LOVE WILL FIND A WAY (part 8pg 18) - Page 9

Originally posted by: Radhi12

Really nice update.

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let me correct you 'it's our story' okay😊😊 ideabhale mera ho...likh tu rahi hai😊😊

the part was very well written👍👍👍well explained

just perfect🤗🤗🤗

I am happy you liked it ♥️♥️

Yar this story was just love love n love 😍😍😍😍

Love u odette for this amazing piece ...❤️❤️❤️❤️

The way you portrayed the string of love present between both of them was just wow.... 🤩🤩🤩🤩 I just love that scenario ... Jug jug geo r ase amazing stories likhti raho... Cnt wi8 for next part 😍😍😍😍 plz asa kuch add karna k shiva don't want to take her home back bcz of her state... he wanted that They both stop in form house bt ravi felt uncomfortable so he took her some other place n both spend their private time there both roshita n dev left them from form house ...

Originally posted by: aimmyangle

Yar this story was just love love n love 😍😍😍😍

Love u odette for this amazing piece ...❤️❤️❤️❤️

The way you portrayed the string of love present between both of them was just wow.... 🤩🤩🤩🤩 I just love that scenario ... Jug jug geo r ase amazing stories likhti raho... Cnt wi8 for next part 😍😍😍😍 plz asa kuch add karna k shiva don't want to take her home back bcz of her state... he wanted that They both stop in form house bt ravi felt uncomfortable so he took her some other place n both spend their private time there both roshita n dev left them from form house ...

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PART-Vll

(Includes some offensive and degraded thinking of society)

"Shiva.....please chale ....... "

Shiva nods and help her to move. Raavi was feeling very dizzy and stingy due to alcohol on her. Four of them sat in the car.Raavi looks at shiva and says inspecting him,

"Shiva tu gir gaya tha na bike se..... Tujhe chot toh nahi laggi na......"

Shiva looks at her lovingly as how after all this happened to her she is still worried for him. He cups her face and says,

"Main theek hoon........ Tu aaram kar"

Saying this shiva held her close to him and soon raavi leans in and rests.They reach home and Shiva picks her up and takes her inside and puts her on cot in aangan and other people panicked deshita told them the whole situation and suman was offended and says,

"Raavi ko uss ladke ne chua aur iske kapde itne jyada kharab ho chuke hai sharab ki badbu aa rahi hai........

Tum log ise vapas kio le kar aaye ho....... Yeh ladki abb saaf nahi hai.......... Tum log kio lekar aaye ise....... Mere bete ki biwi ik dum pavitr honi chahiye.....hamare ghar ki ijjat ka kya.............pata nahi uss ladke ne kya kiya hoga iss ke saath..........."

Shiva looked at Raavi and Raavi was just looking down with tears and shiva says in anger,

"Maa........ Kya bol rahi hai tu"

Raavi flinches listening shiva's tone and rishita signs shiva to take raavi and meanwhile she controlled suman and let Shivi have there time.

Shiva takes her inside the room with anger for his mother and care and love for his wife. He wanted to retort suman but at this point of time handling raavi is more important. He places her on bed and Raavi looks at shiva and averts her gaze and Shiva tries to hug her but she stops him and says without meeting her eyes,

"Shiva main bhut gandi ho chuki hoon...... Please abhi mere paas mat aa.........tu bhi ganda ho jayega.... "

Shiva looks at her and says,

"Kya soch rahi hai Raavi...... Meri taraf dekh pehle.... "

Raavi was not able to meet his eyes as she was feeling so dirty and was feeling unworthy for shiva. And tears made there way out of her eyes and says still head lowered down,

"Shiva....... Mujhe.... Bhut ganda feel ho raha hai......... Kaki sahi keh rahi hai......... Tu mujhe lekar kyun aaya.........main tere layak nahi rahi..........."

She stands up and tries to move and Shiva immediately hugs her from back and she wriggles and says,

"Mujhe chod tu bhi ganda ho jayega..... Please.........paas mat aa........please.......mujhse badbu aa rahi hai please........"

Shiva lets her calm down and after sometime she calms down and her sobs become audible. Shiva holds her tightly and says calmly,

"Raavi shant ho ja.,........ Bacha kuch bhi nahi huya hai.........tu mere saath hai......dekh toh sahi......."

Raavi lifts her eyes and she is in front of mirror and look at her reflection and marks were visible on her shoulder of rudra's finger. All the scene flashed before her eyes and she again goes numb and goes out his hold and maintained a distance again and says with lost expression,

"Mujhe change krna hai main jaati hoon.. . .. . .. . . "

Shiva was worried for her as she came out of his hold maintaining distance from him cause of his mother and that bloody rudra she was feeling dirty.But he decided to give her time and let her go and change(here they have attached washroom).

Raavi goes inside the washroom and shiva looks at her and after she goes inside he thought of going and handle her mother. He moves out and saw his mother still blabbering nonsense about Raavi and her purity and shiva shouts,

"Maa............ Tu soch bhi rahi hai kya bol rahi hai.......... "

Sumam says,

"Shiva tu nahi samjhata yeh sab duniyadari ki batein hain.......... Vo ladki abb theek nahi hai tere liye......... tu samjh iss baat ko...... "

Shiva cutts her and says,

"Maa main sab samajh raha hoon.......... Teri wajah se Raavi apne apko ganda samajh rahi hai...."

Suman replies,

"Kio kii vo ho chuki hai gandi..... Ikk paraye mard ne uske saath.... "

Shiva didn't let her complete her sentence and roars,

"Chup ho jaa Maa...... Agar tune kuch aur bola mujhe nahi pata main kya kar dunga..........

Tu bol kaise sakti hain yeh sab......... Meri raavi ke baare mein tu aisa soch bhi kaise sakti hain............... Itna kuch ho gaya usske saath aur tune kaha usse chod aau.......aur vi bhi uske samne.............uski halat toh dekhti..........Iss halat mein jab usse meri sabse jyada jaroorat hain........ tu chahti hai main use chod du............... Aur agar kisi ladke ne uske saath jabardasti ki us mein meri Raavi apavitr kaise ho gayi........ Yeh soch hai maa teri...... "

Suman looks down and shiva says,

"Abb aise niche dekhne se kya ho ga....... Bol maa...... Usse toh tune itni badi baat bol di......... Vo kaise sahegi itna sab........ Vo ikk dum massom hai bacho jaisi hai.... Yeh sab batein uss par kitna gahera asar karengi socha bhi hai tune.......... "

Suman says,

"Main... Main......sharminda hoon..."

Shiva cutts her,

"Mujhe mat bol........ Jise bolna chahiye usse bolna aur sirf ikk baar use apni bahu nahi apni beti samjhna aur phir sochna ki tu kya karti agar teri koii beti hoti toh....... "

Saying this Shiva leaves suman becomes guilt ridden and gaumbi and dhara further handle her. When shiva came inside room, raavi was still not out and water was running continously. He waits for some more time and gets worried as Raavi was in for last 20 minutes. So he slowly knocks the door and says,

"Raavi..... Tu theek toh hai..... "

No answer ,shiva holds the door and found it open he slowly opens and sight in front of him made himself vulnerable, Raavi was in front in the same saree under the shower water continously dripping and she was continously moving her hands in to and fro motion harshly on her arms her shoulder and her chest as if cleaning herself thoroughly. Shiva goes to her and says chokingly as he was himself not able to see her like this,

"Raavi....... "

Raavi looks at him and says harshly rubbing her temple,

"Dekh shiva yeh gandagi nikal hi nahi rahi hai........... Main bhut koshish kar rahi hoon...... Nikal hi nahi rahi hai....... "

Shiva without thinking anything hugged her tightly and slowly pat her back and now raavi was crying badly and squealing,

"Usne mere kandhe par mere gaale par....... Chua mujhe........ Main..... Main......kuch nahi karr payi.........uski ungliyon ke nishan hai shiva har jagah..............plaese inhe hata na please............saaf karde na sab............."

Shiva hugs her more tightly and says,

"Kuch nahi huya hai........ Shant ho jaa........ Meri raavi.... Mera bacha toh bhut strong hai na.......... Aise kyon kar rahi hai fir......... "

Raavi says crying,

"Shiva main tere liye theek nahi rahi....... Kaki mujhe kabhi bhi sweekar nahi karengi...... Tu mujhe chod dega na.......... Kio kii main abb gandi ho chuki hoon...... I am sorry.........please.....sorry...."

Shiva cups her face and slowly turns off the water flow and talks to her like a explaining to a kid,

"Maa ne jo kaha bhut galat kaha aur main abhi unhe dant kar aa raha hoon...... Ki vo meri raavi ko aise nahi bol sakti......... Aur bache main toh kabhi nahi chodunga tujhe........ Aur tu toh itni paak(clean) hai...... . . Iss sab duniya ki buraaiyon se dur hai.. . .. . .. Tu kaise gandi ho sakti hain aur sorry tu kio nol rahi hai .. . .. . .. . Haan.....bol......"

Raavi looks at him with tears in her eyes which had innocence and utmost purity in them she says,

"Main sach mein paak hoon na Shiva...... "

Shiva nods.

"Tujhe sach mein mujhse ghin nahi aa rahi hain...... "

Shiva again nods in a no and Raavi now hugs him tightly and cries loudly and says,

"Maine bhut koshish kii shiva par main kuch nahi karr payi...... Usne mere saath.......... Please shiva mujhe aise hi pakad ke rakh...... Mujhe sirf tera touch feel krna hain........ "

Shiva hugs her tightly both were drenched but at this moment Raavi needed this and Shiva kisses top oh her head. After sometime Raavi says almost whispering,

"Shiva mujhe bhut hi disgusted feel ho raha hai.............mujhe sirf tera touch mehsoos karna hai......."

She brings his hand and keep it on her shoulder.

Shiva understands what she said and he silently carresed her temple and she was simply soothing and than Shiva help her change her clothes and leads her to the bed and tucks her on the bed. Shiva quickly changes his clothes and brongs ointment.

He looks at her arms she has literally scratched herself and bruises were forming and he applies the ointment softly and she murmmurs something in sleep saying,

"I love you shiva..... I am sorry..... Sorry......... "

Shiva just can't get why is she sorry as she has done no mistake and he hugs her and raavi snuggles in him and he looks at the stars visible from his window. And his thought process worked as if stars are telling him a tale.

She is scared......... Look at her shivering little frame..... Bask her in your warmth.....

She has lived a nightmare.......she is feeling disgusted of herself.......Don't let her innocence burn in this inhumane world....... People will blame her.....people will question her but the thing which will break her more is if she sees distrust in your eyes..... Do not let this thought even cross your mind.......... She is pure and her eyes the biggest proof of this....... Before she shatters down anchor her with your support, faith and love.

Shiva after looking at the stars and understanding the tell tale kisses her forehead and lingers there for sometime and engulfs her in his arms and Raavi keeps her head on his chest in the sleep her breathe pattern was matching his heart beat and Shiva just looks at her and gives a quick prayer to god and thinks why she is so innocent god. Her innocence scares me somtimes but i promise that i am here with her.

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Oh my God people like Suman are so vile, society really be blaming the victim man it’s so shameful.

So glad Raavi has Shiva and hopefully other Pandyas to support her through this traumatic time, my heart broke at how she took what everyone said and thought she was impure 😡🥺😭

I love that your stories contain such important lessons and situations makes it very raw and real ❤️

Originally posted by: Kristmas

Oh my God people like Suman are so vile, society really be blaming the victim man it’s so shameful.

So glad Raavi has Shiva and hopefully other Pandyas to support her through this traumatic time, my heart broke at how she took what everyone said and thought she was impure 😡🥺😭

I love that your stories contain such important lessons and situations makes it very raw and real ❤️