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Posted: 3 years ago
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Part three updated

Coming up with four

As story unfolds , things will be clearer

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Part 4


The fifth day after her death

She was relieved and was in peace as the culprits were taken into custody and would be charged soon. There was no sign from the Almighty. She was ready to proceed to heaven. While waiting for His approach, she roamed the streets of the city of Hoshiarpur and looked at the crowd of people on the busy noisy streets. "How nice it could have been if i was still alive. "


Then she roamed around in other cities and villages admiring the greenery of the crop fields when she suddenly heard two quarrelling voices of females nearby. She watched them , standing right beside as they couldn't see her.


The shorter fairer one warned the taller and slender , pointing her fore finger towards her fiercely.

" Tejo, main tujhe kabhi chain sey jeene nehin dungi". Main apna badla pura kar key hi rehungi".


The other one was emotional and tried to console the furious one.

" Jasmin , beeti baton ko bhulakar agey bedho, pls".


She listened carefully to the ongoing arguement between the two women and finally came to a conclusion that they were siblings. The fierce one reminded her of her own shrewd sister. This was the same situation that she faced. She needed to get details.


She followed the tall and slender one to her home. The family was seated in the living room and consoled her to forget her past events and ignore her sibling.


Mihika was shocked. "This woman went through what i did. She is broken and weak. God, no! She's in danger. She will lose her life. I got to do something. How can i tell her that her life is at stake. Don't trust that evil sibling. She looked naive. She's definitely gonna be in huge trouble. How can i save her".


She thought real hard. There was no way to convey her message to that distraught young lady but one solution was definitely present. She had to take matters into her own hands.


She needed to take over her form(body) and execute her plan to teach that evil sister a good lesson. She couldn't save herself but at least she could do a favour for this woman.


As she moved towards the crop fields it was getting dark and she sat at one corner wondering how could she take charge of tejo's body.


Just then a light appeared a few metres away. She knew it was time but she was not ready. She stood up at once looking up at the dark sky pleading for some time as she had to rescue someone who could be in trouble. She wished for four days at least to be on mother Earth. As she opened her eyes, the light vanished. The Almighty granted her wish.


Only few days in hand. Misson tejo rescue. Teach the culprits a lesson of life. The cheaters. The ex husband and the sister. Especially the sister. What she couldn't do for herself, she was determined to perform the wonderful deed for another woman who was still alive but in danger.


To be continued

( Pt 5 updated on pg 3).

Edited by Aniash - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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wow Ani..this is so nicee...awaiting the next part. i am super excited to read what Mihika has planned for Jasmin and hopefully Fateh

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Somebody please send Mihika to UD land , cuz Tejo has lost all her brain cells🤡😭

I'm very curious to know what's gonna happen to jasfa😳

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hi ash,

Yeh tejo mahaan is useless.

I was so irritated . She's the reason u don't feel like watching the show. Then a thought came in mind to write this. Someone else need to do the deed of punishing the cheaters. The best would be a dead woman who went through the same

So yesterday was busy at work

I wrote part one and two after reaching home

Today took off due to booster jab ( third Pfizer)

Have u rcvd urs anyway??

Which country do u reside.

So i wrote part three and four.

Will complete five . Will try six as well.

Tmrow a little relax . Students attending covid seminar . Doctors from government hospitals will be coming down. So classes cancelled. I will try for the climax tmrow

Edited by Aniash - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: 08_maria

Somebody please send Mihika to UD land , cuz Tejo has lost all her brain cells🤡😭

I'm very curious to know what's gonna happen to jasfa😳


Yep

I wrote this coz tejo is getting on nerves now

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aniash


Yep

I wrote this coz tejo is getting on nerves now

J ko ghar laane ko bol rahi hai ye ladki😭😭 iska kuch nahi ho sakta !

I'm glad you have started writing this , so good to read !

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thanks for tagging ani

superb written

loved idea ghost possessing tejo and getting punished cheaters

show k tejo ka toh kuchh nahi ho sakta she must be busy in her mahaanta towards her evil sister and cheater husband settling them again.


i liked all ghosty things which differentiate tejo. but why mihika only thought to punish her sister? is her husband also had his redemption and whitewashed like fateh? good that her friend get both punished.

waiting for mihika's punishment for jasfa acquiring tejo's body. Excited as it will be funny in your writing style.😃

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Marathi_Mulgi

Thanks for tagging ani

superb written

loved idea ghost possessing tejo and getting punished cheaters

show k tejo ka toh kuchh nahi ho sakta she must be busy in her mahaanta towards her evil sister and cheater husband settling them again.


i liked all ghosty things which differentiate tejo. but why mihika only thought to punish her sister? is her husband also had his redemption and whitewashed like fateh? good that her friend get both punished.

waiting for mihika's punishment for jasfa acquiring tejo's body. Excited as it will be funny in your writing style.😃



You are welcome dear

Tejo is the reason u don't feel like watching the show now

I was annoyed.

So yesterday after work i wrote pt one and two

Today off coz of booster jab pfizee three.

Have u rcvd urs???

U better becareful . Omricon in Mumbai is flaring.

Get the third jab if u haven't.

Will increase immunity.


I wrote pt three and four in the afternoon.

Didn't cook dinner.

Arm was like heavy and soreness at jab area.

Today ordered thosa from home delivery online.

After dinner , will continue pt five . Will try six as well.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: 08_maria

J ko ghar laane ko bol rahi hai ye ladki😭😭 iska kuch nahi ho sakta !

I'm glad you have started writing this , so good to read !


Arey kya bore karti hain tejo maharani

They made her a flipper.

Edited by Aniash - 3 years ago

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