Arylie FF: Full circle, Chapter 21, note updated on Pg 94 - Page 40

Originally posted by: Potterhead3009

Because I forgot to tag you

And I just remembered this is your story and you'll get the notification anyway. Why am I such a lost cause?😭😭😭😭

I am so so so so so happy I found the pyassi gang late after logging onto IF after years. Being late to the party meant I was behind on many things including setting my eyes upon your magical writing M!!!!

After today’s disappointing episode I ventured for some respite and found your thread. This was a masterpiece and I am so thankful I got to enjoy all 13 segments in one read!!!

You’ve evolved these characters beyond compare. You’ve found a way to bring arylie to life in a way that’s more than just their love and passion for each other but shows them as individuals who navigate life as a team and have found a way to bring out the very best in each other. You’ve reconciled complex emotions in a way that ITV never would do justice to.

I am so thankful you’ve gifted us with this, thank you so much for taking the time and putting yourself out there. I can appreciate the hours and time it has taken to create this art! 🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍

Originally posted by: mltr16

Awww, I love books!!!

Me, too (books are the ultimate LOML) and so, so sorry M. I am super duper late, my evening turned into 3 days but you blessed us with another insightful, gorgeous and hawt chapter in the meanwhile so thank you for that.

You are absolutely right! Aditya is complex and not liked at all by many on the forum. But in this story, he is human like all of us. Find me one person who has never had a moment of pure selfishness, a moment of weakness, jealousy, envy, pride, anger in their life. One person who has not done something stupid in their life, hurt another human being with their words or actions.

Oh man, THIS. Each word you spoke resonated with everything inside me. I will be honest that I took a whole screenshot of this comment because of it's absolute and undeniable truth, what you have written is GOLD. It will also help me to be a little more empathetic to other people, fictional or otherwise. Very true, it's easy to judge people harshly but we tend to forget that we can easily fall prey to the same traps/mistakes. I do agree that Aditya fully deserves to be judged though, but as a human like us and not as someone who is on a pedestal.

Life is full of mistakes and regrets. But a lucky few are granted the opportunity and the ability to reflect, introspect. One can introspect all they want but only a handful will find the courage to make a change. Aditya was a principled man, a disciplined man who fell. But does that mean, he is irredeemable? You may or may not feel sympathy for him, but every one deserves another chance, especially if that attempt is sincere. Every one must give themselves a chance to mature and put their old selves behind...bring about a core change. Every one must have a chance to repay their karmic debts.

As I said, this comment is gold and so are these sentences. It brings so much clarity when you put it like that. I have had no particular thoughts on karma and I do think certain things are too beyond the boundaries to be irredeemable but with the bold, I completely agree. Now, it's a different matter if they are forgiven for the mistakes/sins they committed. But Aditya is still redeemable if he ponders upon the things he did.

My impetus to write this story, is to make us introspect. Who am I? Why was I born into this particular set of circumstances? What is my purpose - not just academic, professional, but what is my bigger purpose, why was I born at all? Why was I born a human and not a grasshopper? Life must be about reflections, the ability to parse, what is most meaningful and letting go of those things that are not. It must be about keeping our mind steady as we face the dualities of life, birth and death, happiness and sadness. It can take many lifetimes to learn this simple lesson.

I would say you are highly successful in your aim. I can assure you that it lead me to introspect. I honestly started this story and all your OS's to satiate my AryLie cravings but the more I kept going on, it's turned so much more meaningful than the detachment I started it with. These people are real to me in a way I didn't think was possible and as Descartes says "Cogito Ergo Sum", I think therefore I am. In our day to day life, with all the grandiose and mundanities of our life, we forget to think beyond our problems and sometimes lose track of our purpose as well. But I sat down to think after the words you put down, and I would like to really thank you for putting so much thought and efforts on this world you have created.

The anchor for all characters in this story comes in a surprisingly small package. Neel. It is human tendency to want to protect offspring, a child, the very essence of the untarnished, innocence. Every adult in this story will strive to meet this need, making monumental changes to their own mindset, their purpose. The premise of this story is that all 4 individuals will come Full Circle. Not every one gets a chance to do that in one life time. But these 4, whose lives had been woven together so intricately probably the moment Imlie was conceived, will. Thanks to Neel. I must admit, I have drawn on a lot of personal/professional experiences to write this one. I am so glad you like this story. Keep reading! - ❤️ M

I was skeptical about how Neel would fit in the beginning and I won't lie but I wanted the T clan along with Malini and Aditya to stay away from the Rathores, I had thought it wasn't fair that Imlie had to be dragged into their lives again. But man, was I selfish. As I delved deeper into the story than did I began to realize how one dimensional was I being, of course Neel was a victim in the mayhem as well and as a kid, the most tragic one who had no choices in the consequences that led to this. And yet, he is the perfect catalyst to bring them together and tread the path of forgiveness as you correctly said because of his untarnished innocence. So realistic, parents tend to forget that their each decision has the potential to make their child suffer. And it's worst for the neglected children who by default suffer. Your writing is so personal, makes sense that you drew this character from your experiences, thanks for letting this piece of information be known. I relate to Neel as well in a way and it's heartbreaking because there are many more Neels suffering whose loved ones/parents won't take action for them. Glad that in your story these characters have had the introspection needed to do so. Of course, I will keep reading and I don't know when I will be commenting next but please know about the huge impact it had on me and I really appreciate the thought process through which you are operating this story. This story and especially this comment will stay with me for a long time. Thank you M ! ❤️

Lisa

Replied in Red.

Originally posted by: CaffeineMuggle

Replied in Red.

This deserves an answer 😃 so I am going to wait for tonight when I have some quiet time and compose one. For now, all I can say is thank you for responding when you finally could. More, later. 🤗

Originally posted by: reeha_k

I am so so so so so happy I found the pyassi gang late after logging onto IF after years. Being late to the party meant I was behind on many things including setting my eyes upon your magical writing M!!!!

After today’s disappointing episode I ventured for some respite and found your thread. This was a masterpiece and I am so thankful I got to enjoy all 13 segments in one read!!!

You’ve evolved these characters beyond compare. You’ve found a way to bring arylie to life in a way that’s more than just their love and passion for each other but shows them as individuals who navigate life as a team and have found a way to bring out the very best in each other. You’ve reconciled complex emotions in a way that ITV never would do justice to.

I am so thankful you’ve gifted us with this, thank you so much for taking the time and putting yourself out there. I can appreciate the hours and time it has taken to create this art! 🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍🤍

Reeha! First off thank you for reading these stories. I will come back later tonight and craft a better response but for now 🤗 and keep reading!

Edit: I am so thrilled you decided to take a chance on this SS. Don't forget to read the associated OS and TS as well, they are all interconnected and will you give a deeper glimpse on the progression of their relationship. If you don't have the link, let me know and I will send it to you. I am absolutely honored that you called my story art. Can't even express how good that feels, because I have never considered myself a right brained person. It is definitely Aryan and Imlie that play muse and bring out this particular AU. You are right, it does take hours to write and edit a story, but comments like yours make all the effort worth it. Keep reading, let me know if you need the link. ❤️🤗

Loved it, is an absolute understatement… I love how you describe the visuals and the feelings all together! Loving the 18+ version

Wonderfully written as usual M .I really enjoyed Aditya parts in your story .Onscreen my interest in him in negative .Got the chance to read both the versions.Very well written .I am glad that this Imlie and Aryan have each other with their understanding and you as the creator .

Finally the long awaited confrontation ,I loved that ASR stated in no way would he have used a woman to take revenge .I loved both husband and wife supporting and showing the love and trust in each other .I loved Imile show Adi that Aryan and her loved was based on trust and respect and love all that was lacking in Adi and her marriage ,amazing update both be each other pillar. Ayan leaving Imile to comfort Adi shows his amazing trust in her.I loved the way the comforted each other when they where alone very hot very sexy.

The unedited version was hot and sensual. Loved the way how in sync Aryan and Imlie were. Fantastic update.

Originally posted by: Potterhead3009

Oh my my....what did I just read ? Because I feel like I'm floating in the damn air. I swear Aryan Singh Rathore's dark controlling side does something to me...

So jealous Imlie right now

The dark dominance and the sweet submission, God was it a fineee piece of work.

I finally understand what you guys mean by reading in one breath, because that's what you just did !!!! Ahhh..I'm freaking out.

You should definitely write an SS , just 18+ things

Thanks, Potts!! Coming from you that compliment means a lot. And no, while I can suggest a lot of things on our scene-by-scene thread. I think this was it for me. No more 18+ stories 😃.....I think. Unless my muse who seems to be just as besotted with Aryan and just as naughty as the rest of the pyaasis on that thread decides otherwise. So I pass the baton to you to write one with Imlie dominating Aryan - uss din bed pe push karne ke baad everyone's imagination has been overactive 🤣🤣