Possessed - (pt 15 climax on pg 10) - Page 3

Originally posted by: Aniash

You are welcome dear

Tejo is the reason u don't feel like watching the show now

I was annoyed.

So yesterday after work i wrote pt one and two

Today off coz of booster jab pfizee three.

Have u rcvd urs???

U better becareful . Omricon in Mumbai is flaring.

Get the third jab if u haven't.

Will increase immunity.

I wrote pt three and four in the afternoon.

Didn't cook dinner.

Arm was like heavy and soreness at jab area.

Today ordered thosa from home delivery online.

After dinner , will continue pt five . Will try six as well.

its trp dear for which they are butchering every characters. At one time we didn't like every character in ud at their bad phase, i guess they spared only few side characters like buzo, simmi, gippy, maami, or else we cursed everyone in this show. sabka turn ayega now must tejo's turn giving despo glances to her cheater ex husband and trying to fix her evil sis, on the peak of mahaanta. instead they should have written character wisely then they shouldn't have bring many more new characters. but woh sudharne wale nahi all virk and sandhu must be now celebrating makarsankranti as if nothing happened.😆

not received booster yet.

thanks for writing even having pain and take your time to write next when you feel better.

Part 5

Mihika finished her coffee and went to bed. She needed to execute her plan the next morning. She had three days left in hand.

The first day was spent with family as she missed hers and she didn't want anyone to be suspicious of her presence taking over Tejo's place.

The next morning, she rang the principal stating she wanted off for the week as she was not well. She had to take few matters in hand first. The person she wanted to meet was her family lawyer and a well known business man, Mr.Ashok Chabra who lived alone in Chandigarh. He was a retiree and a widower. He never had kids.

Mr ashok usually spend three hours in the mornings at a welfare home entertaining kids and only returned at noon. In the evenings he would keep himself busy in a golf club with some friends. Initially , he resided in Hoshiarpur in her neighborhood but after her dad who was his childhood and close friend surrendered to death, he was devastated and decided to move away. He had some relatives living in Chandigarh as well.

She took off at 6am by road in a hired taxi before the rest of the family woke, texting her father(rupi) that she was sent to next village for NGO work by the college. She forgot to inform them the previous nite.

4 hrs later ( 10 am ), Chandigarh

She sneaked into the lawyer's house and left two letters written in her very own handwriting .He would understand at once that it was hers. The first letter was addressed to him and the second to another individual. She explained all details and her plan in the first letter itself. The second was a little personal. She instructed him to pass it to the individual when the right time came

Mr. Ashok was extremely left shocked to see Mihika's handwriting that he sank into his study chair. His fingers shivered as he read the note. He couldn't control his tears. Mihika connected to him after death He had known her since she was a kid. It was Mihika's language . He knew it the moment his eyes caught the first words

Coach

She gave him that title since ages as he taught her martial arts when she was hardly twelve. She was a black belt achiever by seventeen . She was good in studies and sports An active , intelligent young woman with a great appetite. Thanks to him for being her mentor guiding her from childhood towards a successful career life.

She was blessed to have him and he was fond of her as well. He treated her as his own daughter. Her death tore him into pieces. When Pooja rang him the very few hours after she(Mihika)was gone forever that she suspected Risha and Dev in a relationship, he didn't waste a single second and rushed towards Hoshiarpur to fight for her justice.

He had contacts in crime branch departments and executed a detailed research into her death.The cctv cameras of Mihika's bungalow were not working but Pooja had captured some snaps and videos of the duo in a dine in together few days before the tragedy when Mihika was on a business trip and their conversation was recorded. They were discussing about a plan.

He didn't stop till the culprits were charged and immediately returned to Chandigarh after receiving numerous calls from the welfare home. The kids were missing their coach .

As soon as he finished reading, he executed her plan and obeyed her instructions instantly. She wanted to save another woman punishing those who did wrong to her and he was all in to fulfill her last wishes.

He made few phone calls to the banks and government agencies

To be continued

(Pt 6 updated below)

Part 6

The same day at 2 pm

Virks were taken by surprise while having lunch when the Land department officers arrived at their front entrance stating that their property was to be sealed till the taxes were settled fully. Kushveer apparently didn't pay the taxes for two years in a row. Apart from that even the academy taxes were not settled over the years when it was going through loses.

The officers were firm and handed over the court order to seal the house and the academy. Virks had no choice but to obey. Kushveer rang his lawyer but he was not picking his calls.

Within the next hour , virks were on footpath . Fateh was nowhere seen. He left to the academy in the morning to check on some defected sports equipments but still didn't return . His phone was switched off. Fateh was kidnapped by goons and kept as a captive in a deserted garage.

Mihika's first plan executed. Punish the ex husband and his family.

She gave details of tejo's bank account in the letter and mr.ashok had some funds transferred for her use. She had to hire goons. Money was required in her mission.

Her dad made a will before his last breath that majority assests and funds to be utilised for charity purposes as building a hospital and a school for the needy, He consulted Mihika and she gave her consensus. Both father and daughter were fond of helping others and Risha was annoyed. The both sisters had funds transferred to their accounts with Mihika receiving triple amounts. She was her father's favourite and obedient daughter. The Hoshiarpur bungalow was gifted to her and the Ambala residence ( a condominium) to Risha.

That's where sisterly rivalry started. Mihika was willing to even give away her shares. All she longed for was her sister's love after losing both parents.

Mihika lived a lavish life in a few months of marriage with husband , Dev Vyas who cheated her behind her back with her sister and was also after her money. The duo planned her murder for not one but two reasons. Love and property. Fortunately before they could do anything mr. Ashok freezed Mihika's accounts as soon as Pooja , her ex schoolmate rang him and exposed the evil sister and husband.

The power of attorney for all assests and funds were handed over to the family lawyer and good friend, Ashok Chabra to handle everything after his( Ajay) demise. Both girls were young and required guidance. Ajay Chauhan gave the responsibility to his fellow trustable childhood friend.

She wanted to punish sandhus as even they didn't settle their past property taxes and did wrong to tejo but spared them coz of one person that she adored dearly, Sati. A mother figure that she lost twenty two years back. Sati's love made her weak and she instructed the lawyer to spare the family. Her wish was granted and only Virks were in trouble.

2pm in a deserted garage.

He screamed in anguish pain as a woman dressed in full black with a covered face just like a ninja ambushed him with flying kicks and karate stunts. He was beaten badly. He asked her why are u doing this to which she replied in her own original voice that it was a past payback of hurting a woman's feelings. He was confused

Fateh woke in a hospital ward hours later surrounded by his crying family. He was bruised and suffered from a few fractures.

Her first plan executed and accomplished. Punish the cheater husband and family. Since he turned into a new leaf and repented his mistakes so he should receive only one time beating. That was good enough to teach him a lesson never to betray a woman ever again for the rest of his life

Time was running and she needed to carry out the next step. The shrewd sibling. Jasmin Sandhu. Payback time.

To be continued

(Pt 7 on pg 4)

Originally posted by: Marathi_Mulgi

its trp dear for which they are butchering every characters. At one time we didn't like every character in ud at their bad phase, i guess they spared only few side characters like buzo, simmi, gippy, maami, or else we cursed everyone in this show. sabka turn ayega now must tejo's turn giving despo glances to her cheater ex husband and trying to fix her evil sis, on the peak of mahaanta. instead they should have written character wisely then they shouldn't have bring many more new characters. but woh sudharne wale nahi all virk and sandhu must be now celebrating makarsankranti as if nothing happened.😆

not received booster yet.

thanks for writing even having pain and take your time to write next when you feel better.

They must understand not necessary to butcher character for trp. So many other ways . Audience gets annoyed with character butchering and that will affect trps in long run.

I took pain killer in the afternoon. The pain was better.

Thanks for tagging👍🏼

This was a huge relief from current track. I love Tejo but itni mahaan ban rahi hai bhai ki mujhe dar lag raha hai ki UD universe mein kahi noble prize na mil jaye humari Tejo ko. Moga ki dou anmol parivaar Sandhus and Virks ke beech mein peace baniyi rakhne ke liye.😆

Mihika looks like a bosslady😎 . I just Love her, also can she band bajaofy Jasmine like there is no tomorrow. 😈

I have read you took third jab of vaccine👍🏼. I too had muscle cramps and low grade fever on the following day but all is well now. Take rest and sleep well.

Thank you dear Ani for tagging…🤗

I was going through some stressful times but your FF is my stress buster…❤️

This is ahhhmaaaziiiiing 👏

The inner me + Tejo of your story telling “Payback time for the people who wronged her..”

Part 7

The whole Moga taunted Virks ' tejo ki hai( curse) legi hain' and refused to provide shelter to the distraught family. Nimmo and her husband took off to London a few days ago to meet their son on his birthday and visiting some relatives as well.

They were not aware of the events back home. Babuji strictly told Kushveer not to inform his brother as he was meeting up with his son after a very long time due to some unresolved past misunderstanding . "Let him be happy a while. We put up in a motel till we find a solution.

They didn't have enough money in their bank accounts due to high expenditure on two marriages in a row. First fateh jasmin fake marriage then Simran Buzo's real marriage. On top of that fateh's hospitalization bills. He was in a bad shape. They were puzzled and frustrated. Who was behind all this? There was surely someone plotting against them.

Gurpreet furiously," yeh sab uss Jasmin ney kiya hain".

Kushveer answered angrily," uskey pas itna dimaag nehin hain. Kisi aur ka kaam hain"

Finally Amrik interrupted to check with Sandhus if they could provide a shelter for few days. Kushveer was annoyed. Mahi quietly texted abhiraj spilling the details of the events that took place in the afternoon . Minutes later, his call came in instructing to speak to her grandfather. It was Tejo's biji on the line . She requested them to put up at Sandhus and they agreed with a heavy heart after all the recent misunderstandings. They had no choice.

7pm. At Sandhus residence

She was surprised when Gurpreet came running hugging her tightly and crying.

" Tejo, hum berbaad ho geye".

She pretended to console her but deep inside she was glad. She promised to virks to find out the details of the culprit who took away their one sole shelter. As she walked away towards her room on the first floor she smiled to herself. 'Bear the fruit of ur karma'

An hour later

Virks were shocked with each one's mouth widely opened, watching tejo eating whole heartedly. Six chapatis and two plates of rice with chana sabji. After that three bowls of kheer and four scoops of gulab jamun

Candy was nervous and asked his mother , whispering.

" Yeh tejo aunty hi hain na??Yeh toh mere sey bhi ziada kathi hain".

The rest had the same question in mind.

Tejo's digestion system changed overnight?? Woww!!!

The only one who was over excited was Rupi Sandhu who kept instructing his very much pissed wife to continue providing his beloved daughter more and more food. Sati was worried for tejo's health. She was waiting to trash the irritating husband later on when they were all alone.

Gurpreet to sati in the kitchen , while the latter was washing dishes after dinner.

" Sati, yeh humari hi tejo hain yah koyi aur".

Sati was puzzled, " peta nehin , didi, kaal sey achanak khurak( appetite) bedhgeyi".

Gurpreet worried, " aisa to moti ho jaigi aur fateh bhaag jaiga , kisi aur sey na shadi karle".

Little Dilraj interrupted smiling," arey aunty kahan moti hogi , vo toh karate bhi karti hain".

Gurpreet shocked" kya!". " Sati yeh kya bol raha hain. Tejo aur karate".

Dilraj while showing martial arts stunts, " aur nehin to kya , fufa fufa karti hain aise aise . Vo chinese wala fuk( blow) marney wala style nehin vo desi wala style".

Gurpreet to herself , puzzled " kehin tejo ney fateh ki pitaai toh nehin kardi".

But tejo was a sweet girl. Why would she do that. She loved fateh so she won't raise a hand on him. Who could do this?? Jasmin didnt know martial arts either. Fateh stated in the hospital that it was a tall and slender woman fully covered and he couldn't see her face. She was a skillful fighter. She punished him for the affair that he had with tejo's sister. He bore the fruit of his past betrayal.

1am at Sandhus backyard.

She sat on the grass sipping a hot cup of coffee watching the glittering stars above the sky thinking that her parents would definitely be proud of her .

Everyone was fast asleep. The ladies and kids in the rooms and the gents on the roof top.

Seconds later as she finished her favourite drink and was about to leave to her room which she shared with mahi and simran that nite, her phone rang .

" Mam , we already kidnap the lady . We are now on the way to the location u texted earlier".

She smiled.

" Thank u. Double pay for the good job".

"Once u reach , keep me informed. I will join u guys tmrow ".

The call ended. Second plan executed.

Jasmin was kidnapped .

To be continued

( Pt 8 updated on pg7)

This is pure relief to my tortured soul, having seen such utter crap on the show🤬. The moment they had started showing Fateh's redemption, it was kinda over for me. I mean, really? Fateh is simply a spineless man. When he lived with Tejo he wanted Jasmine, when he was with Jasmine, he wanted Tejo. Galti toh Fateh ka bhi hain, agar uska Canada ka job cancel ho gaya tha, toh use bol dena chahiye tha. Jasmine selfish hain I agree, but, why would she sacrifice her dreams? Fateh agar bol deta na toh yeh khichdi pakti hi nahi. Upar se, Tejo ke saath raat bitake, banda jata hain uske ex ke pass yeh kehna ki woh usse kitna pyar karta hain? Jasmine ne toh yeh nahi kaha tha na ki jake meri behan ke sath so jayo. Aur tejo ki toh baat hi nahi, madam ji ko bhagwan se insaan bana do koi. I can't imagine that she is still in love with that Dumbo, after he had cheated her, shouted on her, even went the way to ask for divorce, even after all these? Angad was the best character, which has been thrown down the gutter. And what's with this thought ki koi ladki shaadi ke bina nahi reh sakti? Tejo could well had moved out Moga, to avoid all these circus of fake marriage. Simply, I am done with this serial.

Originally posted by: Bije2003

This is pure relief to my tortured soul, having seen such utter crap on the show🤬. The moment they had started showing Fateh's redemption, it was kinda over for me. I mean, really? Fateh is simply a spineless man. When he lived with Tejo he wanted Jasmine, when he was with Jasmine, he wanted Tejo. Galti toh Fateh ka bhi hain, agar uska Canada ka job cancel ho gaya tha, toh use bol dena chahiye tha. Jasmine selfish hain I agree, but, why would she sacrifice her dreams? Fateh agar bol deta na toh yeh khichdi pakti hi nahi. Upar se, Tejo ke saath raat bitake, banda jata hain uske ex ke pass yeh kehna ki woh usse kitna pyar karta hain? Jasmine ne toh yeh nahi kaha tha na ki jake meri behan ke sath so jayo. Aur tejo ki toh baat hi nahi, madam ji ko bhagwan se insaan bana do koi. I can't imagine that she is still in love with that Dumbo, after he had cheated her, shouted on her, even went the way to ask for divorce, even after all these? Angad was the best character, which has been thrown down the gutter. And what's with this thought ki koi ladki shaadi ke bina nahi reh sakti? Tejo could well had moved out Moga, to avoid all these circus of fake marriage. Simply, I am done with this serial.

Wait till Mihika punish jasmin. Something out of the blue . Coming near to climax. Three to four parts to go. the second letter surprise as well.

For the show, the less said the better.

The fictions in the forum are more interesting.

Originally posted by: dusk2dawn

Thank you dear Ani for tagging…🤗

I was going through some stressful times but your FF is my stress buster…❤️

This is ahhhmaaaziiiiing 👏

The inner me + Tejo of your story telling “Payback time for the people who wronged her..”

Tbh ur memes are more stress reliefs 🤩🤩

I had the idea last weekend but busy with personal errands. Monday and Tues were hectic. After work on Tuesday, i started writing.

Yesterday was off due to booster jab three.

The soreness was there full day and arm felt heavy. Couldn't even lift. Took pain killer after lunch then felt better. Luckily no fever or other symptoms.

My husband complained he shivered at nite.

Different individual different symptoms.

Looks like the arm is tired of frequent covid jabs