Musical Yearnings( Completed) - Page 3

Hey guys, i changed this story name to "MUSICAL YEARNING" And will upsate some more parts of it.........

As if for now this part- 2 is here.......

I personally recommend to swotch on the song and put on your headphones and than read thus story...............

Hope so you enjoy.........

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PART-II

(Mainu tere naal hoya pyaar)

It was Raavi, his Raavi... .. .. ..

He picked up His phone and says,

"Yeh chipkali mujhe marvayegi kisi din............ "

He picks up the call and she say,

"Hello....... "

"Hello........ "

There was an silence for sometime and than both spoke toegether,

"Kaisa gya din.... "

Saying this in unison both laugh lovingly and Shiva starts telling and walking out of his room,

"Main bass dukan gya tere jaane ke baad fir late ho gya thoda sa kyon kii delivery aaayi thi....... "

Shiva while talking walked towards the stairs , Raavi says,

"Tune khana kha liya..... "

Shiva replies and enters the balcony

"Haa kha liya tha........... "

Raavi tha says,

"Tujhe pata hai massi maa aur mausa paa bhut hi khush the mere aane par........ "

Shiva was looking at the sky and says,

"Chalo koii toh khush tere wahan jane se........ "

Than shiva moves his eyes down and saw one of the etheral sight Raavi was sitting on the chair like a kid by crossing her legs and fidgeting with a small box in her hand ,she was shining in the moonlight.

Tere naal akh ladi

Tere naal akh ladi

Akhan hoyian chaar

Akhan hoyian chaar

Mainu tere naal tere naal tere naal

Hoya ae pyaar

Hoya ae pyaar

She adds,

"Shiva massi maa toh mujhe akela chod hi nahi rahi thi main badi mushkil se aayi yahan tujhse baat karne............mujhe toh aisi feeling aa rahi hai jaise main apne boyfriend se baat kar rahi hoon......... Sabse chupkar"

She giggled her cheeks turned red and blushy as she was talking to him sneaking from her massi maa.

Shiva also chuckles looking at her wife and says,

"Samne dekh....... "

Raavi lifts her eyes and look at front here she finds her husband standing in front of her wearing his vest looking at get lovingly his smile is thing which Raavi can admire whole day. Shiva speaks breaking her trance,

"Yeh bhi theek hai. . . .. . . Boyfriend na sahi pati toh hai"

Tere naal galan hoyian

galan ne hazaar

Galan ne hazaar

Raavi chuckles and stands from the chair and came in front, She was not wearing a dupatta and only thing which was outshining was the mangalsutra, that mangalsutra which marks her as his he admires her,

Mainu tere naal tere naal tere naal

hoya ae pyaar.....

Raavi says,

"Shiva main na tere liye kuch layi hoon.. . . . "

Mainu tere naal tere naal tere naal hiya ae pyaar.....

"Dikha....... . . . "

Raavi clicks the picture still on the call and whatsapp him he opens the chats and looks at the picture, he looks at her with tears in his eyes, it was having a ring which design was same as the one his maa gave to his father, and says,

"Raavi... Yeh... Kahan se..... "

Raavi says,

"Tune ikk baar story batayi thu na kaise kaki ne kaka ko yeh ring di thi...... Aur tujhe yeh ring bhut pasand thi........ Tune photo dikhayi bhi dikhayi........ Tune mujhe ring di thi par maine kuch nahi diya tha maine yeh ussi din jeweller ko design de diya tha aur ajj mili hai yeh........ "

Tere naal gallan hoyian

gallan ne hazaar

Gallan ne hazzar

Shiva looks at her lovingly and Raavi brings up her hand and gestures Shiva to wipe his tear. He does the same. Shiva says,

"Thank you.. . . "

Mainu tere naal tere naal tere naal

Hoya ae pyaar...

Tere naal galan hoyian

Galan ne hazaar

Shiva asks,

"Par Raavi paise kahan se aaye.. . ."

Raavi says sheepishly,

"Woh maine na apni gulak tod li thi.. . .. . . "

Shiva says suspiciously,

"Sirf gulak.. . .. "

Raavi pouts shiva says,

"Raavi... . .. . "

She replies,

"Maine apni thode se gehne bhi de diye the.. . .. . Par vo main pehnati nahi thi bilkul bhi.. . .. . Bore ho gayi thi issi liye.. . .. . .. "

Shiva adds,

"Raavi tune mujhe gift dene ke liye apni savings aur gehne.. . .. Dono.. . .. . .. main tujhe itna bhi.. . .. "

Raavi cutts him,

"Nahi shiva.. . .. . Mujhe khud apne paise se tujhe kuch dena tha.. . .. . ."

Shiva says,

"I LOVE YOU chipkali.. . .. . "

Raavi looks at him teary eyed she knew he loved him but he never admitted it and now he said she do not have words.

Mainu tere naal

tere naal

tere naal

"Raavi..... . . Ro mat.. . . "

"I... . Love you shiva.. . .. . . "

Hoya ae pyaar

Hoya ae pyaar....

Shiva smiles widely and the talk continues.. . .. . .. . .

He on his balcony she on her balcony not leaving each others eyes.

"We are apart but still close......

Difference is i can admire you here express my love here but can't flung my arms around you and make you feel my love"

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Hope you guys like this part.....

Next part will have Shiva sneaking in Raavi's room.......

Stay tuned.....

Open for suggestions.......

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ODETTE_DELUSION

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Awwiieeee😍😍😍

This is realllyyyy sweet

I love how Shiva is sooo restless without her and how they are chupke se talking on the terrace...sooo romantic☺️

Loved it❤️waiting for the next part🤗

Originally posted by: Paru95

Awwiieeee😍😍😍

This is realllyyyy sweet

I love how Shiva is sooo restless without her and how they are chupke se talking on the terrace...sooo romantic☺️

Loved it❤️waiting for the next part🤗

Will update soon......

Stay tuned........

Hayee! This is so freaking adorable 😍😍😍

They are indeed behaving like boyfriend-girlfriend jo family se chupke baat kr rhe hai 😅

That little gesture of Raavi raising her hand and asking him to wipe his tears had my heart

And their confession is so subtle❤️ you penned it so beautifully.

Also the song suits it perfectly ❤️

Thanks for the tag 😊

Originally posted by: Nicky-nish

Hayee! This is so freaking adorable 😍😍😍

They are indeed behaving like boyfriend-girlfriend jo family se chupke baat kr rhe hai 😅

That little gesture of Raavi raising her hand and asking him to wipe his tears had my heart

And their confession is so subtle❤️ you penned it so beautifully.

Also the song suits it perfectly ❤️

Thanks for the tag 😊

Your comment brought a smile on my face..........

Next part will be out soon......

Hope you like that.......

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Awsome as always 😍😍😍😍 haye do you heard pakistani songs 😍😍😍?

Originally posted by: aimmyangle

Awsome as always 😍😍😍😍 haye do you heard pakistani songs 😍😍😍?

Originally posted by: Odette_delusion

i love to hear pakistani songs and even love to watch pak dramas too....

Really .. kon kon s dekhay.. lols i m also pakistani n madly in love with pakistani dramas 🤣🤣🤣

Originally posted by: aimmyangle

Really .. kon kon s dekhay.. lols i m also pakistani n madly in love with pakistani dramas 🤣🤣🤣

Hum kahan kay sachay thay

Ranjha ranjha kardi

Khaani

Ishqia

Chupke chupke

Khuda aur mohabbat 1,2 and 3

Raqeeb se.....

.......and more.............

Wait a minute are you from pakistan what's your real name

Actually i like pakistani names to😅