Her bare back - angad tejo short story

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Posted: 3 years ago
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11pm Shimla


They spoke less on the way home. He was drunk and she was exhausted. She looked little upset. He was watching her from the corner of his eye. He knew she was disturbed. Perhaps memories of her ex still lingering in her distraught mind. He thought deeply. How to help her to move on fully??


Somewhere inside him , he was also aware that she was not happy with the fake engagement. She didn't want to be in any sort of relationship with him. It was not her fault. He could understand her pain and guilt. The pain from fateh's betrayal and the guilt of luring him into the mess. She was guilty that she couldn't feel for him the same way he did for her.


She was after all a kind hearted selfless woman who think about others before herself. He was still determined to help her in a way . But how. He can't reduce her pain but he can reduce her guilt. But how? How to reduce her guilt towards him . He was looking for the solution when she supported him out of the car.


A few minutes later, he was watching her through her reflection in the mirror. She was struggling with the zip of the dress. He was stunned. She was beautiful.


Her bare back

That golden skin folding from her neck rite down to her curvy waist. Soft and smooth. Idiot, how u know its delicacy if u don't touch it?? His heart taunting him angrily but his calm mind interrupted. Control ur horses gentleman , u are a fake fiancee not real one. Then the heart replied again. So what, fiancee is fiancee na, real or fake doesn't matter. The brains couldn't digest the insult and answered , where's ur self respect u want to touch a woman who doesn't love u . The heart says , so what, she doesn't love but she's hot and now she needs help so just take the opportunity. The brain was irritated . Huh ! See u became a monster of lust. U are not that angad mann who respected women. U are a horrible creature.


A tug of war between his heart and mind that he shush them both. His inner voice telling them to be quiet. He took slow pace towards her and then the heart goes again. No need to ask permission. Just help her. Take some advantage. Touch as well. She won't find out. The brain retaliated immediately. No ! Be a gentleman, ask for permission first. He decided to obey his mind. The heart was disappointed.


"Main help kardun tejoji?"

She was surprised to see him rite behind her but she was struggling and really needed help so she replied instantly.

"Thik hain".

O bhale bhale, his heart jumped with joy. O mundiya thoda touch karle. The brain said in return. Thoda control paji. Ledki bhag jayegi. He thought better to listen to the mind and the heart was disappointed once again taunting him . Tu kisi kaam ka nehin hain angad mann. Apni mardangi ko puri life tala legaley. Stay virgin stay happy. U are useless, hopeless and good for nothing.


He was controlling his emotions. His fingers shivered while helping her. The tip of his fingers were restless. But his mind kept encouraging him. Paji control paji. Finally, he was able to solve her problem . He was relieved and then suddenly turned his head away

When the dress dropped on the hard marble floor out of sudden and she screamed feeling embarrassed.


"Tejoji maine kuch nehin dekha ".

His heart taunting him again. Sale dekhle, dekhney ki cheez hain. Roz roz free telecast nehin hota. Yahan to live cast hain. Dekhle jee bharke. But his mind interrupted, get out from the room before u lose all ur senses and after that prespiring in the washroom alone with hand job. He listened to his mind yet once again with his frustrated heart taunting him. Useless!


He was restless full nite. She was the same as well. Don't tell me tmrow he's gonna propose me for marriage. I am going to shut him once and for all and return to him the ring. God! I can't take this anymore. I need to get out of this fake relationship at once. I am feeling suffocated


Her problem was solved in the morning itself when she received a small parcel with a note in it. He left early for work. She sighed. Must be some romantic gift. He got carried away last nite. She decided to open it She read the note first.


Seconds later she was extremely shocked. It was very unexpected.


The note read

Tejoji let's end this fake relationship and start a new one.

Brother hood

From now onwards, call me angad bhai

I would love to be ur sibling.


The gift

Two rakhis . One for rakhsa bhandhan the other for bhaiya duj . In advance.



Moral of the story

This is what we say reverse psychology.

Tejo will start feeling guilty for being unfair to Angad. Perhaps this will be the best way to make her move on .

Earlier she only thought about fateh now she will think about both. She will be lured to both in a way .

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Posted: 3 years ago
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HolyF! Aniash you just didn't made them bhai behan...🤣

Are as a fatejo shipper this is the best time since the marriage, or even beginning. At least there's a closure... knowing UD makers ek din mein sabka kaat dete hain aur pata bhi baad mein chalta hai.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bluekohl

HolyF! Aniash you just didn't made them bhai behan...🤣

Are as a fatejo shipper this is the best time since the marriage, or even beginning. At least there's a closure... knowing UD makers ek din mein sabka kaat dete hain aur pata bhi baad mein chalta hai.


It's better than making him a cupid and then killing him. 🤣🤣🤣

I hope it happens onscreen in future

Tejo's reaction will be a treat to watch.

Hope she doesn't faint🤣🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aniash


It's better than making him a cupid and then killing him. 🤣🤣🤣

I hope it happens onscreen in future

Tejo's reaction will be a treat to watch.

Hope she doesn't faint🤣🤣

Uska equal and opposite reaction na banaa de yeh writer log kuch bhi phunk phaank ke…🤣

She will run behind him…with ring instead of rakhi …ki nahi I don’t want bhai behen ka rishta. Hum fiancé hi thik hai… like

Angad ji Mujhe aapko saiyaan banana hai bhaiyaa nahi…🤣

Just kidding. I already took sanyaas from this crap.. abhi woh fatang ko saiyaan banaaye ya bhaiyaa…

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Coming back to this story… Its brilliant Ani.. 👏

I had my dose of laughter for today… 😆


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Posted: 3 years ago
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Tejang vale tamatar lekar aayenge 🤣🤣

Bhai behen banadiya , this was totally unexpected🤣but I loved the brain and heart conversations🤣🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bluekohl

HolyF! Aniash you just didn't made them bhai behan...🤣

Are as a fatejo shipper this is the best time since the marriage, or even beginning. At least there's a closure... knowing UD makers ek din mein sabka kaat dete hain aur pata bhi baad mein chalta hai.

I think this is the first ff , jaha UD ke ek couple ko proper closure mila hai🤣🤣
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Why bhai behn and rakhi thing for TejAng 😣 they do not look like siblings. Plz write these scenes of rakhi and bhai dhoj for Faltejo becox it will be new thing for them.😂😂😂 Tired of their cringe romance onscreen 😂😂

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Awwwhh man bhai behan 😂😂😂😂😂

Really good story 😂😂😂🙌

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: dusk2dawn

Uska equal and opposite reaction na banaa de yeh writer log kuch bhi phunk phaank ke…🤣

She will run behind him…with ring instead of rakhi …ki nahi I don’t want bhai behen ka rishta. Hum fiancé hi thik hai… like

Angad ji Mujhe aapko saiyaan banana hai bhaiyaa nahi…🤣

Just kidding. I already took sanyaas from this crap.. abhi woh fatang ko saiyaan banaaye ya bhaiyaa…

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Exactly , u understood the depth of the fiction.

In order to make tejo move on , this is the best way.

To make her run after angad , this will be the best way.

Earlier she was drooling only for one now will be both. She will be made a pendulum 🤣🤣🤣

Both fandoms happy

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