Abhimanyu Birla: A man who is still a boy - Page 5

Originally posted by: Khayali_pulao

Noor🤗

Sach mein you are a Noor….Had goosebumps reading this. How can you so aptly define someone feelings and thought process.

I am in love with this poem and I am once again in love with Abhimanyu Birla❤️❤️💕

Your good name please? I heard Amnu calling you Ashu... So just confirming 🤗

I don't know what I have really written to get such amazing reviews. Seriously when I wrote that yesterday, it might have took an hour with all the typing and then copy pasting it here and writing sowm words again... I felt it was good. No doubt but I never imagined that this will fully resonate with you all and more than that do justice to Abhimanyu Birla.

I don't know how I do that... Maybe from seive of my experiences and maybe writing from the age of 9 helps me. I don't know but yes, your guys reviews keeps me going!

Abhimanyu Birla is a man we will always be in love with 🤗

Thank you for such a lovely review and I really can't thank you enough for that ❤️

Originally posted by: D_e_s_t_i_n_y

Beautiful😍

Thanks for tag prachi

Thank you so much 🤗

And yep... Prachi, thank you so much for tagging everyone else too ❤️

Originally posted by: Eternized_Blues

Edited on page 4

I replied 🤗and it was such a lovely and heartwarming review Amnu 😳

Originally posted by: rittika

Waooo this is beautiful….every aspect / detailing and mood has been aptly described in this poem.❤️❤️❤️❤️

prachi1967 thank you for suggesting to read its really worth reading🤗🤗🤗

Thank you so much 🥰🥰🥰 all your guys reviews really makes me feel that I have done justice to my one of the favorite character 🤗

Originally posted by: Zenab78

Here are few of my favorites... It's hard to pick few but I did

Darr lagta tha ki jab ye toota hua dil kisi ko dunga

This was so relatable during mask festival he wanted to deny but his heart accepted.

But His fears did came true coz he is heart broken not once but many times. 🥺

Dil agar toota nahi toh judega kaise... Humne agar chote khaayi nahi toh aane wale tufaano se ladenge kaise?

Bolo bolo 😳

Enjoy the heartbreaks. Learn from the hurt. "Peeda se bada koi aur shikshak nahi hota" jaaneman. Jis Noor se mili ho woh bhi bas ussi dard se toh bani hai.

Bas itna hi kehna hai mujhe Abhimanyu Birla se ... Waise toh usse sab pata hi hai

Kaise bataun usse ki main ye tha hi nahi

This is clearly visible... The change in Abhimanyu. He was so broken but when she came he forgot all his pain and started feeling things which he never felt before.

And no one else can ever make him feel those feelings again. Akshara and only Akshara will have that power over his heart.

I was reading a story (years back) and there was this quote- I love you and I gave you my heart and it's on you... Whether you Destroy it or cherish it. All I know is I am going to accept both with a smile.

And he did that :)

Toote huye mujh mein

Wo mera hissa ban chuki thi

She is part of him ... It may look cringe right now due to rishta but they both are there to save each other

He still finds solace in her voice. ❤️

They complete it other and no one is flawless everyone does their fair share of mistakes. They both did few mistakes in form of sacrifices for their families.

I don't think it still look cringe. She has become a part of his long before Aarohi rishta even happened and bewakoofi ki hai ... Dono ne ki hai lekin agar ye nhi bhi hota and he was moving on for real toh kya aage badhne se pichli mohabbat choot jaati hai?

Alfaazo mein nahi wo aankhon se bohot kuch keh jaati hai

This is what he fell for... Her eyes are so expressive...That pain in her eyes is visible

She can express herself through her eyes and Abhi is confident in his love just because he knows it that what he saw in her eyes was not a lie.

I still want conversations between them but as a person who enjoys silence they always do justice to that ❤️ and I am glad you liked it 🤗

Their love is something I will never be able to put in words... Kyunki shayad wo alfaazo mein kaid hone ke liye Bane hi nahi hai. Wo toh bas udne ke liye bane hai... Khule aasman mein.. prem ke rang bikherne ke liye

Originally posted by: ishqdinoorhai9

Your good name please? I heard Amnu calling you Ashu... So just confirming 🤗

Yes you can call me Ashu😊

I don't know what I have really written to get such amazing reviews. Seriously when I wrote that yesterday, it might have took an hour with all the typing and then copy pasting it here and writing sowm words again... I felt it was good. No doubt but I never imagined that this will fully resonate with you all and more than that do justice to Abhimanyu Birla.

I don't know how I do that... Maybe from seive of my experiences and maybe writing from the age of 9 helps me. I don't know but yes, your guys reviews keeps me going!

Your experiences shows up the way you write and pull those perfect words. Keep going👏

Abhimanyu Birla is a man we will always be in love with 🤗

Thank you for such a lovely review and I really can't thank you enough for that ❤️

Me in pink.

My pleasure dear ❤️🤗

Originally posted by: ishqdinoorhai9

Thank you so much 🥰🥰🥰 all your guys reviews really makes me feel that I have done justice to my one of the favorite character 🤗

You truly have , done a fab job🤗🤗

Noor yaar im so happy with how many many comments your poetry has gotten!! And so many detailed ones too. I just went through all of them with the biggest smile on my face. Well deserved 🤗as mush said, i think im also a fan of yuor poetry more than your ss which are amabsolutrly amazing btw but nothing compares to what you wrote here i dont think anything will

how did i miss this???? omg!! this is just out of the world. no words!! absolutely no words. this is the best thing i read today. thank you so much for putting so much efforts in writing. to make something and comprehend something so deep and then execute it is a real task and let me tell you you have aced it. i'm a fan of yours now. now i will continuously ask for another one on akshara until you give it to me. god i'm becoming such a stalker these days. I stalked mushfika too for her OS and sent her PMs and now you🤣i hope you don't think i'm some crazy girl LOL

and what the hell? how does it have only 20 likes?? this post is the most underrated post on IF ever!! It's not reaching many people and that's just fair!! everyone should read it to understand abhimanyu's character fully