Musical Yearnings( Completed) - Page 10

Originally posted by: Odette_delusion

Author's note:

Hey guys.........

I am sorry to say that i won't be able to continue this story as i think continuing this would not sustain it's essence......

I have tried i a lot of layouts but nothing worked..........

So i would be leaving it here only......

Originally posted by: VaishnaviG

Aree sorry kyu bol rahi it happens 🤗

Well, I know I'm late, but here are my comments on this fic...

Part 1:

Loved how Shivi didn't need words to understand each other. Neither of them wish to be away from the other for any period of time, and both of them know it... ❤️

Part 2:

Ahh, the sweetness! They start off as absolute cutie pies, talking at the same time, and then they progress to lovers sneaking behind a sleeping world, and finally to a married couple with a wife who wishes to give as much as she receives from her husband.... Absolutely loved it!

Part 3:

Sweet, sweet Raavi has been quick to blame here. But, when we fly high on our emotions and we know already how it feels to fall? Although an exaggerated reaction, it is to some extent understandable why her mind went there. Especially considering the fact that he's never explained to her that he told Disha to stay away, told his mother he didn't want that marriage, that he never really liked Disha.

Again, you've captured Raavi's emotions beautifully! ❤️

Part 4:

Again, wonderfully written emotions! Raavi is in pain, afraid and feels insecure of her position in her husband's life. Her doubt is valid, that everything he did was because Dhara asked him to, because he never told her otherwise!

But now, after finally receiving Shiva explanations, and being assured of her place in his life, she gives in to him completely. No more protest, no more pushing him away and letting him push her away.

Thanks pottermeow🥰🥰

It was really a great gesture..........

Thanks for reading and appreciating my work❣️❣️

Part 5:

The song you've used to write this part is a favorite! Wanting physical assurance is a very human thing, and it felt great to see Raavi cherished as she deserves to be!

PS Read your note about how you're stopping this fic due to a bit of a writer's block. This story's been a great one so far, and you've stopped it at a beautiful point! If it's ever supposed to have another part, it'll come to you, you know? Till then, loved this! ❤️

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Part 5:

The song you've used to write this part is a favorite! Wanting physical assurance is a very human thing, and it felt great to see Raavi cherished as she deserves to be!

PS Read your note about how you're stopping this fic due to a bit of a writer's block. This story's been a great one so far, and you've stopped it at a beautiful point! If it's ever supposed to have another part, it'll come to you, you know? Till then, loved this! ❤️

Surely if i will get some idea i will add it in the story.............

Thanks for acknowledging my work 😘

Lots of love your way❣️❣️

Oh my god where was this piece 😍😍😍

Chalo der aaye durust aayi

This is so so beautiful i was smiling like an idiot while reading this this is so so pyaara💗💗💗💗

Also raavi buying something for shiva that too from her own money ohh my shivi heart😭😭💖💖

Will add more once i read whole