Baatein Kuch Aankahein Si

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Note : This story continues after the New Year's morning in Pandya Niwas


Raavi is in her room, the flashbacks from last night are making her restless


"Shiva ne....Mere Bhootnath ne mere liye itna tam-jham kiya tha aur maine apne gusse

ki wajah se sab barbad kar diya. Kitna bura laga hoga usko. Waise uski baat bhi sahi hai

ek baar usne mujhse apna secret share kiya par badle mei maine kya kiya....??

Ab woh kaise mujhpe bharosa kare....??"


The whole day spent and ShiVi has not talked with eachother. When Shiva came back from

the store the atmosphere of the house was tensed and eveyone had dinner and went to

their rooms.


Shiva was stralling on Terrace and the flashbacks of kidnapping were haunting him.


"Shayad Raavi sahi hai maine agar usse plan ke bare mei bata diya hota toh woh khatro ke

khiladi banke Dev aur Rishita Bhabhi ko wapas lene aadhi raat ko na jati aur uski jaan bhi

khatre mei nahi padte. Agar uss din Raavi ko kuch ho gaya ho toh....."


Tears filled his eyes. He stood by the railing meanwhile Raavi made two cups of Tea and

came on Terrace.


"Le chai pe le..."


"Maine pehle bhi kaha tha chai pene se sar ka dard jata hai, dil ka nahi...."


"Par 'SORRY' se toh dil ka dard kam hota haina...??"


Shiva turned towards Raavi. Raavi kept the tray on the railing and hold her ears

"SORRY,Bachpan se le ke aaj tak tujhe 'Jangli' 'Gawar' aur na jane kya kya kehne ke liye,

SORRY, Ego mein aake tujhe talaq ke liye na na kehne ke liye, SORRY, Tera secret sab ke

samne ulti karne ke liye, SORRY, Tera propsal barbad karne ke liye, SORRY, Har woh choti

badi galti ke liye jo maine aaj tak ki hai maine, maaf kar de apni chipkali ko...Shiva.."


Tears rolled down her eyes, Shiva removed her hands, wiped her tears and cupped her face


"Galti tere ekeli ki nahi thi Raavi, mere bhi utne hi galti thi agar maine tujhe plan ke

bare mein bataya hota toh tu raat ko heroine banke Rishita bhahi ke ghar nahi jaati aur

na hi tu kidnap hoti. Tune bachpan se iss parivar ko apna mana hai, hum sabko apna mana hai

Dhara bhabhi ki pregnancy ki news sun ke tu apna gussa bhula ke wapas aa gai thi, Maa ne

tujhe kitne taane diya par tu palat ke ek jawab nahi dete thi, haste hue tune pure ghar

ka aur hum sab ka dhyaan rakha aur maine badle mei kya kiya...?? SORRY Raavi..."


Tears rolled down his eyes, Raavi wiped his tears and cupped his face


"Mana ki tu rote hue cute lagta hai, par iska matlab yeh thodi hai ki tu Somnath mei badh

laa dega"


They both chukled and hugged. They released the hug.


"Iska matlab hum dono ki galti thi aur amne samne SORRY fituss"


"Aise kaise fituss, is baar hum dono ki galti thi aur maine tujhe pehle ki galtiyon ke lie

maaf kar diya hai par tune kaha kiya mujhe maaf pehle ki galtiyon ke liye."


"Maaf kiya, dil se maaf kiya ......"


They blushed


"Yeh hum dono ke SORRY SORRY ke khel mei chai toh thandi ho gayi"


"Dil ka aur sar ka dard thik ho gaya. Chai ko mar goli.."


"Waise mujhe pata nahi tha ki Sakht Shiva Pandya ka Chuhe jaisa dil itna romantic bhi hai

Kya mast filmy tam-jham kiya tha tune"


"Haan toh kaunsa pehli baar kiya tha ..."


"Pehli baar hi toh tha isse pehle kya flimy tam-jham kiya tha tune ??"


"Kyun, woh Couple competition ke time mai Shiva Pandya se Kartik Aaryan kiske liye bana

tha ...?"


"Mere liye bana tha........!!!!!!!!!!!"


"Aur nahi toh kiske liye bana tha..."


Shiva holded Raavi's hands


"Shiva Pandya ki zindagi mei sirf ek ladki thi, ek ladki hai aur ek hi ladki rahegi aur

uss ladki ka naam hai 'RAAVI SHIVA PANDYA'. Iss Chattan Pandya ke patthar dil ko pyaar ka

matlab tune samjhaya hai. Aankhein bandh karta hoon toh tera chehra deekhta hai, tujhe

khoo dene ke khayal se jaan nikal jati hai mere. Shiva Pandya ne zindagi mein sirf ek ladki se

pyaar kiya hai...... I LOVE YOU RAAVI............"


Shiva kissed Raavi's hand and they have an eye lock


"Par tere iss I LOVE YOU ka koi jawab nahi hai mere pass, Shiva."


"Mujhe jawab ki koi jaldi bhi nahi hai Raavi. Tu aaram se apna waqt le mai intezar karunga."


"Ek baat toh reh hi gayi..."


"Kya ??"


"Happy New Year, Mere Bandar.."


"Happy New Year, Meri Dobi.."


They chuckled


"Raavi, bohot raat ho gayi hai chal so jate hai."


"Shiva......."


"Kya...??"


"Jab mai yahan wapas aai thi tab maine tujhse kaha tha ki mai kiss haq se humare kamre mei

sou toh mere liye tune humara room chod diya tha. Aaj mai tujhe pure haq se apne kamre

aake sune ke liye keh rahi hoon. Kya tu humare room mei wapas aayega ??"


"Sach mei Raavi..."


"Haa toh jhuthmuth ka room mei aake kaise sote hai.."


She holded Shiva's hand and took him to their room


They both slept on their sides of bed sharing the blanket


Both of them have the flashbacks of beautiful moments spent in their room

.

"Ab kuch bhi ho jaye, Shiva tu yeh room chod ke kahi nahi jayega."


"Promise, kahi nahi jaunga. Good Night."


"Good Night."


Raavi kept her lips on Shiva's cheek


"Raavi...."


"Haan toh kya sirf tu hi kar sakta hai, mai nahi kar sakti."


"Matlab tu soyi nahi thi....."


"Nahi, mai deekhna chahti thi ke tu kya karta hai..."


Raavi leaned her head on Shiva's chest. They cuddled

.

OK THIS WAS MY FIRST TRY FOR FF. KAISA LAGA BATANA !!

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Posted: 3 years ago
#2

Loved it! Wish we'd had this on the show....

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Posted: 3 years ago
#3

Loved it ❤️

Do write more

Welcome to the forum 🤗

What’s your name by the way 😳

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Posted: 3 years ago
#4

This is so so good specially raavi's apology😍😍😍 and finally shiva's acknowledgment ki plan raavi ki jaan le sakta tha he understood the gravity 💗💗💗plus raavi asking shiva to come and sleep together my heart💖💖💖😭😭😭 (ye din show me kab aayega😭)

keep writing more💜

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Posted: 3 years ago
#5

This is so beautiful 😭😭❤❤kaash aisa show Mei bhi hota .....pls continue really loved it

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Posted: 3 years ago
#6

This what progress is known as

Beautifying the relationship between them making understanding it will gradually lead to love.............

Instead of all tgese kands if the makers keep it light hearted it would probably fetch love ❤❤❤.

BTW loved the story..........

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Posted: 3 years ago
#7

This was SO FUN and romantic and fluff!

By God.

Such light hearted conversations with Shivi being themselves.

Loved it!

Keep Writing ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#8

Shaxi

Call me shaks 😌😌

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Posted: 3 years ago
#9

Beautiful❤️

This is what we want

Loved it😍loved how they TALKED about the problem without involving the Bhaabhi👍

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Posted: 3 years ago
#10

Beautiful 😍

This is the kind of progression we want in the show but alas 😐

Loved it.❤️

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