SS: On the field with MaAn Part 1, Part 2 and Part 3

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Part 1: Insaan ki Parakh…Insaan ki Samajh…


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Breakfast table at Kapadiya house, first work day in the new year; Anuj is having breakfast while Anu brings few more garam thepalas to the table.


Anupama : ye lijie garam hai, ye Mukku aai nahi abhi tak nashte ke liye, 8 bajne ko hai, me dekhake aati hun…


Anuj : (holds her hand by wrist as she is about to go for Mukku) Anu, baitho (makes her sit) tum bhi breakfast karlo, kabse bas bhag rahi ho kitchen ke andar bahar andar bahar…

Anupama : Haan main bhi kar leti hun, bas Mukku ko bula lati hun..

Anuj: (does not let her leave the chair and makes plate for her with thepalas and chutney) Maine kaha Baitho, Mukku nikal gayi hai subeh subeh cycling ke liye, US me bhi jati thi, GK walk pe jane jate mujhe bata ke gaye hai. Ab tum chup chap baitho aur breakfast karo.


Anupama: (complies) Achha aap bhi kijie, ek aur thepala dun…


Anuj: Tum shuru karo, main leta hun…


Anupama starts eating.


Anuj: Aaj ka poora din bohot busy jane wala hai Anu, naye saal ka first day maine poora hamare hotel project ke liye allocated rakha hai, hotel ki management team, construction, interiors, finance aur HR teams ke saath meetings lined up hai poora din, so acchese breakfast karalo, din me shayad time na mile thik se lunch ke liye..


Anupama: (asks curiously) Construction interior finance ye toh samaz aa gaya, ye HR kya hota hai?


Anuj: Umm HR matlab Humane Resources team, jo hamre hotel ke staff jaise ke front desk hai ya maintenance hai ya kitchen catering ya cleaning staff aur jo jo bhi staff chahie hoga use recruit karenge. Jarurat ke hisab se job ke liye sahi log dhundhenge.


Anupama: (asks hesitantly) itane sare bade bade logon ke meeting me mera kya kaam?


Anuj: Are hotel ki co-partner ho tum, tumhe toh hona hi hai har meeting main, Accha Chalo hum dono sath hi office chalate hai, raste me sab batata hun.


Both leave for office.


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At shah house breakfast table:


Vanraj: Baa ye bread aur sandwiches ke alawa bhi breakfast hota hai ye bhool hi gaya hun, bade din ho gaye dhang ke methi ke thepale khaye hue, aap bana doge.


Baa : Thik hai, kal banati hun, pata nahi meri kamar kitna saath degi, par koshish karti hun.


Kavya: (monologue) I have got this one, ye pati logon ke dil ki entrance pet me hoti hai, suna hai mainebhi, mujhe bhi V ke liye kuch cook karna chahie, meri ye koshish dekhake akhir kab tak mujhe ignore kar payega V.


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At Kapadiya Empire’s office in a conference room:


Anupama is restlessly tapping pencil on the diary pages as the meeting is about to start.


Anuj: Anupamaa, tension mat lo me hun tumare sath.


Anupama looks at Anuj’s reassuring face and tries to be calm and composed. A couple of people enter the room and settle down.


Person A: Good Morning Sir, Good Morning Ma’am.


Anuj: (Smiles) Good Morning.


Anupama: Jai shree krishna Mr. Sharma.


Anuj is amazed at how she remembers him correct by name.


Mr. Sharma : Bhumi pujan ke baad aaj phir aap se baat ho rahi hai Ma’am. Mere sath hai Miss Neha from Interior designs team.


Anupama: Jai shree Krishna Neha ji.


Neha too responds with namste gesture.


Mr. Sharma: Construction ke current status ke sath meeting ki shuruwat kare Sir… Ma’am…


Anupama is slightly surprised to receive the respect and authority she is being offered as the partner in charge along with Anuj. She pauses for a moment and nods in yes. Mr. Sharma begins to present construction status. After a while;


Anuj : Thank you Mr. Sharma. I think we are on schedule for our launch date. Hum plan ke hisab se samay par launch kar payenge.


Mr. Sharma: Thank you sir, over to you Neha.


Neha joins and starts with her presentation on hotel interiors.


Neha: Thats all from me. Yeh interior themes aapako kaise lage…


Anuj: Miss Neha, I do see your work here, (in slightly stern tone) But mujhe abhibhi iname hotel ki concept ka feel nahi dikh raha hai, the ambiance (quickly looks at Anu) ‘hotel ka mahol’ hamara jo theme hai “Ma ke hath ka khana” use puri tareh se compliment nahi kar raha….aapako hotel ki theme pe briefing and pointers toh mile honge na….


Neha: (saddens as her work get criticised). Yes sir..


Anuj : I was hoping ke aap unn pointers ko Dhyan me rakh kar designs banaengi.


Anupama notices as Neha’s face turns pale.


Anuj: Designs sirf final karane me agar itna waqt jaega toh construction timely complete hone ka kya fayada. (Looks away in disappointment)


Room gets silent for a moment. Anupama enters the conversation to break the silence.


Anupama: Neha ji, aap ne bahut mehnat ki hai, mujhe aapaka..,woh kuch tables par sofa kursiyon ke sath takie wali charpayee ka idea bahut accha laga. Agar koi chahe to ghar ke jaise paalthi markar baithke shanti se khana kha sakata hai. Bujurgo ko bhi baithane me aasani hogi.


Miss Neha: Thank you Ma’am. (Neha smiles as Anu acknowledges her input)


Anupama: bas isame chote chote badlav ki jarurat hai jaise aapane jo lights ya rango ka safed colour me idea bataya hai na, woh ekdum modern hai par woh ghar wala mahol nahi deta…mera matlab hai ghar wala ‘ambiance’ nahi deta (looks quickly at Anuj for confirmation if the word is right, Anuj nods in yes with light smile), ‘Ma ke hath ka khana’ kisi cafe me baithke nahi balki ghar me baithke sukoon se kha rahe hai, aise lagana chahie, hai ne Anuj…


Anuj: (he is looking at her with so much pride and faint smile) Bilkul…


Neha: Sure ma’am, main kuch naye calm sober, light and color themes sochati hun.


The discussion continues ahead. Meeting finishes and MaAn entering Anuj’s cabin together. Both sit across the table. Anuj looks smilingly at Anu while Anu questioningly raises her eyebrows as to what happened.


Anuj: Maine kaha tha na Anu, tum mujhase jo sikhogi wo sikhogi par main tumase kafi kuch sikhane wala hun. Main…insaan ki parakh kar leta hun par Kai baar logo ko sahi tarike se dhaal nahi pata, sambhaal nahi pata, lekin tum…tum logo ko bahot acchese aur jaldi samaz jati ho, Tumane Neha ko bohot acche se improvements bataye.


Anupama: (Smiles) Haan, galtiya dikhana bahut jaruri hai…par sath sath acchaiya bhi dekho toh insaan aasanise galtiyan maan leta hai aur sudhar bhi deta hai….


Anuj: Sahi keh rahi ho, Accha, chocolate milk piogi, main apane liye manga raha hun..(holds phone receiver for her response)


Anupama: Iss waqt?


Anuj: haan agali meeting aadhe ghante me hi hai aur kuch emails bhi dekhane hai mujhe toh..


Anupama: Bilkul nahi (takes receiver and puts it down), khane ke time pe khana hi khana chahie, 20 min bohot hote hai lunch ke liye, aur kuch time ke liye aap laptop nahi dekhenge toh toofaan nahi aanewala, chalie khana khate hai…(Anupama shuts his laptop’s screen down, Anuj obediently rises up from the chair)


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Part 2 precap:


Anuj: Toh kaisa raha Aaj ka din tumhare liye Anu, pura din office me bitaya…humane.


Anupama is fully lost in her thoughts.


Anuj: Anupama, kya baat hai, tum itni chup kyon ho, waha meeting me bhi mujhe laga ke tumhe kuch kehna hai, but tumane kuch kaha nahi, koi baat hai toh batao mujhe…Anu…bolo…Mr. Mehta ki baat ki wajah se pareshaan ho?


Anupama : (looks up into his eyes and asks with heavy voice) Anuj, aapane ye partnership mujhe kyu di hai??


Anuj: Anu…, ye kyu puch rahi ho?


Takes his car to side of the road and stops to listen to her.


Anupama: Mujhe janana hai, main janti hun ki apane jaan pehchan ki vajeh se nahi di hai mujhe partnership, aapane kaha tha, aur me aapake kahe par sawal nahi kar rahi, par main samaz nahi pa rahi ki apane mujhame aisa kya dekh liya jo itni badi jimmedari sop di. Main koi badi business karne wali aurat nahi hun, aare maine toh apani college bhi puri nahi ki hai, nahi koi badi Nakuri ki hai, aapko to pata hai meri bewkoofi ki wajeh se baa-bapuji, mere bacche, sab beghar ho sakte the. (Tears start rolling down her cheeks) Phir aapko mujhape itna bharosa kaise hai, iss baar agar maine phirse kuch galati kar di toh kitne saare paison ka nuksaan ho jayega.


Anuj: Anu… tum ye sab kyu soch rahi ho?


Anupama: kyu soch rahi hun? Meri galtiyo ka nuksaan aapko uthana padega Anuj, kya galat kaha Mr. Mehta ne? Aap mere bharose pe Karodo rupiyee kyon laga rahe hai? Upar se meri wajeh se aapko jo duniya ke saamne sharminda hona padega woh alag. Kal mujhe unn 4 grihiniyon me se 2 ko reject karna hai, unme aur meri kabiliyat me aisa kya farak hai jo main unhe reject karu, aage badhne ka mauka cheen loon unse, Mujhe samajh me nahi ata aapane iss baravi (12th) paas nasamajh Anupama me aisa kya dekh liya jo mujhe itna bada mauka de rahe hai…jo bharosa me khud pe nahi kar pati aap kaise kar rahe hai aur kyoon kar rahe hai? (She continues to cry)


Anuj: Anu….Anu tum rona band karo please, (leans to open the drawer in front of Anu seat, takes out tissue paper box), sabse pehale ye aasu poch do..(wipes her tears with tissue, holds her right hand between both his hands) tumhe lagata hai ki tum so called qualified yane padhi likhi nahi ho, galatiya karogi mera nuksaan karaogi mujhe sharminda karaogi, achha toh mujhe ek baat ka jawab do…..


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Looking forward to see what you think forumwasis and shall I continue with part 2

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Part 2: Jari wala Dhaaga…..


At Shah house, Vanraj enters.


Baa: Vanraj…jaldi ghar aa gaye aaj!


Vanraj: Haan baa, ab mera koi boss toh hai nahi jise mujhe jawab dena pade, apani marzi ka malik hun toh aa gaya jaldi.


Malvika enters too.


Malvika: Raaj tumhare mohalle me gadi park karna is a task you know.


Vanraj: I know I know. Baa hum kuch kaam yahi se karenge, kuch chai nashta bhijwa dijie ga.


Malvika: Nahi Baa aap aaram kijie,main kuch bana leti hun fatafat hum dono ke liye, phir kaam shuru karenge hai na Raaj.


Hearing Malvika wants to get into kitchen, Kavya jumps into the conversation.


Kavya: Kooii jarurat nahi hain. Tumhara firangi bread sandwich tum apane paas hi rakho, V main kuch banake lati hun.


Vanraj is surprised and worried ki ab pata nahi kya khana padega.


Vanraj: It’s ok, chai aur biscuits bhi chalenge.


Kavya: Maine kaha na main kuch banati hun…(monologue) main itani aasani se iss Mukku ki bacchi ko apane kitchen me nahi ghusane dungi, pehale kitchen me aayegi aur phir seedha bedroom me, nooo, V ke pet wala rasta sirf mere liye reserved hai. Anupama se puchu kya, fatafat kya ban sakata hai…


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At Kapadiya office, in a conference room. Anupama, Anuj and a lady is sitting and another person is on video screen.


Anuj: Good Morning Mr. Mehta, I am glad ke aap aaj ki meeting ke liye samay nikal paye. And I am really sorry aapako itani subeh subeh kaam pe laga diya, par aapase baat kiye bina baate age nahi badh pati, thank you so much for taking time out for this.


Anupama checks her watch it’s 3:30 in the afternoon and looks at Anuj slightly puzzled.


Mr. Mehta: No problem Mr. Kapadiya, ab aap khud jis project me personally interest le rahe ho, usake ke liye samay to nikalana hi padega. Namaste Anupama ji.


Anupama: Jai Shree Krishna.


Mr. Mehta: Hello Noor.


Noor: Good Morning sir. (Anupama again checks her watch and is now confused).


Anuj: Anupama ye hai Mr. Mehta, hamare executive director Finance. Kapdiya empire ke saare kharche inki najro ke niche chalate hai. Kapadiya empire ke major share owners me se Ek hai Mr. Mehta. And she is Noor, hamari India HR manager.


Anupama: (To Noor) Jai shree Krishna. (To Anuj in a very low voice) Dopehar ke 3.30 baje aap dono unhe good morning kyu keh rahe hai?


Anuj: (Smiles and moves quite close to her ear and responds in equally low voice) woh New York se baat kar rahe hai, waha iss waqt subeh ke 5 - 5:30 hi baje honge.


Anupama: Ohh Accha. (Anu taps her head, Anuj retreats realising their proximity).


They Continue the discussion with Mr. Mehta and Noor. After some discussion,


Mehta: I know Ye project bohot alag aur ambitious hai, but hamre estimated budget se almost 15% jyada cost dikh rahi hai. I suggest hame kuch bate fir se sochani chahie.


Anuj: Me samajh raha hun, but mujhe kisi bhi tareh ki koi kami, koi delay iss project me nahi chahie.


Mehta: Main yeh nahi keh raha ki hame koi kami rakhani chahie, par baat karodo ki hai, step by step aage badhane me hi samjhadari hogi. Shuruwat sambhal kar nahi karenge to karodo le kar dubenge.


Anupama is listening quietly yet sincerely. Her phone vibrates with Kavya calling her. Anu wonders what Kavya could want at this time, rejects the call and sends text ‘Main meeting me hun, badme call karti hun’.


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In Shah house kitchen.


Kavya : (extremely irritated with rejected call and subsequent text) kya din aa gaye hai mere, woh thepale banane wali Anupama bhi ab mujhe meeting me hone ka atttitude de rahi hai. Ek mujhe chodake sari duniya busy hai, ye would be Nanand Bhabhee dono milake meri jaan kha rahe hai, kyaaa karuuu…., chai aur biscuits hi le jati hun…., nahi nahi biscuits is soooo average….cookies deti hun, wo better rahega. V ko bhi toh mere efforts dikhane chahie.


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Back to the meeting.


Anuj: Hmm I see your point, any suggestions hum kaha pe cost manage kar sakate hai.


Noor: Yes Sir, I think, Ek toh hum dono floors Ek sath launch karne ke bajae Ek floor se shuru karenge and jaise jaise idea work karega place expand karenge. Aur dusara ye ke hamane jo budget cooking competition winners aur catering staff ke training ke liye diya hai woh adjust kar sakate hai. Filhaal humara 4 ghrihiniyon ko train karne ka plan hai, par agar hum 2 housewifes ko train kare aur 2 qualified chefs and qualified catering staff hire kare to time and money dono save honge, yeh safer approach hoga.


Mehata: I agree, ek naye restaurant kitchen ki poori responsibility shuru se housewife’s ke kandho pe dalana bohot jyada risky hai. Karodo ka investment Chand nausikhiyon ke barose toh nahi chod sakate na. Hame restaurant ko kamiyab banana hai failure nahi.


Anupama is listening carefully.


Mehta: What I mean to say is, trained chefs housewifes ko acche se guide kar payenge hotel kitchen management me and jaise jaise unka experience badhega hum aur housewives ko train karake add karenge and ye trained chefs baki hotel projects me absorb kar lenge.


Anuj: Hmm…(thinks for a couple seconds) mujhe ye practical lag raha hai, Anupama…(looks at her for her opinion)


Anupama: (pauses for a brief moment) Haan.


He notices some discomfort in her yes.


Anuj: Hmm.


Noor: Thank you sir, phir hame 4 me se 2 housewives ko screen karake select karna hoga, for first round of training and job.


Anuj: Haan, Noor aap Anupama ke sath 2 ko select kijie. Thik hai Anupama?


Anupama: 4 me se 2 ko select karna hai (monologue: matlab 2 ko reject bhi karna hai), thik hai.


Anuj: (again noticing the same discomfort in Anupama’s words) Kuch kehna hai Anupama, please bolo agar kuch kehna chahti ho.


Mehta: Anupama ji aapaki raay jaruri hai.


Anupama: Nahi kuch nahi, aap log sahi keh rahe hai, karodo ki baat hai.


The discussion continues.


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Anuj and Anupama, in Anuj’s car, on way back home.


Anuj: (monologue) Aaj ka sara din hamane sath bitaya hai Anu, main bata nahi sakata main kitna khush hun…

(Out loud)

Gujar toh rahi thi kal bhi Umar,

Har mukaam se tanha….khamosh, bekaraar |

Sath unka jo mila yu beech Safar,

Har mod bana gulistaan….har pal hai bahaar |


Anupama doesn’t respond and is lost in some thought.


Anuj: Anu, kuch kahogi nahi meri shayari ke bareme?


Anupama just moves her head as no with forced smile for the sake of it, and goes back to her thinking.


Anuj: (again tries to make her talk) Toh kaisa raha Aaj ka din tumhare liye Anu, pura din office me bitaya…humane.


Anupama is fully lost in her thoughts.


Anuj: Anupama, kya baat hai, tum itni chup kyon ho, waha meeting me bhi mujhe laga ke tumhe kuch kehna hai, but tumane kuch kaha nahi, koi baat hai toh batao mujhe…Anu…bolo…Mr. Mehta ki baat ki wajah se pareshan ho?


Anupama : (looks up into his eyes and asks with heavy voice) Anuj, aapane ye partnership mujhe kyu di hai??


Anuj: Anu…, ye kyu puch rahi ho ab?


Takes his car to side of the road and stops to listen to her.


Anupama: Mujhe janana hai, main janti hun ki apane jaan pehchan ki vajeh se nahi di hai mujhe partnership, aapane kaha tha, aur me aapake kahe par sawal nahi kar rahi, par main samaz nahi pa rahi ki apane mujhame aisa kya dekh liya jo itni badi jimmedari sop di. Main koi badi business karne wali aurat nahi hun, aare maine toh apani college bhi puri nahi ki hai, nahi koi badi Nakuri ki hai, aapko to pata hai meri bewkoofi ki wajeh se baa-bapuji, mere bacche, sab beghar ho sakte the. (Tears start rolling down her cheeks) Phir aapko mujhape itna bharosa kaise hai, iss baar agar maine phirse kuch galati kar di toh kitne saare paison ka nuksaan ho jayega.


Anuj: Anu… tum ye sab kyu soch rahi ho?


Anupama: kyu soch rahi hun? Meri galtiyo ka nuksaan aapko uthana padega Anuj, kya galat kaha Mr. Mehta ne? Aap mere bharose Karodo rupiyee kyon laga rahe hai? Upar se meri wajeh se aapko jo duniya ke saamne sharminda hona padega woh alag. Kal mujhe unn 4 grihiniyon me se 2 ko reject karna hai, unme aur meri kabiliyat me aisa kya farak hai jo main unhe reject karu, aage badhne ka mauka cheen loon unse, Mujhe samajh me nahi ata aapane iss baravi (12th) paas nasamajh Anupama me aisa kya dekh liya jo mujhe itna bada mauka de rahe hai…jo bharosa me khud pe nahi kar pati aap kaise kar rahe hai aur kyoon kar rahe hai? (She continues to cry)


Anuj: Anu…Anu tum rona band karo please, (leans to open the drawer in front of Anu’s seat, takes out tissue paper box), sabse pehale ye aasu poch do..(wipes her tears with tissue, holds her right hand between both his hands) tumhe lagata hai ki tum so called qualified padhi likhi nahi ho, galatiya karogi, mera nuksaan karaogi, mujhe sharminda karaogi, achha to mujhe ek baat ka jawab do…..tumne college ki padhai janbooz ke adhuri chod di thi…fail wail ho gayee thi kya?


Anupama: Nahi, main fail nahi hui kabhi, woh toh Mr. Shah ka rishtaa aa gaya tha toh maa ne rukawa di thi college, maine kabhi padhai se dhyan nahi hataya tha.


Anuj : Exactly, main janta hun, maine dekha hai tum bohot sincere student thi, backbencher toh main tha Anu…, tumhara college complete na kar pana tumhari kami nahi hai tumhari majboori…thi…. Aur agar tumhare pass koi degree nahi hai iska matlab ye nahi ki koi kabiliyat nahi hai…..teen bacchon ki acchi parvarish ki hai tumne, ghar ko sambhala, pariwar ko jod ke rakha, cafe shuru kiya, dance academy chalati ho, mushkilon ka dat ke samna karti ho….., hunar aur kabiliyat ke bina ye sab kaise hota? Aur aisi kabil Anupama ko main koi mauka kyu na doon, aaj me bada businessman hun isliye partnership de raha hun agar main kahi naukri kar raha hota toh shayad tumhe naukri dilane me madat karta, apani capacity ke hisab se main tab bhi tumhari madat karne ki koshish karta, tum bhi toh yahi karti na, tumne kabhi apano ke liye kuch karane me koi kami rakhi hai?


Anupama shakes her head as no, his words are taking away all her doubts and fears one by one.


Anuj: Toh phir main jitna tumhare liye kar sakta hun usase kuch bhi Kam kyon karu Anu?…….Aur galatiya kaun nahi karta Anu? Sab galtiya karate hai, tabhi Toh kuch seekh pate hai, Agar tumase galati hui bhi…toh main janta hun ke tumhare irade kabhi galat nahi honge. Manlo Agar Samar, Kinjal ya Pakhi se galati hoti hai to unhe tum baar baar chance nahi dogi?


Anupama nods her head in yes.


Anuj: Toh phir apane aap ko ek aur chance kyun nahi de rahi ho. Main tumhe….tumhare hisse ki galtiya karne ki ajadi dena chahta hun…


Anupama’s eyes tear up and tears spill out looking at the sheer purity of Anuj’s care and concern for her.


Anuj: are phir rone lagi tum..(takes another tissue paper)


Anupama : umhmm (tries to manage a smile).


Anuj: Anu….nafa nuksaan samazne wale bohot log hai mere sath, tumhe ye karodo ka bhaar akele nahi uthana, hamari puri team hai usake liye, main hun. Lekin nek iradon wale, apane sath… auro ke liye raah banane ki koshish karane wale, tumhare jaise log bohot kam milte hai….woh hota hai na….Kisi kapade me agar jari ka dhaga buna jaye to usaki chamak jaise badh jati hai, usake sath baki dhage jaise aur bhi khubsoorat lagne lagate hai, bilkul waise hi….hamare iss project ka “Jari wala dhaaga” ho tum Anupama…, meri jindagi ka “Jari wala dhaaga” ho tum Anu, tum ho toh roshani hai………(pauses a moment) baki joh bhi hoga saath me sambhal lenge…hai na?


Anupama nods yes, breathes in and Smiles, her eyes now lit up with belief and hope.


Anuj: (Smiles too) ghar chalen..?


Anupama: Haan.


Anuj starts the car but looks back at Anupama. He soaks in her calmed down gaze straight ahead on the road for a second, her inner turmoil now settled, her face now relieved of any burden.


Anuj: Mushkil hai…


Anupama : kya?


Anuj : ek hath se gadi chalana, ab tum mera hath yunhi pakade rahogi toh drive kaise karunga ?


Anuj points eyes down at her right hand holding his left hand. Anupama quickly releases the grip and they resume drive back home.


Anupama’s phone rings, this time it’s Devika calling her. She picks up the call.


Anupama: Haan bolo Devika.


Devika: kya yaar Anu, subeh message kiya hai tuze, ek reply nahi kiya tune.


Anupama: sori sori, are aaj poora din meeting me thi ne toh reply nahi kiya.


Devika: Itnaa kaam karva raha hai woh Kapadiya tuzase, khabar leni padegi usaki. Waise Anu Anuj ki tabiyat kaisi hai ab, hospital me tha tab baat hui thi.


Anupama: Tu khud puchale (turns phone on speaker) mere saath hi hai Anuj.


Devika: Kaise ho Ajun, saare purje thik thak?


Anuj: haan haan Tu bas phone pe fikra jata, hospital ke baad aaj yaad aai hai tujhe meri.


Devika: are nahi baba, Tum log toh jante ho na meri situation.


Anuj : koi baat nahi, jab bhi aaegi tab milna.


Devika: pakka, accha Anu sun na, mera Ek parcel aa raha hai kal, main to waha hun nahi to maine Tera address diya hai, receive kar Lena, isiliye message kiya tha subeh.


Anupama: are Devika…woh…kuch dino ke liye main apane ghar par nahi hun…


Devika: Tu phir Shah house shift hogayi Anu, Tu samajhati kyu nahi, Anuj ab tu hi samaza ise…


Anupama: Are Shah house nahi….woh main…main abhi…(struggles with words).


Anuj : woh mere ghar pe reh rahi hai kuch dino ke liye, GK ki help karne ke liye…


Devika: balle balle, Anupama….. toh tera addresses ab Kapadiya house ho gaya hai…kyaa baat hai…beta Anuj, Tuze ab kisi medicine ki kya jarurat, special care jo mil rahi hai…pyaaaar se badi koi dawa hai bhala…


MaAn share few shy awkward gazes with each other.


Devika: ab toh mujhe jaldi waha ana padega…tumhari Kahani ka ye twist…


Anupama gets embarrassed and turns speaker off .


Anupama : Sun ne, baad me baat karate hai haan….


Devika: sun sun sun, kaat mat, accha chal ye bata, hamare hotel ka kaam kaise chal raha hai…tuze kaisa lag raha hai ye sab office wala kaam and all?


Anupama: kaam bohoot accha chal raha hai…, aaj main kitne logo se mili, unse itani baaten ki, maine kabhi socha hi nahi tha ke itni sari choti choti bato ko dhyan me rakahna padata hoga, kitni mehnat karate hai sab log, tab jake kaam thik se chalata hai…..tumhe pata hai, kal mujhe…


As the road passes by, Anuj silently hears and admires Anupama, her excitement her childlike cuteness in sharing her work day experience with Devika.


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Part 3 Precap:


Anupama enters kitchen while Gk is opening the fridge for something.


Anupama: Kaka… Anuj aaye nahi abhi tak, 11 baj gaye hai..meri aankh lag gayi thi, aapki koi baat hui phir se.


GK: Aa gaya hai abhi kuch der pehale, shower lene gaya hai.


Anupama: Accha, aap kya doondh rahe hai..


GK: Anuj ko thanda dudh chahie, medicine ki wajeh se acidity ho rahi hai keh raha tha. (Takes milk out of the fridge).


Anupama: bahar khana khaenge toh yahi hoga ne, Aap so jaie, me de aati hun..


GK: are tum bhi toh thak gayi hogi dinbhar, main de ata hun (pours milk into a glass).


Anupama: koi baat nahi Kaka, ekto aaj sara din.. na unse koi baat hui na unhe dekha…(bites her tongue shyly), main deke aati hun haan…(runs away with the glass).


GK: (smiles) pagal chokri, itna miss kar rahi hai, itna pyaar karti hai…phir keh kyu nahi deti apane dil ki baat…


Anupama enters Anuj’s room with the glass of milk, Anuj is standing in front of mirror, wearing vest and track pants with towel around his neck, drying his wet hair looking into the mirror. He notices Anupama in the mirror and turns back.


Anuj: Anu…tum ab tak jaag rahi ho?


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hope you like it...do share what you think...

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beautiful update dear😊

i m happy tumne ek dhang ki practical meeting dikhayi jo show mein kabhi dekhne na milegi

i like anu's turmoil

most beautiful line jo dil choo gayi

main tumhe tumhari hisse ki galtiya karne dena chahta hu👏

too good yr

update soon🤗

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Lovelyyy...I'm so loving it..❤

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