Abhimanyu Birla: A man who is still a boy - Page 4

Originally posted by: 2TheMoonAndBack

I would honestly request anyone who have a doubt or confusion about abhis character, to read this poetry. Everything will be crystal clear

Ritu keh rahi hai toh sach hi hoga... So read everyone and don't forget to leave your reviews 😳

Originally posted by: Prachi1967

I don't know how many times I read this poem......but everytime I found .... something new I discovered about abhimanyu....ur writing is good nd soothing......

You guys really know how to leave a poet speechless. Don't you ? But really I am just so so glad you liked it and re read it. To find new things we have to sit back and enjoy the coffee... Abhimanyu Birla is going to that coffee for us. Enjoy it 🤗

So...true...I m not a poem lover....but I don't know what is in ur writing that clicked me....I m totally loving it... keep writing....hope creative r so intelligent...

Originally posted by: Prachi1967

So...true...I m not a poem lover....but I don't know what is in ur writing that clicked me....I m totally loving it... keep writing....hope creative r so intelligent...

Ahhh... Matlab I should really save it in my phone that you guys leave me speechless ☺️maybe our love for Abhimanyu Birla clicked 😉

For will write more 🤗I hope so too aur nahi hai toh Mush and Amnu ko as writers rkh le

Originally posted by: Zenab78

You have carefully chosen all words Noor

You have captured all his phases so beautifully in this poem

Amazing ❤❤

I'm in love with some line they are just Fab

That Abhimanyu ki Akshara has all my heart 🥺❤

Noor you have analyzed Abhi's thoughts so well coz it's not easy to capture everything in form of poem.

Hugs for this beautiful poem 🤗

Zenuuuuuuu.... You are here and you loved this poem 🤗 this really really means a lot and you know it ❤️

I would like to know those lines which are your favourite 🙈

And I am just so so glad you liked it and feel I have done justice to his character ... Haaye ❤️❤️

Thank you and loads and loads of hugs for you

Waooo this is beautiful….every aspect / detailing and mood has been aptly described in this poem.❤️❤️❤️❤️

prachi1967 thank you for suggesting to read its really worth reading🤗🤗🤗

Originally posted by: ishqdinoorhai9

Zenuuuuuuu.... You are here and you loved this poem 🤗 this really really means a lot and you know it ❤️

I would like to know those lines which are your favourite 🙈

And I am just so so glad you liked it and feel I have done justice to his character ... Haaye ❤️❤️

Thank you and loads and loads of hugs for you

Darr lagta tha ki jab ye toota hua dil kisi ko dunga

This was so relatable during mask festival he wanted to deny but his heart accepted.

But His fears did came true coz he is heart broken not once but many times. 🥺

Kaise bataun usse ki main ye tha hi nahi

This is clearly visible... The change in Abhimanyu. He was so broken but when she came he forgot all his pain and started feeling things which he never felt before.

Toote huye mujh mein

Wo mera hissa ban chuki thi

She is part of him ... It may look cringe right now due to rishta but they both are there to save each other

He still finds solace in her voice. ❤️

They complete it other and no one is flawless everyone does their fair share of mistakes. They both did few mistakes in form of sacrifices for their families.

Alfaazo mein nahi wo aankhon se bohot kuch keh jaati hai

This is what he fell for... Her eyes are so expressive...That pain in her eyes is visible

She can express herself through her eyes and Abhi is confident in his love just because he knows it that what he saw in her eyes was not a lie.

Beautiful😍

Thanks for tag prachi

Noor🤗

Sach mein you are a Noor….Had goosebumps reading this. How can you so aptly define someone feelings and thought process.

I am in love with this poem and I am once again in love with Abhimanyu Birla❤️❤️💕

Originally posted by: Eternized_Blues

Reserved!!!

Edited

Noor🤗❤️🤗

I want to start this thread by declaring that all the Abhimanyu haters should come and read this. You will leave where this man comes from and you will leave converted.

Parvaane Zindagi Ke

You described his childhood so perfectly. This is the root of all of his anger, his drive to excel, and his unabashedness. He had no choice to grow up before his age to protect the mother he loves so much. He does not believe in silent love because that is all his mother has done all her life. He lashes out because Manjiri never does. Instead of speaking up, she suffers in silence and that is why he refuses to do that, says what he feels. You have described his parent's failure to protect and nourish his emotional health perfectly.

The Brotherhood

I always say that Neil is Abhomayu's personal rainbow. Neil is Abhimanyu's sunshine, sanity, and sukoon. He is also Abhi's only voice of reason when Abhi's anger is at its peak. You are completely right- Abhimanyu is very lucky to have Neil in his life as Neil is the only one who loves him unconditionally.

Joy of Love

Akshu's voice is the balm to his wounds. She is the pied piper of Abhimanyu Birla. He met her and she made him believe in love and life just by existing and he committed himself to her because the man does not do things halfway. Your words beautifully described what Akshu means to him. How she is his answer from the universe. He is smart enough to understand that and is brave enough to claim what is made for him. Thank you for writing this part. You nailed it.

Pain of Heartbreak

Life without her is impossible but life with her in pain is unbearable...

And this is where the man is. His pain is so well described by you. She is part of him and no one can ever take that away from him. It's the power of one-sided love. You just justified every emotion of Abhimanyu post heartbreak.

This was so lovely. Thank you so much for writing this And I am a fan of your words.

Love,

Amnu

Amnuuu 🤗🤗once again you left me speechless with such a wonderful review. I am, myself is at loss of words but here my heart for you ❤️

I don't know everyone will understand him and its okay.. yesterday I was saw Jay Shetty podcast and there he said, he is okay being misunderstood. Not everyone will understand him and that's okay. And that really is imprinted in my mind because I am like that. I don't care if someone judges me or thinks something about me which I am not but sabko clarification dena kahan hi zaruri hai. Kyunki no matter what, they will think what they want. So I leave it to that.

Coming to reviews: when I think about Abhimanyu, all I see is one parent trying to dominate and suppressing the other and that pretty much messed up him. Then it was easier to write...

Abhimanyu and Neil is my forever ship. If Akshara is a part of him, so is Neil and that's just the beauty of it. Like you said, Neil is the voice of reason in his madness.

You completely described how he would have felt the first time he fell in love and it's joy of love Amnu I sacchii wala love you 🤗Akshara is just the answer of all his questions. Everytime he have cursed his fate in past, fate have added more love to Akshara. Their love is one of a kind. So complicated yet nothing ever have been so simple.

His heart break is something that's close to me because heart breaks taught us about love more than love will. And he is learning and he learnt that he could live without her but not with her in pain. And he is still doing everything in his power for pain to not touch her nd yet everything he could to have her in his arms. Just one sign that she is more in pain than in happiness for her sister wedding and kainaat is going to see the storm Abhimanyu Birla will bring.

Their love is... Ahh.. writing the last part made my heart race so fast... I am just waiting for that.

And thank you so much for such a lovely review Ammu 🤗and I guess now we all are each other fan 😳