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Posted: 3 years ago
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Awww Sakshi this is beautiful! I loved how Raavi was worried for Shiva and Shiva consoled her and took care of her ❤️

Kaash show mein bhi kuch aisa ho jaaye, lekin Chaubeys 😡

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

Awww Sakshi this is beautiful! I loved how Raavi was worried for Shiva and Shiva consoled her and took care of her ❤️

Kaash show mein bhi kuch aisa ho jaaye, lekin Chaubeys 😡


Aaliiyyaaaa...i m glad that u like it..!!!❤

Show se umeed lagana bekaar hai..idhar hi khwashein poori houngi.🥲💃

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Sakshi🤗!!! Kinna pyara tha yeh?!!! I would've loved this Jail track if we'd gotten even a fraction of this, so I'm super glad you wrote about it! And how you've written! ❤️

Raavi and Shiva's pain at being seperated, them trying to talk each other into bravery so that they won't suffer too much, Raavi crying and that too with THAT shirt in her hand, Shiva knowing that she just needs that moment of comfort from him. Also, their first kiss!!!! This is the first time you're writing one, isn't it? It was a beautiful scene, and I loved loved loved the little forehead kiss right before it. Gave it a sense of innocence and comfort....

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Sakshi🤗!!! Kinna pyara tha yeh?!!! I would've loved this Jail track if we'd gotten even a fraction of this, so I'm super glad you wrote about it! And how you've written! ❤️

Raavi and Shiva's pain at being seperated, them trying to talk each other into bravery so that they won't suffer too much, Raavi crying and that too with THAT shirt in her hand, Shiva knowing that she just needs that moment of comfort from him. Also, their first kiss!!!! This is the first time you're writing one, isn't it? It was a beautiful scene, and I loved loved loved the little forehead kiss right before it. Gave it a sense of innocence and comfort....


I M SO SO GLAD THAT YOU LIKE ITTT..🥺❤

AND THANKYOU SO MCH FOR SHARING SUCH A PYARA COMMENT.❤

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NO THIS ISN'T MY FIRST *HEHE* I M SUPER INACTIVE ON IF ...WELL ACTUALLY I M LAZY😂

I already had written few crazy stufff.💃

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