TU MERA HUMDARD : ShiVi drabble

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Hey yaa beautiful people..

I hope you all r doing welll❤️

I m back again with a drabble..!!


Happy reading.

"Hiding my face in corner"




Unable to pay the required amount on time, police arrived at pandya niwas and take all the brothers in custody.


Even after many requests, those people did not budge.

Without wasting any other second Raavi, rishita and dhara go to the police station. They tried to make them understand that their husband are innocent..they didn't did anything wrong. It's kamini and rishita's boss who trapped them. But they denied to listen and asked them to meet pandya brothers only for 10mintues.


Seeing shiva behind the bars her heart aches hard. She want to give him bone crushing hug but can't do the bars standing in between them like a great wall.

This is distancing her from him..for few hours...days...or maybe forever.

They entangled their fingers...touch each other forehead. Raavi cry her heart out in front of him. He can't see his chipkali in this state.

He curse the destiny..the luck for showing this day to all. They had some ted talk in which shiva consoles her and raavi gave him strength..herself shivering.

"Tu bharosa rakh mai aaunga jldi"


She turned her head once to see him and he blinked his eyes in giving her assurance.



After all the hurdens pandyas brother are back in house. The matter is solved now.

They all rejoy unknowing from the fact that raavi is in room.

But her bhootnath eyeballs only move to search her. Dhara told him that she is room. With any delay he quickly made his way towards room.


Raavi is in room sitting on the bed showing back to door.

Her hands holding black checked shirt of her bhootnath. She is crying miserably..her face is all swelled up.

She kept murmuring things..which included an apology for not able to save him and help him.


Droplets of tears like a rain falls on his shirt..wetting it in order.

This shirt is close to both of their heart. She gifted him this first time after their marriage.

Despite of misunderstanding and tensions he kept it as it is in cupboard..remembering this she take it close to her heart to calm it down which is beating fast than train.


He saw her and drags his feet close to her.

"Raavi"

Her heart beat once...she turned to find him standing so close to her.

He saw a spark in her swelled eyes as soon as she saw him.

Raavi couldn't hold herself and jump on him for a hug...crying and smiling like an idiot..

She cutched his shirt so tight that he can feel the scraps of her nails on his bare back but he didn't mind that, raavi is with her, in his arms.

She digged her head in hook of his neck so close that he can feel her breath..hot tears made their ocean around the area of his neck.

Shiva is stunned to see this at first. Indeed he want this, she is her stress buster and also his wife.

But he didn't expect this..his chipkali is shechu and he knows she need comfort "he is her comfort place" so he wrapped his arms around waist..taking her small body in his embrace living the moments with the love blooming in their heart.


Soon after mintues raavi realized the situation. And loose the hold on him. She hold his arm..cupped his face and started inspecting him

"Shiva tu thik hai na tujhe kch hua toh nahi na haan bol na shiva tu thk hai na"


"Raavi shant hoja mei thik hu" he said cupping her face.


"Shiva tu pakka thik haina tujhe kahi lgi toh nhi na" she asked


Shiva chuckled at her antics "aey gadedhi itna bada jurm nahi tha jo muje dande padhte smjhi dobi"


"Yaha meri jaan nikali ja rahi thi or tujhe apni colgate smile dikhane ki padi hai" she huffed in anger


Shiva tighten the hold on her waist and pull her closer. Raavi looking away from him hiding the smile. She feels her breath clutched when he tucks a strand of hair behind her ears.

"Tujhe bola tha na mei aaunga or shiva pandya ki jaban jhooth nhi bolti" he said smiling mischievously.


Raavi looks directly into his eyes..digging all the shyness. He is her shiva. Her husband.


He silently placed a small kiss on her forehead. This is sensitive for both..the very first sweet proximity in which they both are comfortable. Coming down he bowed his neck focus on her pale pink lips..he wait for a moment for her answer. She takes a sharp breath in response which he accepted as yes signal.

He place his lips onto hers. Taking folds under teeth..leaving a sweet moan from her mouth. He moves his hand all over back..she grab his hair and deepened the kiss. He slid his tongue inside and they continued to explore each other’s mouths. They broke the kiss when feel the need for air.


He was about to kiss her again, when she pulled her into a hug and he hugged him back tightly.


The night is completely change for them.




Rotten tomatoes not allowed..🤣

See yaa..

Love

~ sakshi.❤️






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Posted: 3 years ago
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Mai aagayaaaaa.... also, phirst!



Chotis this is sooo pyaaraaaa...and you wrote what????Papppiiii....inni badi kab huuiii😳❤️



Alsooo this actually made my mood a little better,, the way you showed Raavi's acceptance and povs I wish chaubey did this to justify atleast,nonethless beautiful piece❤️



~nikki lubs you more.

Edited by Iktara22 - 3 years ago
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Awww ❤️

This is soo adorable 🥺

Raavi's concern for shiva and he understanding that his shechu is scared and comforting her.the kiss was the cherry on top ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Sakshiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

are you kidding me

mujhe yeh chahiye chahiye matlab chahiye😭😭

Chubey g**ndu ko goli maar u take his place😭

I loved this so so so much😭

My heart, those dialogues❤️🥺

I so love it, Chipkali all worried about his bhootnath.

i hate that g**ndu chubey for killing their essence. hattt mujhe nahi khelna

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Originally posted by: Iktara22

Mai aagayaaaaa.... also, phirst!



Chotis this is sooo pyaaraaaa...and you wrote what????Papppiiii....inni badi kab huuiii😳❤️



Alsooo this actually made my mood a little better,, the way you showed Raavi's acceptance and povs I wish chaubey did this to justify atleast,nonethless beautiful piece❤️



~nikki lubs you more.


SURPRISEEE ONLY FOR YOU..CZ KAANDUS ALREADY KNOW HEHE😂

I m badiii okay...😒😑


I m glad that u like it...❤ choubay is..mt puch chodd..kyu layi usko yaha🙂

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Anyways chotiiii loves you.❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Kitni pappi legi for writing this? I love you for writing this sakku, dil ko thandak mili. The entangled fingers, the forehead kiss, that intimacy is so 😭❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Tags because this kaandu kiddo won't🤦🏻‍♀️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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aaha💖💖 love you dear for writing this......

it's lovely.....

want something this to happen very badly😭😭

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Originally posted by: Pixiepadhi

Awww ❤️

This is soo adorable 🥺

Raavi's concern for shiva and he understanding that his shechu is scared and comforting her.the kiss was the cherry on top ❤️


PIXXIEE...I M SO GLAD THAT U LIKE IT

ShiVi understand each other soo welll...in show too.🤏🥺❤

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Posted: 3 years ago
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What a lovely reunion fic .. aisa lag raha tha its all happening before my eyes.. beautiful drabble Sakku❤️

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