CHAL GHAR CHALEIN (part 7 pg 17) completed - Page 7

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

very sweet update.. looks like this is going the adoption way!

PART-V

(Much needed conversations)

After the kids left with Shiva. Everyone was having a smile on there face. Dhara came and hugged Raavi tightly and expressed her gratitude, she said

"Thank you Raavi, tune itne pyaare bacho se mujhe milvaya....... Main toh apne gham mein itna kho gayi ki tum logon dekha hi nahi.......

Gaumbi tkk ko nahi dekha....... "

Some tears made there way out and Raavi cleared the tears cupping her face and said,

"Abhi toh aapki smile wapas aayi hai phir bhej rahe ho use vapas main na ronak aur nishant ko complaint kar dungi...... Samjhe aap............. "

Both chuckled and everyone retired to their rooms.

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IN GAURA'S ROOM,

Dhara was sitting on the bed in reverie of her thoughts when gaumbi entered and sit near her.

Dhara looked at Gaumbi and hold his hand and said,

"Gaumbi hamara baby....... "

Gaumbi also had tears as they haven't talked about it before cause dhara has stopped talking to him and now she finally spoke. He replied,

"Dhara bohot koshish kii...... Par kuch nahi ho paya....... Humne apne baby ko kho diya......... "

Gaumbi was crying and now dhara came to know that she wasn't the one who was affected alone but Gaumbi was also equally affected. Everyone in the house has tried to comfort her but gaumbi....

She made him lie his head on her lap and caressed his hairs and said tears threatening to come out of her eyes,

"Gaumbi......... Hum kafi sapne dekhte hain....... Aur un mein se sab pure nahi hote.......... Ajj inn dono bacho ko dekh kar pata chala kii sirf humari life mein dukh nahi hai..... Inn bacho ne kitni chotti umar mein apne maa baap ko kho diya....... Par phir bhi khush hai........ Humne apne bache ko khoya hum khush rehne ki koshish to kar sakte hain..... Apne 3 bandaron ke liye aur 2 pyaari bachiyon ke liye.........

Main apne dukh mein itna beh gayi kii kuch dekh hi nahi payi......... Itna kaise ghum gayi main Gaumbi...... "

Gaumbi while lying on her lap hugged her belly and carresed her belly and said,

"Hamara bacha dhara..... Tujhe pata hai main kitna kuch tha ki finally mujhe bhi koii papa bolega.......main na use sare somnaath mein ghumata.......naye naye khilone..kapede.......... Par vo nahi ho paya..... Aur jab apne bache ko khone ke baad maine tujhe khote huye dekha na toh main bhut hi daar gaya tha.......... Dhara agar tu mujhse dur ho gayi na toh main jee nahi paunga.............. "

Dhara lies down next to him and hugs him and says,

"Main toh hamesha tumhare paas hu......... Agar kahin kabhi ghum ho jau na toh mera haath mat chodna ........"

Gaumbi says holding her hand,

"Dhara....... Hume apni khushiyaan jaroor milengi........ Aur tu dekhna hamare yeh jo bache hain na vo hum fono ko bhut pyaar karte hain.. . .. . . Hamare liye kuch bhi kar sakte hain.. . .. . Humse lucky aur kon hoga.. . .. . . "

Both smile and sleep after all from last 2 weeks they haven't slept in peace.

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IN SHIVI'S ROOM,

Shiva was waiting for Raavi to come inside the room as he wanted to thank her, hug ber but she was busy in kitchen. Everyone has retired to there rooms and only she was the onE who was doing work he thought,

"Sab log apne apne kamre mein aa gaye hain..........Aur ikk taraf meri biwi hai jo sara din kaam kaam kaam kaam meri taraf dekhti hi nahi hai.............. "

Just than Raavi enters inside hurridely as she was late from the kitchen and started fidgeting with clothes inside the cupboard. Shiva came near her and hugged her from behind and whispers,

"Thank you Raavi sab kuch ke liye........ Tera idea bhut hi acha tha...... Bhabhi ajj kitna khush thi..... Kitne tym baad gaumbi smile karr rahe the.......... Tune sari problem hi solve kardi........ I love you.... "

Raavi smiles and says,

"I love you too..... Abb main jau change karna hain...... "

She leaves. Shiva was in the room thinking about happeningd in last few days. He thinks of Raavi and her past she has, never mentioned it to him. He wanted to talk to her, he was lying on his side of bed and Raavi comes and sits beside him Shiva holds her hand and rest his face on her hand she starts rubbing her thumb softly on his cheek and Shiva says,.

"Raavi ikkk baat puchu...... "

"Haa bol.... "

"Raavi, maine tujhse kabhi pucha nahi........ Uss din jab hum orphanage se vapas aaye the tab bhi nahi.......... Par ajj puchna chahta hoon jaanana chahta hoon......... "

"Shiva seedha seedha bol na..... "

"Raavi...... Tune kabhi bhi apne parents ke bare mein nahi bataya kabhi nahi batayi ki ti unhe miss karti hai ya nahi... "

As Shiva spoke this Raavi's thumb stopped gracing his cheek she felt uneasy and she cutt him in between and says,

"Bhut raat ho gayi hain Shiva...... So jate hain....... "

She removed her hand immediately and turned Shiva woke up and looked at her and hugs her from behind and says,

"Raavi mujhe nahi batayegi toh kise batayegi......... Mujhe pata hai tu iss topic ko avoid karti hain..... Par tu hi kehti hain na ki tu baat karni se dil halka hota hai...... Aur tune toh kitne saalon se yeh sambhal kar rakha hai....... Ajj bol le dil halka ho jayega........ "

She looks at Shiva and Shiva holds her hands in his firmly and Raavi's tears on brim of her eyes and she says choking,

"Shiva........ Tu sach mein sunega na.......... "

Shiva nods in a yes Raavi remains silent and lowers her head. shiva cups her face and says,

"Bol jo bhi hai tere man mein....... Mujhe sunna hai......... "

Raavi finally speaks keeping her head on their intwined hands and says,

"Kisi ne mujhse kabhi pucha hi nahi....... Ki mujhe kaisa lagta hain......... Tu sunna chahta hain meri feelings......... "

Shiva keeps her head on his lap and made her lay comfortably and he started pacing his hand to and fro on her back to comfort her and she says,

"Main na 9 saal ki thi Shiva........ikk din mom dad mujhe kehkar gaye ki hum aate hain.. . .. . .. . Unhone mujhe ghar mein lock kar diya taki koii aa na sake aur vo log chale gaye.. . .. . . Main unka wait karti rahi 2 ghante 4 ghante 5 ghante aur fir 5 din.. . .. . .. Vo log vapas nahi aaye.. . .. . .. Main panch din ghar mein band rahi.. . .. Bina kahaye peeye.. . .. . .. . .. Sirf 9 saal ki thi main.. . .. . .. . Rooti rahi mujhe kholo.. . .. . Open the gate.. . Mumma papa vapas aao par vo nahi aaye.. . .. . .. Raat ko andhere mein main akeli hoti thi.. . .. . .. . Daar jati thi ki koii mujhe dekh raha hai.. . .. . Issi liye main aaj bhi andhere se darti hoon.. . .. . .. . Panchve din massi maa aur mausa paa aaye aur mujhe lekar aa gaye.. . .. . . Maine unse pucha ki mom dad kahan hai par unhone mujhe kuch nahi bataya.. . .. . .. . . Maine ikk din massi maa aur mausa paa ko baat karte huye sune kii mumma papa duniya chod kar Raavi ko chod kar chale gaye hain.. . .. . . Mujhe nahi pata tha ki iss sab ka kya matlab hain.. . . Kaise pata hoga main bhut chotti thi.. . .. . .. . Mujhe gussa aa gya ki mom dad mujhe chod kar chale gaye.. . .. . "

She still her head on his lap moving her hand writing in the air and spoke, spoke,

"Main na drawings banati thi yeh likh ki.. . .. . . Raavi hates mumma papa.. . . .. . .. . . Main ittu si thi tab maine socha main bilkul bhi nahi roungi.. . .. . .. .tu soch sakta hain Shiva ikk chottu c bachi ne yeh decision le liye... . .. . . Tab maine pehli baar diary likhna shuru kiya.. . .. Mujhe toh ache se likhna bhi nahi aata tha.. . .. . . Par maine likha kio kii mujhe kisi baat karni thi.. . .. . . "

She takes a deep breathe she was choking and shivering,

"Vo akelapan vo andhera na Shiva ajj bhi yaad hai mujhe.........

Vo 8 saal ki Raavi abhi bhi ikk kone mein sehmkar baithi huyi hai...... "

She wakes up from his lap and hold his hand and says,

"Yeh ronak aur nishant na mujhe ikk dum mere jaise lage........ Uss din jab maine inhe pehli baar dekha na dono chup se the ikk dum 9 saal ki raavi ki tarah...... Maine unhe vese handle kiya jo ki main chahti thi ki koii mujhe aise handle kare....... Aur dekh unn dono ne mujhe apni diidii maan liya....... Unn dono ko hasta dekh kar na mera man bhi bhut khush hota hai........ "

Shiva cups her face and she says,

"Shiva main tujhse bhut pyaar karti hoon....... Janti hoon tu bhi karta hain...... Par na ikk baat bataun Shiva maan mein hamesha ikk daar laga rehta hain ki agar tu mujhe chor jayega...... Toh.... Main kya.... "

Before she could complete Shiva hugged her immediately. Raavi also reciprocated and shiva kissed top of her head and said,

"Tujhe kabhi nahi chodunga Raavi............ Tujhe kho dunga na toh yeh Shiva pandya kahinka nahi rahega.......... Tu jaroori hai kere liye....... Mere jeene ke liye.........

Samjhi......... Ajj ke baad kabhi mat sochna yeh....... Please.......

Main tujhse bhut pyaar karta hoon Raavi......... Bhut jyada aur tujhse vaada karta hoon ki tujhe firse vapas uss akelepan mein nahi jaane dunga...... "

Raavi breaks the hug and forwards her hand and says innocently,

"Promise....... "

Shiva smiles at her innocence and grabs her hand and says,

"Paaka wala promise....... "

Both hug each other and slept that night.

I know you have gone through a lot and there will be more such instances in future to but trust me the difference between than and now would be that i will be tgere standing by your side holding your hand tight enough that if you would try to jerk it off i will stand like rock solid.

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Sorry for being late guys.. . .. . .

Thanks for coming here guys,

I have wrote this guys because in my point of view the talk between gaura was much needed as gaura has never talked about there loss. Dhara has excused gaumbi and afterwards accepted his sorry as she came to know about ivf.. . .. .

But seriously if you can get another baby how can you not talk about your past loss.

Hope so you like it.......

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It was awesome!!!

Loved it❤❤❤

This was emotional🥺

My poor baby gal😭

Loved this one though it made me teary eyed🤗

Originally posted by: Paru95

This was emotional🥺

My poor baby gal😭

Loved this one though it made me teary eyed🤗

Originally posted by: Radhi12

Great update

That conversation between Gaura was an absolute necessity on the show! Just because you have tentative hope of a new joy, you cannot forget past grief. That simply isn't human nature....

As for the Shivi part, Raavi has lost so much, has been through pain that has never quite left her because she's never talked about it, so this release was a much needed one too. Also loved how Shiva persisted when she deflected the topic as a kind of instinctive reaction, but wasn't too forceful either. ❤️

Loved the update 💖

Finally the much needed conversations which we always wanted to see the show💗

and raavi fear is so well written 💯💜and loved how shiva initiated the talk 😍