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Deepthy

@deeps07

Stunner

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Posted: 3 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: Saakshi2k
Okay I thought of writing something related to latest segment where dhara is listening to music and raavi asking her why she is so happy and then leaves to the room.
This is purely my imagination and yes I am not that good at writing so please bear😆
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So raavi goes to her room irritated at dhara for letting dev rishita leave the house. Shiva follows and finds her walking to and fro around the room. He can't tell her the truth because she is "pet ki kacchi".

S:(admires her and thinks) "yeh dil se kitni saaf h sabke baare me kitna sochti h...me isko sach nahi bata sakta ek baar plan successful hojae fir sab bata dunga" and smiles at her
R:" muskura kyu raha h kya tujhe bhi koi farak nahi pad raha dev-rishita ke ghar chhod ke jaane se..sab ko ho kya gaya h...mene aaj jo subah kaha tha usko soch ke dekho usse kaam asaan hojaega yeh kya zidd h ghar chhod ke jaane ki"
Shiva tries to something but Raavi cuts in between " wese in sab me ek cheez mujhe bahut sahi lagi..dev ne rishita ka saath nahi chhoda...chahe kitni bhi mushkil ho usne uska saath diya..woh usse pyaar karta h aur uski respect aur woh apni zimmedari ache se nibhane jaanta h...unki tarah nahi jo wada karte h kabhi nahi chhodenge aur fir mu fer lete h" she let the last words as whisper and a tear rolled down her cheeks.
(FB of khandar scene when shiva said those words)
Shiva heard that and felt really guilty. He knew he has hurt her so many times.
R- " bol shiva agar aaj Rishita ki jagah me hoti toh tu kya mere saath ghar chhodne ke liye tayar hota..mera saath deta? Yaa fir uss din ki tarah ghar se nikalne ke liye chilla ke bolta"
(FB of mannat track when raavi leaves the house)
He cannot make eye contact with her. Raavi was looking at him waiting for him to say something. Shiva was left with no words. He is really ashamed of his acts and words. He felt bad for not able to make her trust him. She still fears to trust him. Trust him that he will never leave her.He was all silent.
Raavi misunderstood his silence and thinks:" itna bhi mushkil sawal nahi tha Shiva...haan yaa naa me jawab chahie mujhe please bolde nahi chhodega mujhe kabhi please" but he didn't respond.
She again felt heartbroken as she thought he will never be on her side and he is just feeling pity for her. She left the room trying not to cry. Shiva was just looking at her retreating figure. He wanted to shout,scream and tell her he never wanted to leave her, always wanted to stay close to her,to protect her from evil but he was helpless. He was crying for hurting her again and again.
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That's it. Wrote something I hope y'll will like it. Wese bhi makers ko ShiVi love story nahi dikhani toh MU hi dikha de... atleast isi bahane they'll confess their feelings (especially Shiva why he divorced her,why did he changed himself,why agreed to engage even after being married)...but unhe BHABHIIII dikhana h..🤦🏻‍♀️
I am tagging few whom I remember (only able to tag 5)😅so please give feedback on this. If anyone wants to continue this can take this or want to write some OS please do I'll love to read🤩

It's very beautiful dear...u should write more of this..

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mpks1

@mpks1

Trailblazer

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Posted: 3 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: manny136
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KD’s post has been liked by more than 20,000 bots so far 😆 and it is only going to go up😆

Edited by mpks1 - 3 years ago

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1222827

Hibernated

Posted: 3 years ago

#93

https://twitter.com/Jiggy712/status/1473984515370487808?s=20

Strategy to attract ShiVi audience? They might know that haveli sequence was very much loved and so they went there to shoot? Very much possible

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Felicie

@Felicie

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 3 years ago

#94

Would this be a good for me to come out as a bot? 😳

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Paru95

@Paru95

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 3 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: Saakshi2k
Okay I thought of writing something related to latest segment where dhara is listening to music and raavi asking her why she is so happy and then leaves to the room.
This is purely my imagination and yes I am not that good at writing so please bear😆
-------
So raavi goes to her room irritated at dhara for letting dev rishita leave the house. Shiva follows and finds her walking to and fro around the room. He can't tell her the truth because she is "pet ki kacchi".

S:(admires her and thinks) "yeh dil se kitni saaf h sabke baare me kitna sochti h...me isko sach nahi bata sakta ek baar plan successful hojae fir sab bata dunga" and smiles at her
R:" muskura kyu raha h kya tujhe bhi koi farak nahi pad raha dev-rishita ke ghar chhod ke jaane se..sab ko ho kya gaya h...mene aaj jo subah kaha tha usko soch ke dekho usse kaam asaan hojaega yeh kya zidd h ghar chhod ke jaane ki"
Shiva tries to something but Raavi cuts in between " wese in sab me ek cheez mujhe bahut sahi lagi..dev ne rishita ka saath nahi chhoda...chahe kitni bhi mushkil ho usne uska saath diya..woh usse pyaar karta h aur uski respect aur woh apni zimmedari ache se nibhane jaanta h...unki tarah nahi jo wada karte h kabhi nahi chhodenge aur fir mu fer lete h" she let the last words as whisper and a tear rolled down her cheeks.
(FB of khandar scene when shiva said those words)
Shiva heard that and felt really guilty. He knew he has hurt her so many times.
R- " bol shiva agar aaj Rishita ki jagah me hoti toh tu kya mere saath ghar chhodne ke liye tayar hota..mera saath deta? Yaa fir uss din ki tarah ghar se nikalne ke liye chilla ke bolta"
(FB of mannat track when raavi leaves the house)
He cannot make eye contact with her. Raavi was looking at him waiting for him to say something. Shiva was left with no words. He is really ashamed of his acts and words. He felt bad for not able to make her trust him. She still fears to trust him. Trust him that he will never leave her.He was all silent.
Raavi misunderstood his silence and thinks:" itna bhi mushkil sawal nahi tha Shiva...haan yaa naa me jawab chahie mujhe please bolde nahi chhodega mujhe kabhi please" but he didn't respond.
She again felt heartbroken as she thought he will never be on her side and he is just feeling pity for her. She left the room trying not to cry. Shiva was just looking at her retreating figure. He wanted to shout,scream and tell her he never wanted to leave her, always wanted to stay close to her,to protect her from evil but he was helpless. He was crying for hurting her again and again.
----------
That's it. Wrote something I hope y'll will like it. Wese bhi makers ko ShiVi love story nahi dikhani toh MU hi dikha de... atleast isi bahane they'll confess their feelings (especially Shiva why he divorced her,why did he changed himself,why agreed to engage even after being married)...but unhe BHABHIIII dikhana h..🤦🏻‍♀️
I am tagging few whom I remember (only able to tag 5)😅so please give feedback on this. If anyone wants to continue this can take this or want to write some OS please do I'll love to read🤩