Kisi aur din, kisi aur dhun (Drabble series) doubleupdate pg5 11/12 - Page 7

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Aishshshhhh this is just so beautiful!!! Loved it so much !!

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Been busy with both work(end of the year closing, new COVID variant and short stuff issues with vacation request for the holidays) and personal life, no time to come here.

Yeah I heard that folklore also, it’s really interesting.


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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Luvs_SanIsh

Been busy with both work(end of the year closing, new COVID variant and short stuff issues with vacation request for the holidays) and personal life, no time to come here.

Yeah I heard that folklore also, it’s really interesting.


Always enjoy reading your stories🥰

It's okay, but take care! ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Clouds7

Aishshshhhh this is just so beautiful!!! Loved it so much !!

Thank you! I'm glad you loved these drabbles...

PS What may I call you? I'm Sathya!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pottermeow


Thank you! I'm glad you loved these drabbles...


PS What may I call you? I'm Sathya!


Hi Sathya ! RIV HERE ! 🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Omg! Both of these are adorable! :)

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Read all the three drabble in one go

Drabble 1)

Raavi’s feeling for hug you expressed it beautifully indeed to cage the fire of Shiva all it needs love and affection🤗… And Shiva will be all hers😳…

Krish and those goofy balls played well and make Shiva all busy till evening that was smart move🤣🤣(Well I am interested to know the evening scene)

Loved it❤️❤️

Drabble 2)

Name held power indeed, I believe it to be true by myself

And I loved the explanation of each and every character. Shiva being Shiva always think himself low and that’s why all the drama happened till now. Meaning of Raavi😳 it's all love it gives me new outlook for her character😊

Hope as you said in story Raavi will never give up on this relation and one day all these inner turmoil swept away because till now I don’t think they reach at that point.

The scene where Shiva shut Suman soothes my heart, this man who stand up for every family member I wish he will do same for Raavi and first step will be when he tone down his own mother👍🏼.

Drabble 3)

God I will adore this one 🤗

Raavi is pregnant kitna intezaar hai mujhe uss din ka( I am mohalla waali Aunty for Shivi, and I am proud of it🤪)

Shiva is still Shiva he is still shuttering as if talking to stranger Bhola kaddu😛

I liked each and every word of Shiva’s hesitation(At starting) for the relationship still wanted to know the reason of Shiva 2.0😕 it hurts me deep and all these dialogues always soothe that wound.


Amazing work Sathya!!!👏

Love to see children and Shivi bonding I want to know who is more notorious😆 my vote is for big one🤪

You are great at conveying things literally, a good story weaver. I always cherish your writing😳.

You said long reviews will be appreciated that’s why I end up writing this much🤪 sorry but no sorry to bore you.

Thanks for tagging!!!!🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Clouds7

Hi Sathya ! RIV HERE ! 🤗

I asked you for your name already, didn't I😒? I'm so sorry!!!! I'm just pretty bad at remembering names...

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Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

Omg! Both of these are adorable! :)

ML!!! Glad you loved them! ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Khoobsurat123

Read all the three drabble in one go

Drabble 1)

Raavi’s feeling for hug you expressed it beautifully indeed to cage the fire of Shiva all it needs love and affection🤗… And Shiva will be all hers😳…

Krish and those goofy balls played well and make Shiva all busy till evening that was smart move🤣🤣(Well I am interested to know the evening scene)

Loved it❤️❤️

Drabble 2)

Name held power indeed, I believe it to be true by myself

And I loved the explanation of each and every character. Shiva being Shiva always think himself low and that’s why all the drama happened till now. Meaning of Raavi😳 it's all love it gives me new outlook for her character😊

Hope as you said in story Raavi will never give up on this relation and one day all these inner turmoil swept away because till now I don’t think they reach at that point.

The scene where Shiva shut Suman soothes my heart, this man who stand up for every family member I wish he will do same for Raavi and first step will be when he tone down his own mother👍🏼.

Drabble 3)

God I will adore this one 🤗

Raavi is pregnant kitna intezaar hai mujhe uss din ka( I am mohalla waali Aunty for Shivi, and I am proud of it🤪)

Shiva is still Shiva he is still shuttering as if talking to stranger Bhola kaddu😛

I liked each and every word of Shiva’s hesitation(At starting) for the relationship still wanted to know the reason of Shiva 2.0😕 it hurts me deep and all these dialogues always soothe that wound.


Amazing work Sathya!!!👏

Love to see children and Shivi bonding I want to know who is more notorious😆 my vote is for big one🤪

You are great at conveying things literally, a good story weaver. I always cherish your writing😳.

You said long reviews will be appreciated that’s why I end up writing this much🤪 sorry but no sorry to bore you.

Thanks for tagging!!!!🤗

Anupama🤗!

Drabble 1: You're not getting the evening scene here! Because this series is all cutesie moments or parallels...😆 You might get it somewhere else, though... Also, Krish is smart here, isn't he? I wish he'd do this on the show instead of the puke worthy romance.😕

Drabble 2: Yeah, I think by now you've realised that this series is wish fulfillment for me, so Shiva here stood up for Raavi against Suman, and perhaps he will to Dhara too one day...

Drabble 3: I'm glad you loved pregnant Shivi😳! And we're all mohalla wale Aunties when it comes to them...🤣 Yes, he does need to clear quite a few things up for her to be truly in peace in their relationship, but the CVs seem to be doing a decent job with the Shivi track as of now, so we'll wait and see!

Personally, Dikshit, Devta's kid, is more mischievous than Tara. Hopefully he'll take after Rishita and not after Nalla.

I'm so glad you love my writing, lambe comments can never bore me, and you're on my permanent tag list! ❤️

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