Musical Yearnings( Completed) - Page 6

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Posted: 3 years ago
#51

NO no no no no. Yeh Kya hoi gawa?? MU and that too because of that durdasha?? My Dil 💔.


Iay jit wait until this story is finish to read the next part. Yeh heartbreak mujhse na seh payega. But looking forward to read how this all resolved. ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

NO no no no no. Yeh Kya hoi gawa?? MU and that too because of that durdasha?? My Dil 💔.


Iay jit wait until this story is finish to read the next part. Yeh heartbreak mujhse na seh payega. But looking forward to read how this all resolved. ❤️

thnks❣️❣️

Next update is on the way.........

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Posted: 3 years ago
#53

I love it how you turned the events 😍😍😍❤️❤️❤️ wi8ing for next part...

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: aimmyangle

I love it how you turned the events 😍😍😍❤️❤️❤️ wi8ing for next part...

thanks❣️❣️

Next part is in progress will be there soon............

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Posted: 3 years ago
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PART-lV

(Tere dil ka mere dil se)




"Pyaar toh tha Shiva....... Jo maine mehsoos kiya tha......... Jo hamare beech tha....... Phir kio kiya........ "


Shiva gets shocked he cups her face so that he can see her eyes and face clearly which she was not showing him properly and say,


"Raavi kya hua aise kio bol rahi hai.......... "


Raavi didn't replied she felt disgust as she remembered Disha hugging Shiva and removed his hands and put her hands in her and entangles them and says,


"Kio kiya.Shiva kio kiya.. . . .. . . "


Shiva was stunned to see her like this he himself felt helpless and holds her hands entangled in her hairs and removed them as she was hurting herself.



Tere dil ka mere dil se


Rishta purana hai


In aankhon se har aansoo


Mujhko churana hai


Mujhko churana hai..


Mujhko churana hai



She calms down a bit and he caressed her hairs to fixes them which she had entangled and hugs her by keeping her head on his chest and says,


"Raavi, bol kya hua hai.......... "



Raavi starts crying and hitting his chest and says choking,


"Shiva tu mujhse pyaar nahi karta toh jhooth kio bola kio umeed jagayi...... Bol na..... Kio.... Kio..... Tu Disha....... Tu aur disha......... Dono..... Tu mujhe dhoka de raha hai...... Shiiva..... "


Shiva now understands what us making Raavi so vulnerable as she must have seen disha hugging him but not the aftermath of the action. And also gets astonished about how purely she loves him as seeing him with another women made her land in this state and thinks that he has to protect this naive soul.




Teri bechaini ka, teri tanhayi ka


Ehsaas hai mujhko sun..


Main jo saath tere hoon


Phir tujhe hai kaisa gham


Dard baant lenge hum sun..




Raavi collapsed after crying and hitting him and hold his shirt and keeps her head on his chest tears pooling from her eyes and says,


"Shiva. . .tune yeh ring yeh sab Dhara bhabhi ki wajah se kiya na.. . .. . . Mujhe pehle kio nahi bataya tune main kabhi bhi zid nahi karti.. . .. Teri jindagi kharab nahi karti.. . .. . .. Tu disha ko pasand karta hain na.........mera dimag hi......nahi hai........main sach mein dobi hoon..........."


Raavi starts hitting her palm on her head shiva holds her hand and cups her face and says,


"Shant ho ja Raavi.. . .. . .. Aisa kuch bhi nahi hai.. . .. . .. Tu pehle shant ho ja.. . .. . .. "



And Raavi says,


"Main tujhse bhut pyaar kiya Shiva.. . .. . Bhut jyada.. . .. .tune mere bare mein ikk baar bhi nahi socha. . . .. . "


In palkon mein khushiyon ka


Sapna sajana hai


Tere dil ka mere dil se


Rishta purana hai



He says,


"Meri baat nahi sunegi ikk baar.. . .. . Ki kya hua tha.. . .. . .. . Bass ikk baar sunle.. . .. . "


Raavi looks at him with teary eyes and Shiva says,


"Main bilkul sach bolunga.. . .. . . Raavi tujhe dhokhe main nahi rakhunga.. . . .. . . Samjhi.. . . "


He pauses and says,


"Main disha ko pasand nahi karta vo aayi thi aur usne mujhe hug kiya maine nahi.. . .. . .. . Maine use dhakka mara aur bol diya kii raavi hi meri biwi hai.. . .. . Jise main pyaar karta hoon.. . .. . .. Aur use kabhi nahi chodunga.. . .. . .. . Tune adha hi dekha chipkali.... . .. . .. Maine toh keh diya usse mujhe meri Gauri ka intezaar karna hai..........par tu aayi hi nahi.......tu issi liye nahi aayi thi na tune uss dur dasha ko mere saath dekh liya tha.............meri jindagi nein kisi ki bhi jagah nahi hai Raavi tere ilava.............."


Shiva talked to her like a little kid and Raavi listened him not leaving his eyes and says,


"Shiva tu mujhe pyaar karta hain na yeh sab jo bhi hai mere beech mein jhooth nahi hai na........nahi hain na........"


Shivaa nods and says,


"Gadhedhi sirf aur sirf tujhse hi karta hoon.. . .. . .. .jaise vo bairagi sirf aur sirf apni gauri ka tha vese yeh shiva sirf aur sirf apni Raavi ka hai........."


Raavi hugs him and both stumble down on the floor , Raavi cries loudly and whimpers and says,


"Main daar gayi thi Shiva........ Bhut jyada daar gayi thi. ....... Mujhe laga main akeli ho gayi phir se.......... Mere pass khone ko kuch nahi hai bass jo hai tu hai............. Aur ajj jab maine tujhe......... Dekha mujhe laga jaise mera dil nikal kar kisi ne kuchal diya................ Main daar gayi thi........... Main tere bina bikhar jaungi Shiva............. Ajj main jab vapas aayi na yeh choodiyan yeh shingaar sab kuch bhut hi banavati lgg raha tha kisi bhi cheez mein rang nahi lgg raha tha . . . . . . . . Tere bina yeh sab feeka hai Shiva............ Main tere saath thi na tab mujhe lgta hain main secure hoon main khush hoon..............mera pyaar jhootha nahi hai Shiva ..................."


She keeps on sniffling and Shiva caressed her head and says,


"Ro mat bacha..... Please....... Ro mat mujhse nahi dekha jata..... Please......... "


Kaise main bataaoon yeh


Tera is tarah rona


Dekha nahi jaata hai sun..


Shaam jab dhalti hai


Subah muskurati hai


Khushbuyein lutati hai sun..



Shiva make Raavi sit and he also settles near her still engulfing her in a hug and says,


"Raavi agar aisa kabhi bhi kuch bhi ho tu sabse pehle mere pass aana mujhse lad lena mujh par chilla lena par khud ko saza mat dena.. . .. . "




Udaasi ke lamhon mein


Hamein muskurana hai


Tere dil ka mere dil se


Rishta purana hai


In aankhon se har aansoo


Mujhko churana hai



By saying this He points at her arms where she has dug her nails and in some places bruises have form and in some places bleeding had started he breaks the hug removes his shirt and cleans her wounds with the shirt and keep it aside and than move his hand gently on her arms to soothe the pain.

This overwhelmed Raavi and her tears pooled again Shiva joined their forehead again and wiped her tears and raavi says,


"I am sorry.. . .. . .. . Pata nahi Mujhe kya ho gya tha.. . .. . .. . Mujhe kuch samajh nahi aaya.. . .. . . "


Shiva says,


"Shhhhhhh..... . . "


Both stayed in the position.. . .. .


.. . .. . .. .TO BE CONTINUED


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Hey guys, this part will have a continuity from the scene itself.. . .. . .. Hope so you all like it.. . .. . . I am open for suggestions.. . .. . .. Do comment and telll.. . .. . .


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Edited by Odette_delusion - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
#56

lovely....song it just💕💕

waiting for next part😘😘

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Posted: 3 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: virangna2005

lovely....song it just💕💕

waiting for next part😘😘

thank you ❤❤

Will update soonish..............

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Posted: 3 years ago
#58

Sorry late to the club but loved all of them ❤️

Personally I love to imagine situations based upon m songs also love to hear romantic songs

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: VaishnaviG

Sorry late to the club but loved all of them ❤️

Personally I love to imagine situations based upon m songs also love to hear romantic songs

thanks for reading 📖
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Posted: 3 years ago
#60

Yet another amazing update ❤️

The way Shiva was treating Raavi with so much care and love and him calling her "Bacha" made me 🥺

And the song is just 💖💖 the lyrics added charm to this situation and suited so well on Shivi at this moment. Clearly depicting what Shiva actually feeling seeing his Raavi like this. 🥺🥺

Thanks for the tag 🤗

Waiting to read more.

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