Fans can never get enough of ShiVi: Kanwar Dhillon

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I absolutely agree with Kanwar Dhillon. This is an ensemble show and every cast member needs screen space but that said, there is no balance. Too much overdose of BhabiMa is also not good at the same time they are wasting screen spacing by showing 7 mins of the conman cheating Dhara and today they showed Suman’s Jaadhu tona removal techniques for quiet sometime which was again wasted screen space. Those scenes can be edited and made crisper, instead they are editing ShiVi scenes. The crew is doing a bad job with the overall product especially the editing department but the actors cannot be blamed for any of it, they are doing their job.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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It's true KD. fans can never have enough of shivi. I do understand that this is an ensemble cast show and all the characters are equally important and their stories need to be told and like many others I love the family scenes.but as a viewer I do want to see some meaningful shivi scenes once in a while, some conversations where they talk about them,some scenes that are solely about them as a couple where their issues are addressed.sadly despite being an ensemble cast show most of the characters are ignored and one character gets undue importance even in tracks not centred around her.hoping to see more balanced storyline in the future ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Agreed. Although every here and there, acting has to be worked on, writing and editing departments need lots of work done. Writing needs to be logical, positive progression naam ki koi cheez bhi hoti hain, loopholes in logic, blind end tracks need to be avoided. Also, CONVERSATION, between every couple, and otherwise, lacks. And so you don't see these relationships really developing.

As for editing, it needs to be crisper and meaningful. Sometimes it feels like amateurs are editing with the way scenes are cut in half but not blending into each other.

A bit of advice. Scenes should be able to flow into one another if you want the audience to be able to move from one emotion to the next. If you can't show that, then show individual scenes separately, or else the audience will only feel an emotional disconnect.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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It's not about Shivi only what we want is a logical and proper storyline. Gautam, Dev, Raavi and Krish should be explored individually not only for love interest. I personally started to watch this show for family story which are missing now a days. Every plot is so messed up. Dhara and Gautam should have had a proper child track - it was such an emotional track but actors potential were wasted due to poor writing. Loan track is where Dev and Rishita together should be shown not only Rishita let Dev take front seat atleast for once. For Shivi after the divorce track a normal heartfelt conversation not romantic was what we wanted. Krish studying track/ jail effect track should have shown. It's like everyday is a new/ fresh episode with no connection to back episodes. All actors,cast,crew are toiling, working hard but the result shown on screen is not even average. I hope the message is clearly conveyed we don't have problem with any other actor/ charcter we just want progression of Shivi, Gaura and Deshit Krish that's it. Lots of love to entire Pandya Store cast.

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