Arylie FF: Full circle, Chapter 21, note updated on Pg 94 - Page 39

So, truth has come out, it is good actually. As you have written, past must be left behind.

Aditya has so many questions for Malini as he should , I can't even fathom the betrayal and hurt he underwent because of Malini.

Imlie had come out of her pain, now it looks like Aryan and Aditya will too.

I just love this story!! I love how you are showing the characters! Adi was really a favorite character in the show for me, he was a man whose life completely turned upside down. He believed in order, hard work and simple uncomplicated life (with the excepting of MIL ANU) and after going to PD everything changed for him. I know everyone is hating him now, but I feel like this character was taken into this track so ASR can come in, since GM had decided to leave. I don't think he was really jealous of Imlie's success, just the timing of everything was bad. He was already down and hurt and on top of that he was being fed lies. But at the current show track I am loving Arylie, but really do miss the original Adilie (wish there were more FF on them). So, seeing that your story will at least bring some of the OG AKT back makes me happy. The show completely ruined that character. I also love that Imlie is so successful in her own way and Aryan is still such a strong pillar for her. I only hope the show will also show a similar relationship between them, where thing will slowly work out. I just hope when Arvind's story comes out Imlie won't misunderstand Aryan, but actually think through it.
Anyways I am done with my babble! I hope you continue to write this beautifully, looking forward to the next chapters!!!

Res!

Will read this tonight...🤗

This was so good....🤗

It was a fine piece if writing... Never want it to end..

Have to come out to react on it...👏👏

Read the unedited version and the dark dominance in Aryan was beautifully written... I so want the TV Aryan to be like him......

Love to read more from you 😍😍...

Reserving because I know if I read this now, ain't nobody gonna work no more.

Back for comments later!!❤️

I'm back because really, I cant wait anymore. Kaam jaaye bhaad mein.

CHAPTER 13 is HEEEEEERE!!!! How long I have waited for this! (10 days to be exact 😆). And it does not disappoint!

The whole confrontation build up was INTENSE!

I loved how realistic Aryan's reactions were. I felt what he was feeling, whether it was anger, sadness, pain, relief. Such a curious mixture when you feel like you are on the precipice of something better but you have to let go of the known and jump into the valley with nothing but faith to carry you. (much like Aru carried Imlie for hanky panky time 🤣). Please, dont throw chappals at me. High heels only.

(sanskaari people please stop reading here)

The rest of the night was fiiiiiiire! Every time I read it (and believe me, its more times than the fingers on one hand), my reactions are the same. Which is barely managing to hold on while also self combusting.

A darker Aru speaks to every pyaasi. He can be erotically raw and charged yet entirely trustworthy at the same time.

Originally posted by: egle

I'm back because really, I cant wait anymore. Kaam jaaye bhaad mein.

CHAPTER 13 is HEEEEEERE!!!! How long I have waited for this! (10 days to be exact 😆). And it does not disappoint!

The whole confrontation build up was INTENSE!

I loved how realistic Aryan's reactions were. I felt what he was feeling, whether it was anger, sadness, pain, relief. Such a curious mixture when you feel like you are on the precipice of something better but you have to let go of the known and jump into the valley with nothing but faith to carry you. (much like Aru carried Imlie for hanky panky time 🤣). Please, dont throw chappals at me. High heels only.

(sanskaari people please stop reading here)

The rest of the night was fiiiiiiire! Every time I read it (and believe me, its more times than the fingers on one hand), my reactions are the same. Which is barely managing to hold on while also self combusting.

A darker Aru speaks to every pyaasi. He can be erotically raw and charged yet entirely trustworthy at the same time.

Okay, so was it really 10 days between chapters? I guess because of the TS in between...pata nahi. Glad you liked this one. The unedited version is a treat for people who like that kind of stuff, of course. Thanks for actually commenting. The number of people that actually view the story to the number of people who comment is always low for all writers. So it is nice to have regular commenters like you who take the time to write. All of us, want our readers to feel what the characters are feeling, so I am glad you were able to feel the range of emotions Aryan goes through in the story. He has had years to ponder this, years to visualize this confrontation but when the rubber hits the road, reality can be vastly different than imagination, na? Thanks, egle! 🤗

to quote your comment to @potterhead

You're no Aryan and I'm no Imlie. Udhaar kahe ka? 🤣🤣

Originally posted by: egle

to quote your comment to @potterhead

You're no Aryan and I'm no Imlie. Udhaar kahe ka? 🤣🤣

Yes, yes, yes.

How does that feel, @mltr16?

Originally posted by: Potterhead3009

Yes, yes, yes.

How does that feel, @mltr16?

Because I forgot to tag you