Musical Yearnings( Completed) - Page 7

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Posted: 3 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Nicky-nish

Yet another amazing update ❤️

The way Shiva was treating Raavi with so much care and love and him calling her "Bacha" made me 🥺

And the song is just 💖💖 the lyrics added charm to this situation and suited so well on Shivi at this moment. Clearly depicting what Shiva actually feeling seeing his Raavi like this. 🥺🥺

Thanks for the tag 🤗

Waiting to read more.

thank you for reading ❣️❣️

Will update soon........

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Posted: 3 years ago
#62

So soooo sooooooo beautiful❤️

Loved everybit of it

Loved this caring and soft Shiva☺️

Waiting for the next part🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: Paru95

So soooo sooooooo beautiful❤️

Loved everybit of it

Loved this caring and soft Shiva☺️

Waiting for the next part🤗

thank you ❤❤

Next part will be there soon.......

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Posted: 3 years ago
#64

This was sooooo sweet part... The way her hurt break his heart and he took care of her was so beautifully written 😍😍😍😍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ waiting for next

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Posted: 3 years ago
#65

Amazingly Beautiful 👏, in this chapter Shiva has my whole ❤️, the way he handled Raavi 💗🥰 and the song selection…. uff one of my favourite 🥰🥰🥰

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Posted: 3 years ago
#66

A beautiful song and so glad that durdasha rift didn't last thing. Loved how they voiced and clarified everything. And Shiva taking care of Raavi❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: aimmyangle

This was sooooo sweet part... The way her hurt break his heart and he took care of her was so beautifully written 😍😍😍😍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ waiting for next

thnk you ❣️❣️

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#68

Originally posted by: Luvs_SanIsh

Amazingly Beautiful 👏, in this chapter Shiva has my whole ❤️, the way he handled Raavi 💗🥰 and the song selection…. uff one of my favourite 🥰🥰🥰

thank you ❤❤
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#69

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

A beautiful song and so glad that durdasha rift didn't last thing. Loved how they voiced and clarified everything. And Shiva taking care of Raavi❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#70

PART-V

(O saiyaan)


Shiva says,

"Shhhhhhh..... . . "

Both stayed in the position shiva and Raavi's forehead was touching and Raavi can feel his breathe on her face, Shiva was totally lost in the moment he slowly started leaning in Raavi was also giving in the situation, they were inches apart when Shiva came in the senses he pulls back as he do not want to speed up in this relationship and also didn't want to do anything in heat of the moment he stands up and says,

"Raavi main chalta hoon....... Tu rona mat aur haan so jana aaram se. . . . "

He was leaving when Raavi hold his hand and look at him pleadingly and said,

"Please stay............ "


Meri adhoori kahaani

Lo daastaan bann gayi


Shiva looks at her and he cannot deny so ge sat back on the floor with her and Raavi hugs him by digging her head in crook of his neck Shiva hold her assuringly.



Ho Tune chhuaa aaj aise

Main kya se kya ban gaya



Shiva could feel her hot tears he looks at her and Raavi looks at him back she pecks his lips hesitantly Raavi herself cannot understand why she did this but at that moment she needed this.



Sehme huey sapne mere haule-haule angdaiyaan le rahe

Thehre huey lamhe mere nayi-nayi gehraiyaan le rahe

Zindagi ne pehni hai muskaan

Karne lagi hai itna karam kyun na jaane



Shiva was taken aback by her move and look back at Raavi her eyes were still wet they had an eyelock and tears made their way out of her eyes Shiva can't bear this he leans in and kisses out the tears on her cheeks he again stays with their nose touching and he gulps and slowly kisses her forehead and lingers there.



Karvat lene lage hai armaan phir bhi hai

Aankh num kyun naa jaane O Saiyyan.....



It was not just a kiss but a promise, a promise of not leaving her, a promise of assurance about not cheating her and most importantly a promise of love. Raavi cannot contain this havoc of emotion she had a feeling of abandonment, a feeling of insecurity, a feeling of being a liability only and suddenly the kiss it was making her land into the fairy land again from where she has always came out broken......she was scared.

They broke the kiss and look at each other. Raavi was shiverinh her chest heaving and Shiva knew her trance she had been a lot in her life just two words of assurance and two moments of sense of security cannot make up for all that he rotated her and engulfed her in his arms in such a way her back was flushing with his chest. He hugged her like a blanket covering her entirely and Raavi who was still trembling leaned into him.



Odhu teri kaaya

Solah sigaar main saja loon

Sangam ki ye raina isme tyonhar main mana loom



She was calming down and keeps her head into nape of his neck and inhales his scent and settles.



Khushboo teri choo ke kastoori main ho jaaun

Kitni pheeki thi main sindoori main ho jaaun



Shiva carreses her head and whispers in her ears,

"Daar mat Raavi..........tu iss baar akeli nahi rahegi............tune kaha tere paas khone ko khush nahi mere siwa arre meri Raavi mere pass toh tu hi hai hamesha se.........mera haar dard tujhe pata hain toh kya main tujhe chod sakta hoon............tune kaha ki mere bina tu bikhar jayegi tujhe kya pata Main tere bina bikhar jaunga aur aise ki iss duniya main koii bhi mujhe sambhal nahi payenga kio kiii hamesha tune hi toh sambhala hai............."

He pauses at saw Raavi was looking at him and he points at the scattered things on the floor near them and says,

" yeh choodiyan, yeh shingaar sab kuch banavati hai mujhe bilkul pasand nahi............ Par jab tu pehnati hai na ........sab kuch bhut hi suhana bhut hi acha lagta hain ............mere bina jaise tujhe sab kuch feeka lagta hain na vese meri duniya toh tere bina kuch hai hi nahi........ Main tere saath bitaye pal agar nikal doo na toh meri jindagi main rang hi nahi honge.............kio kii rang toh sab tune hi bhaare hai na....................main tuje kaise chod sakta hoon bol..............mujhe jine ke liye teri jarrorat hain............. "

Raavi kisses him on his lips cutting him off as he have contered answer all the things which she has spoken to him few hours ago she cannot sustain more she was draining the words he spoke were making her feel important...... Being important is what she always lagged no one made her feel like that and he was loving her, relishing her and telling her that his life is dependant on her.

She just can't contain she just kissed him.



Sur se zara behki huyi meri duniya thi badi be-suri

Sur mein tere dhalne lagi

Bani re piya main bani baansuri

Zindagi ne pehni hai muskaan

Karne lagi hai itna karam kyun na jaane



Shiva kissed her back deepening the kiss Raavi was whimpering in between. Shiva also can't hold back as feel of her make him go crazy and right now she was in his arms kissing him he cannot bottle up his feelings now he picked Raavi up in his arms in bridal style took her to the bed and kissed her again, Raavi brought her hand on his gead and entangled with his hairs thus bringing him more near to her, both didn't broke apart as if they will break this kiss the world will seperate them.

They became breathless so Shiva moved back a little and started tracing wet kisses from her cheeks to her neck and than to collarbone tugging at her dori from his hands and loosening the kurti he kisses her cleavage and was about to remove tge kurti when he looks at raavi for permission and she blinks her eyes in assurance and he removes her kurti and his vest simultaneously he made up his was way to her curves where he firmly hold her and made love making Raavi content. He was very gentle with her in order to not scare her by his desire and also considering her emotionally weak condition.

Raavi was on another world she was feeling important, complete and cherished at the same time the way his strong torso feels against her skin she was on high.



Karvat lene lage hai armaan phir bhi hai

Aankh num kyun naa jaane O Saiyyan…



They way Shiva hold her close to him the way he was so gentle with her treating her like a glass doll. Made her feel precious finally after a long make out session both settle down in each others arms and Raavi covered them with the blanket she entwined there hands and whispers in his ear,

"Thank you.......... I love you...... "



Mere aasmaan se jo hamesha gumshuda thay

Chaand taare tune garrdishon ki lay badal di

Laut aaye aaj saare…



A smile danced on his lips he pecks her forehead and says,

"I love you more.. . .. . .. "



O Saiyyan



Raavi slept in his embrace the moonlight from window entered into the room as if witnessing the union of them and bestowing blessings from the heavens. Shiva looked at the girl in his arms he kisses her forehead and hold her more closer to him. And looks at stars and thinks in his mind.



"So hold her closer when she cries, hold her closer when she feels.

She needs a hand to hold, someone who will never let her go again and Don't say goodbye............

stand by her side protect this naive soul,the girl right in your arms is the one who keeps you at top before anyone,your duty is to give her what she deserves.............

Your one step towards her bring thousands of new hapiness and dreams in her life...........

Never break them............"


THE END...

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Hey guys, hope so you all like this update.

Do tell your suggestions.


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Yours

ODETTE_DELUSION

Edited by Odette_delusion - 3 years ago

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