Arylie FF: Full circle, Chapter 21, note updated on Pg 94 - Page 41

Originally posted by: happiness1

The long awaited confrontation! The tension in the air of the library was written in such a way that it made me feel like a spectator sitting in the room!

Finally the truth is out and the feelings spoken about. Loved that you addressed the fact about ASR didn't use Imlie as part of the revenge.

Feeling the raw emotions Aryan was going through was really well written and described.

🥵🥵 Oh the intimacy that followed. The need to let out the "frustration" that had been bottled up over the years and let out his "feelings" was well written!😶‍🌫️😶‍🌫️

Amazing as always!

Thanks for your comment, Happiness1. I am so glad you liked it. I always worry that my stories tend to be long. I am just glad that it gripped you enough to feel like a spectator. I think that is exactly what every writer is striving for! 🤗🤗

Originally posted by: mltr16

Thanks, Potts!! Coming from you that compliment means a lot. And no, while I can suggest a lot of things on our scene-by-scene thread. I think this was it for me. No more 18+ stories 😃.....I think. Unless my muse who seems to be just as besotted with Aryan and just as naughty as the rest of the pyaasis on that thread decides otherwise. So I pass the baton to you to write one with Imlie dominating Aryan - uss din bed pe push karne ke baad everyone's imagination has been overactive 🤣🤣

Yep and I'll make sure to carry this noble work ahead and give a dominating Imlie 🤣

No more 18+ stories ??🥺 Not even when there's a scene on screen that might give you that "halka sa push" quoting Sundari

Originally posted by: Potterhead3009

Yep and I'll make sure to carry this noble work ahead and give a dominating Imlie 🤣

No more 18+ stories ??🥺 Not even when there's a scene on screen that might give you that "halka sa push" quoting Sundari

It's ok 🤣

We'll carry on with her legacy and take it to new heights... 🤭🤭

If she's not writing 18+ my editor duty reduced to assistant and advisor so more time 😜

Originally posted by: Potterhead3009

Yep and I'll make sure to carry this noble work ahead and give a dominating Imlie 🤣

No more 18+ stories ??🥺 Not even when there's a scene on screen that might give you that "halka sa push" quoting Sundari

Depends on my muse, girrrl!! Right now, he/she seems exhausted. Are muses always assumed to be a woman? 🤔

Originally posted by: Juwii29

I love how Adi felt so confident and then when it all turned on him. Imlie was like I didn’t know but then I found out. And he was just like …..tf 😂😂😂 now that’s what you call a relationship. You tell the good and bad.

Ahem the ending. This one I was like awwww since I read half asleep. The unedited version…holy. That WOKE me up 😂😂😂 🌶🥵🔥

🤣🤣🤣🤣Chalo....For a moment there, I was thinking, ye le, itna sab likhke she is just awwwwwing!

Originally posted by: mltr16

🤣🤣🤣🤣Chalo....For a moment there, I was thinking, ye le, itna sab likhke she is just awwwwwing!

Originally posted by: nmurali

OOOhhhhhh, Uuuuuffffff!

Oh mamma, this is too hot too handle. I mean Wow! Wow!

Also, regarding Aditya, I am happy that he did not start his vitriolic tirade against these two but handled it much more maturely. So now he will confront Malini, go to rehab and hopefully come out with some understanding of where he went wrong and hopefully move on as well.

Really good piece. 😘

I just saw this. I don't think IF notifies people on edits. Glad to have satisfied 3 of the few known members of the #pyaasigang. Yes, all clean chapters coming up on Neel and Aditya's separate but continued journey. Arylie with them.

Originally posted by: Sheldon-Cooperr

This story messes up with my emotions. I have clear cut view that I hate Aditya. But your story shows a same but different Aditya.

"He felt so empty, he have nothing to give anyone,anymore" these lines make me see all his sufferings and sympathize with him.😭

Neel's yearning for his father's love is heart-breaking. I really want a happy ending for this child. He is such a cutie. His interactions with Aryan were soo adorable.

Finally Mr. Patrakar is asking questions. Lets see what his reaction will be to the answers.

@SheldonCooperr: I love Neel's dynamic with every character in the story. He is just so wide open and trusting. He is all about giving love and getting love. Wonder who he gets that attribute from? More sweet Neel to come in the upcoming stories. 🤗

Originally posted by: Hasina98

I just love this story!! I love how you are showing the characters! Adi was really a favorite character in the show for me, he was a man whose life completely turned upside down. He believed in order, hard work and simple uncomplicated life (with the excepting of MIL ANU) and after going to PD everything changed for him. I know everyone is hating him now, but I feel like this character was taken into this track so ASR can come in, since GM had decided to leave. I don't think he was really jealous of Imlie's success, just the timing of everything was bad. He was already down and hurt and on top of that he was being fed lies. But at the current show track I am loving Arylie, but really do miss the original Adilie (wish there were more FF on them). So, seeing that your story will at least bring some of the OG AKT back makes me happy. The show completely ruined that character. I also love that Imlie is so successful in her own way and Aryan is still such a strong pillar for her. I only hope the show will also show a similar relationship between them, where thing will slowly work out. I just hope when Arvind's story comes out Imlie won't misunderstand Aryan, but actually think through it.
Anyways I am done with my babble! I hope you continue to write this beautifully, looking forward to the next chapters!!!

Hasina! Thanks for commenting. I think I had seen you react but this may be the first time you've shared your thoughts. I know, CVs totally butchered him to make way for GM's exit and ASR's elevation to male lead. Don't get me wrong, I prefer Imlie with Aryan than with AKT. But it could have been handled better without making him such an asinine moron. Before, AKT was always proud of Imlie's successes. Now his vision is colored with jealousy and the lies Malini has fed him. Adi will get his own ending. Hopefully not a bad one.

I wanted Imlie to be more mature and not such an impulsive teenager, So thank god she is 25ish in this story. I would not be able to write Imlie the way she is right now because I just cannot stand the 180s she does every other day. Next chapter will be up Tuesday next week. Till then...🤗 and do please keep sharing your thoughts. They are important to me. Work pressures keep me from writing back to you immediately but I will eventually get back to you, I promise. 😃

Originally posted by: mahiaana

Res!

Will read this tonight...🤗

Mahiaana, kahaan ho tum??

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