Arylie FF: Full circle, Chapter 21, note updated on Pg 94 - Page 33

Great update snd i like the realistic approach of yours to aditiya great job there ❣️

I feel so sad for aditya , but this is the perfect example that one should have control on words which we speak and anger. We usually see when we r in anger we don't know what we r speaking but the impact on other person is very very strong. This we can learn from aditya.

But he is very very good and principled person. I wish he wouldn't changed this must.😔

Last but least u r a very good writer I must say. Keep going and entertain us like this😘😘.

Makes sense to me! You've done a wonderful job getting into everyone's headspace.

Full disclosure : I love Gashmeer as Aditya.

Fuller disclosure : bheja fried so no essay.

M! You brought the cognitive skillset of introspection to Aditya! Canonical Aditya is such a transient man that he never developed those skillsets. How I wish the show would have shown Aditya's journey from a victim to being survivor!

Gashmeer would have nailed those breakdowns and epiphanies so damn much.

Man, but Imlie needs to stop acting as the resident therapist for the Ts, if only because she needs therapy the most to gain a sense of self devoid from that codependent family.

Thank you! Not the Tripathis but she did tell Aditya in the previous part that she did not want to be in on his pity party and that he needed professional help. 😃 As good as it gets for now.

Agree, I would have loved Gashmeer responding to the Voice and showing his torment on screen. He would have been so very good. 😔

Looks really interesting!!!!

This whole series is so beautiful. The home Imlie, Aryan and Rathores have made, the sky Imlie got to fly, the love and respect they both have for each other. I love this all.

The most beautiful part is that you kept every person true to their nature. No one is out of character here. They all are what they actually were always but evolved and mature version of that.

I love Neil and my heart brakes for him💔. Let's see how future actions of Aditya gonna leave consequences for him.

Imlie has come a long way. I specially loved new perspective. She saw what that relation was and was not. Her professional, personal, emotional, sexual( some is still left to be shown) growth is absolute treat to read.

The person I love most is Aryan.❤️ He is so soft, so understanding, so thoughtful, so giving yet demanding at the same time and naughty as well.😉 This is a full package deal Imlie got. Loved how their relationship grew with time in all the beautiful oneshots you wrote. Those glimpse of their past, of their journey.

All of it is really amazing. You really are a fantastic and natural writer with charm in your words. Absolutely loved it all. Waiting for your next update.

Originally posted by: Sheldon-Cooperr

This whole series is so beautiful. The home Imlie, Aryan and Rathores have made, the sky Imlie got to fly, the love and respect they both have for each other. I love this all.

The most beautiful part is that you kept every person true to their nature. No one is out of character here. They all are what they actually were always but evolved and mature version of that.

I love Neil and my heart brakes for him💔. Let's see how future actions of Aditya gonna leave consequences for him.

Imlie has come a long way. I specially loved new perspective. She saw what that relation was and was not. Her professional, personal, emotional, sexual( some is still left to be shown) growth is absolute treat to read.

The person I love most is Aryan.❤️ He is so soft, so understanding, so thoughtful, so giving yet demanding at the same time and naughty as well.😉 This is a full package deal Imlie got. Loved how their relationship grew with time in all the beautiful oneshots you wrote. Those glimpse of their past, of their journey.

All of it is really amazing. You really are a fantastic and natural writer with charm in your words. Absolutely loved it all. Waiting for your next update.

Thanks @SheldonCooperr, I almost wrote you to ask about your pace reacting to the chapters 🤣🤣 Where are my comments? I almost wrote 😃

What a wonderful comment! I am so very glad you like the mature versions that I have been attempting portray in these stories. More to come this week and next. Stay tuned!! 🤗

Originally posted by: mltr16

Thanks @SheldonCooperr, I almost wrote you to ask about your pace reacting to the chapters 🤣🤣 Where are my comments? I almost wrote 😃

What a wonderful comment! I am so very glad you like the mature versions that I have been attempting portray in these stories. More to come this week and next. Stay tuned!! 🤗

@bold

I was thinking of doing every parts comment seprately but then realized its you who have gift of words not me. I lost my full vocab in one comment only🤣

I'm always tuned for these treats.Always😈

I'm just so in love with your ff's ❤️

I just cannot stop reading them!! They are so well written!!

Really great work🙇🏻‍♀️🙇🏻‍♀️💯💯💯