Arylie FF: Full circle, Chapter 21, note updated on Pg 94 - Page 42

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: DakZz

This was so good....🤗

It was a fine piece if writing... Never want it to end..

Have to come out to react on it...👏👏

Read the unedited version and the dark dominance in Aryan was beautifully written... I so want the TV Aryan to be like him......

Love to read more from you 😍😍...


Thank you for coming out and reacting!! I think this Aryan is also a softer version of the cold, calculating guy when he is with Imlie, but he does have a dominant side in this story, which fortunately for me, Imlie likes. Makes writing the story easier! 😆

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: egle

to quote your comment to @potterhead


You're no Aryan and I'm no Imlie. Udhaar kahe ka? 🤣🤣


Okay responded to your comment in the thread. Waise, I don't think this Aryan gives Imlie udhaar. Now my gutter mind is activated as I type. What udhaar are you thinking of between the two of them, eh??

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: mltr16


Reeha! First off thank you for reading these stories. I will come back later tonight and craft a better response but for now 🤗 and keep reading!


Edit: I am so thrilled you decided to take a chance on this SS. Don't forget to read the associated OS and TS as well, they are all interconnected and will you give a deeper glimpse on the progression of their relationship. If you don't have the link, let me know and I will send it to you. I am absolutely honored that you called my story art. Can't even express how good that feels, because I have never considered myself a right brained person. It is definitely Aryan and Imlie that play muse and bring out this particular AU. You are right, it does take hours to write and edit a story, but comments like yours make all the effort worth it. Keep reading, let me know if you need the link. ❤️🤗


Tagging you for my response to your comment.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: mltr16


Okay responded to your comment in the thread. Waise, I don't think this Aryan gives Imlie udhaar. Now my gutter mind is activated as I type. What udhaar are you thinking of between the two of them, eh??


LOL my comment was based on you saying you had an udhaar ka post baaki on Dawn 😆 But I like the way you think.


imo Aryan udhaar dene se zyaada, Imlie se udhaar chukane me interest rakhega 🤣 if you get what I mean (and I rather think you will)


(edit) @bold: buddy kabhi deactivate mat karna. I dont want to be alone here.

Edited by egle - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Hehe the gif 🤭


I was so pissed yesterday because of that bakwas epi...mood hi nahi tha kuch parne ko 😣


Though i read the first chapter of malini being a cancer patient. 😳 karma hit her perfectly!

I will read it and write a more detailed comment 💜

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: mltr16


I just saw this. I don't think IF notifies people on edits. Glad to have satisfied 3 of the few known members of the #pyaasigang. Yes, all clean chapters coming up on Neel and Aditya's separate but continued journey. Arylie with them.

in between give us a few Arylie stolen moments too please.
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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: nmurali

in between give us a few Arylie stolen moments too please.


You will have to define stolen, pyaasi.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: mltr16


You will have to define stolen, pyaasi.

An occasional pout that Imlie is not paying attention to Aryan due to Neel or a few kisses when no one is looking. ☺️
Edited by nmurali - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Just love this. The confrontation they had. Imlie clearly showing her stance is with her Hubby. I specially loved how you've shown Aryan being human and not a superman. He needed time to compose himself and also his intense feeling. He is a man afterall and whatever the level of trust still need to stake his total and absolute " ownership". The last part was just Toes curling hot 🥵🥵🥵. The dominant ASR sure is sexy as H..l. Still getting the chills of how hot it was. I never going to look at a cupcakes the same way ever again 😍😍😍😍

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: JessilaM

Just love this. The confrontation they had. Imlie clearly showing her stance is with her Hubby. I specially loved how you've shown Aryan being human and not a superman. He needed time to compose himself and also his intense feeling. He is a man afterall and whatever the level of trust still need to stake his total and absolute " ownership". The last part was just Toes curling hot 🥵🥵🥵. The dominant ASR sure is sexy as H..l. Still getting the chills of how hot it was. I never going to look at a cupcakes the same way ever again 😍😍😍😍


🤣🤣Yes I think I have elevated the station of cupcakes for many people. "Takes a bow" on behalf of my very naughty muse/s. I am so glad you liked it. This Imlie is not the flake we are seeing on the show. She has chosen her SAHI JAGAH and she ain't budging. Thanks for commenting, Jessila! 🤗🤗It makes my day when I read a comment like this.

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