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Posted: 3 years ago
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Part 86

So Nani is afraid of Tara as well

That is really unfortunate that a father ca not meet his own daughter

Glad that geet is excited but does she understand the reality of the situation??

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Part – 87

Maan gets impatient as time passes… it’s his daughter’s birthday and he should be with her….

Why should he wait till the party begins?

He is not some guest, he is her father…

Geet stays away from him for she knows that he wants to be alone…

Its hard for him to forget Sam and his daughter is also not with hi…. Babaji is so cruel, this is not fair babaji, Sameera ko toh cheen liya hai, ab kam se kam Mansi ko toh Maan ke paas bhejdho, warna mein aapse baat nahi karoongi….

Geet is angry that she couldn’t help Maan….

In the evening Geet is dressed up and all ready for the celebrations….

Maan’s wait is over….

Maan finds Geet ready for the party….

Maan can’t leave her and go… he needs her at the moment the most….

Agar Geet saath nahi aathi toh Maan subha subha wahan jaake Tara se ladtha aur Mansi ki birthday ko karab kartha…

Geet kept watching him like an eagle though she didn’t ask him anything….

That time when Maan went out to take a walk as he was feeling the pressure, Geet quietly followed him…

Maan had to return quickly…

They are at Tara’s house…

The house is decorated and the guests have started arriving….

Maan waits… .

Geet: kya dekh rahe ho? Yahan tak aagaye toh jaathe haina?

Maan is not worried about himself, he is worried about Geet….

How will Geet be received by everyone? Specially Tara..

Maan would never want Geet to meet Tara, but Geet is stubborn, she wants to meet her daughter, how could Maan stop her?

Maan walks in expecting every possibility of fire works…

Geet is following him at a distance…

Let him go first, there is no hurry for her…

Moreover the host shouldn’t be shocked with two unexpected guests at the same time, they can go one by one….

Maan enters and Pawan welcomes him and takes him to Mansi..

Mansi runs towards him…

Maan picks her up immediately…

Maan: happy birthday darling

Mansi hugs him and kisses him.. he kisses her back…

Tara is busy arranging the table for cake cutting…

Tara looks for Mansi and finds her with Maan…

Tara is neither happy nor upset seeing him… she just tries to ignore him…

Tara: Mansi baby, come, let’s cut the cake, Ritu, go bring Mansi

Maan let’s Mansi down…

Mansi goes with Ritusa…

Mansi is excited seeing the cake.. .

Pawan goes in and brings the second cake….

Tara stares him… she thinks it’s Maan who got it….

Tara: Mansi yahi cake jaayegi

Maan is standing at a distance and he has no clue what’s happening….

Nani: koi baat nahi, Ritu ye cake kategi

Tara stares her mother….

Nani gives the knife to Ritu…

All are ready but Maan is still hesitant to go and join his daughter’s celebration…

Geet pushes him ahead…

Geet: jao Maan, Mansi aapko hi dhoondh rahi hai

Maan moves forward reluctantly…

Geet: Mansi, papa ko bhi lekhe jaana beta

Just then Tara notices Geet…

Geet was standing in the crowd like a third person….

Tara gets a little nervous…

She always imagines Geet to be taking her little sister Sameera’s place…

That she could never accept… that’s true, no one can replace her little sister for her, but for Maan, Geet is not a replacement, he loves Geet, she is her present… he needs her… Sameera will always be a part of his life, he has a daughter with her, Geet has also become an inevitable part of his life now… he can’t deny the fact that his life now revolves around Geet and Mansi…

Geet signals Pawan to take Maan front and she steps back to her previous position…

Maan goes along with Pawan…

Tara catches Mansi’s hand and cuts the cake, while Nani helps Ritu cut the other one..

Tara gives the cake to Mansi…

Then Nani brings a piece of the other cake for Mansi..

Pawan takes Mansi forward so that Nani could feed her…

Tara keeps watching them…

Everyone is singing and clapping…

Maan moves away letting them to enjoy…

Geet goes and stays with Maan…

After the cake distribution Geet gathers the children to play games…

She has planned few games for them and announces prizes too…

Geet says that the winner would get a cookie, while the loser will get two cookies…

Its like two kids compete with each other, the one who recites a poem faster is the winner… or the alphabet reciting…

Mansi and Ritu too join them…

Geet says hi to Mansi and introduces herself as Mansi’s friend to everyone…

She backs Mansi in the games and helps her win..

She also makes friendship with Ritu….

Everyone is happy but Tara can’t see Mansi with Geet, she can’t see her own daughter playing happily with Geet, she could only see Mansi playing with Geet…

A little bigger boy competes with Mansi in arm wrestling…

He deliberately loses to get two cookies…

Geet: ye toh cheating hai, come and play with me

Geet easily makes him win…

Thay boy is disappointed…

Geet: tumme toh kush hona chahiye, tum jeet gaye ho

Geet gives him one cookie…

The boy is not happy…

She gives him another cookie..

Geet: beta, aap ka naam kya hai?

Boy: Sumit

Geet: Sumit, hum game prize ke liye nahi khelthe hai, ye fun game hai, par kissi bhi game mein puri koshish karni padegi, khel mein jeet aur har maine nahi lagtha, aap ka attitude maine lagtha, aap ka intention jeetne ka hona chahiye, samjhe aap?

Sumit is busy eating his cookies…

Pawan claps… sahi baat hai….

Ye cookies Geet ne kaas Mansi ke liye banaya hai, par aaise dethi toh shayad Mansi tak nahi pohunch tha, par ab Mansi bhi khe rahi hai, sab ke saath milke….

Geet: kisko cookie pasand hai? Haath upar karo

All the hands are up…

Geet gives another round of cookies to everyone…

The kids go and continue their game ..

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Posted: 3 years ago
#13

So cute , geet is so nice , she try to be friendly with mansi and trying her best

Update soon

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Nice update. Intelligent Geet.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Part 87

Glad that geet pushes maan in

Sweet of geet to plan games with the kids

& arrange for the cookie 🍪 prizes

Still waiting for the Tara storm to burst

I understand that Tara is being protective but she is being unrealistic b/c Sam is no more ....... does not mean that everyone should not continue to live their lives ....., they can still continue to remember her

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Maan is right case in court they should taken permission from court than Tara can't do anything

Maan don't want to spoil his daughter's bday so he can't take Geet with him she have to understand geet getting emotional about mansi

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Posted: 3 years ago
#17

Congrats on the new thread


Part 87

Outstanding update... exceptionally written

can understand Maan's feelings

glad that Geet is there with him

hate Tara!

at least Maan got to be part of the birthday celebrates

this is all thanks to Geet

great she pushed him

liked how Geet introduced herself as Mansi's friend

pleased how she interacted with the kids and arranged games

Tara needs to realise that Sameera is dead and that Mansi is now her (Tara's daughter)

Tara was indeed calm.....

well its the calm before the storm


update soon

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Posted: 3 years ago
#18

It’s because of geet that Maan gif to spend time With mansi. Geet was not far off too she got to spend time with her too

good Tara did not make a scene


how sweet of geet yo make kids have fun at the sane time make mansi eat cookies. Smart


Maan must be pleased now loved that geet and Maan did not differentiate between mansi and Rithu.


Edited by Alamelu - 3 years ago
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Part – 88

After a while the guests start leaving….

Mansi comes to Geet… she pulls her dress…

Geet bends over and lifts her…

Geet: hi birthday baby, happy birthday

Mansi: cookie aunty, Mansi wants cookies

Geet: aap ko itna pasand hai?

Mansi: haan

Geet hugs and kisses her…

Geet: mein kaun hoon?

Mansi: cookie aunty

Geet: mein Geet hoon, aapki friend, aap bhool gaye? Ab mere naam yaad rakhna, bolo, mera naam kya hai?

Mansi: Geet

Geet: very good, aur aapka friend kaun hai?

Mansi: Ritu

Geet: Ritu bhi hai, aapki choti friend, aapki badi friend kaun hai?

Mansi: kaun hai?

Geet: Geet

Mansi: Geet ?

Geet: haan, best friends, give me high five

Mansi shows high five ….

Geet: aaj se hum besties hai…

Mansi blinks….

Geet: friends

Geet takes her to Maan….

Geet: papa ko kiss karo

Mansi kisses Maan….

Maan takes Mansi in his arms…

Geet: Mansi, mein kaun hoon?

Mansi: Geet

Geet: very good, aur aapki kaun hoon?

Maan thinks that Geet is trying to take her rights now itself….

Maan: Geet, what’s this? What are you trying to do? She is just a kid, she’ll get to know at the right time

Geet: aap pehle suno toh sahi

Geet: Mansi, aap bolo, hum aapke hai kaun?

Mansi: badi friend

Geet: very good, àap humme Geet bhi bhula sakte ho

Mansi: Geet

Geet: haaaye, my sweetheart, aaj tak kissi ne bhi aaise sweetly mere naam ko nahi liya, ye Maan bhi nahi, ye lo, ek aur cookie

Maan: Geet, usko kitna cookie khilaooge?

So Maan was watching them only…

Geet: Maan, Mansi ko meri cookies bahut pasand aayi, haina?

Mansi: papa ka cookie?

Geet: papa ko aap hi khilao

Mansi: papa, muh kholo

Maan opens his mouth…

Mansi puts the cookie in his mouth…

Maan: hmm, yummy

Mansi: Mansi likes

Maan: Mansi likes cookies?

Mansi: haan

Geet: Mansi likes papa, haina?

Mansi: haan

Geet: I like Mansi, Mansi likes

Mansi: papa

Geet: sirf papa? Mansi likes Geet na?

Mansi: haan

Geet is very happy…

Geet: Maan, Mansi likes me

Geet is so excited….

Pawan comes…

Pawan: you can take Mansi with you today, I’ll handle Tara

Maan: thanks, I miss her very badly

Pawan: I understand

Geet: aaj nahi, aaj Mansi aap ke paas hi rahegi

Maan is shocked to hear that…

Maan: Geet, tum kya keh rahi ho? Issiliye itna zidd kar ke yahan aayi ho?

Geet: par Maan, aaj Tara apni behen ko bahut miss karegi, aaj toh Mansi uske paas rahegi toh achcha hoga, aap fikar mat karo, mein hoona aap ke saath

Pawan smiles hearing that…

Geet: kyun bhaiya? Mein teek keh rahi hoon na? Aaise waqt pe humme hi inke saath dena chahiye, haina?

Pawan: you are right, Maan is very lucky to have found you

Geet: hum Mansi ko ek long drive pe lekhe jaathe hai, haina Mansi ?

They go out for a drive…

Geet keeps chatting with Mansi….

Maan is happy to be a silent spectator as far as they are happy…

Geet gets some balloons for Mansi…

They walk on the empty road for a while…

Maan wishes that they could stay together like this all the time…

Geet: Maan, aap har waqt kya sochte rehte ho? Aao, dekho Mansi kitna achcha rhymes gaathi hai

Mansi: machli machli jal ki Rani

Geet sings along with Mansi….

She also joins Mansi in the action too…

They have a great time together…

Geet even makes Mansi taste momos….

Maan: Geet, what are you doing?

Geet: Maan, it’s vegetarian and steamed, very healthy and tasty , yummy haina?

Mansi: haan

Geet gives a taste of the chutney too….

Maan: Geet, it’s too spicy, even for me

Geet: dekho Mansi likes it

Actually Mansi is enjoying something different…

Geet is enjoying the spicy chutney more… KM’s food is cooked for Khuranas' palette…

Mansi: hmm Mansi ko bhi

Geet gives her another bite…

Maan: Mansi beta, it’s not good, sshhh bahut teeka hai

Geet: Maan, usko bhi aapki tarah Italian mat banao, hum desi hai aur desi hi rahenge, haina darling?

Mansi is happy to eat the new dish that she actually likes…

They go back to leave Mansi…

Tara is upset that they have taken Mansi from her…

Her mother says that Geet is not such a bad girl and actually she likes Geet…

She tells Tara that Geet had actually persuaded Maan to leave Mansi with Tara…

But Tara gets even more angry that everyone is supporting that Geet…. And they have conveniently forgot Sam so soon….

Mansi is back….

Geet: toh hum chalte hai, bye Mansi, Geet ko bhoolna mat

Mansi: hmm

Geet: Geet ko bhool jaoge?

Mansi: nahi

Geet: bye Mansi, papa ko bye bolo

Mansi: bye papa

Geet: Aur Geet ko?

Mansi: bye Geet

They return to Delhi with a little satisfaction that they could be part of their daughter’s special day somehow…

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Geet made Maan to take her to mansi and she even convince Pawan to spend time with her Geet made Mansi her friend and she like Geet too

But Geet told they will not take her bz Tara need her Pawan and Tara mom praising Geet which Tara don't like

Maan Geet went Delhi satisfied after meeting and spending time with Mansi

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