❤️
I loved loved how your just made everything related to her about him. I don't know... But here something is so so special Amnu, that it felt like I was the person who is loved. @ red- Oh Noor! I don't know what to say. You have left me speechless here.
The pull is so strong that she could sing from the other side of the world, and he would feel the tug.
And I remembered all the times he ran when he heard her voice.... He ran towards his solace ❤️ his home His salvation, his life force.
Abhimanyu’s heart soared at the thought. It was the first time she had done something just for him.
Thank you for making him happy and telling him that he is loved by the person he loves.Abhimanyu is more vocal but I think Akshara's love will always be more visible in her actions.
The room roared with applause as Akshara finished the song. Abhimanyu smiled at the applause.
Once again, how beautifully you have sketched Abhimanyu... What a beauty. He is possesive par jab taaliyon ki gargarahat uske Akshu ke liye hongi toh usse zyada khush duniya mein koi aur nahi hoga Abhimanyu will be her proudest and loudest cheerleader.
She would have given up anything to know what was going on in that stormy brain of his.
Ek baar muskura do, dil kya banda pighal jaaye 😳Moti Moti Aankhon mein Bade Bade aansu lekar jao, sab bhook tumhe khush karega yeh banda!
And the whole jealousy part... He was such a cutie and yet the roaring tiger. His command yet the warmth he have for his Akshu will always warm my heart up. Dr Bajaj, I hoped you noticed how these two have heart eyes for each other only and you are now in AbhiRa ship, ship?
Life does not always give us what we want ... Sometimes because it gives us better and what we deserved and sometimes something worse so that we learn the value of the best and earn it and AbhiRa had earned the beautiful, beautiful confession you gave us... And loved loved how you made Akshara take the first step of intimacy and how you made her into such a strong, sensitive, flawed yet beautiful and better human. There is nothing more perfect in this world than a flawed Human Being. Akshara is very emotionally strong and I think Abhimanyu needs emotionally strong.
I am in awe of you with every word I read and the way you shaped Abhimanyu and Akshara.... I just so wish, waise mohabbat karne walon ki love story main saamne se dekh paati or atleast show mein and once again, send your cv to Rajan sir ❤️❤️ I always make this joke that if I ever win a lottery I will make an ITV show and my husband just rolls his eyes at me.
And I am being rendered speechless and that's why the reply might come off a little messed up... Sorry for that but I don't know how to appreciate the beauty of jealousy and confession part... Just know I have read it so so many times ❤️❤️ Your reply has left a huge smile on my face.Thank you so much for your wonderful words!
Also you song selection is all love, love 🤗
I did it Noor!!!
And BLUE is me
Yours,
Blue Blue
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