Kisi aur din, kisi aur dhun (Drabble series) doubleupdate pg5 11/12 - Page 6

Love both chapter, so beautifully written 🥰

With “Pyaar se pukaarun,, so true about the power/meaning of a name, their name suits them perfectly 😊

And with “Agar main kahun” …uff🥰😍the your last line “He'd taken one step towards her, and she'd taken a thousand towards him in return.” Totally love this line💕💕💕💕

Originally posted by: blissfulcanyon

Sathyaaa, hunny bunny, please take my heart and keep it for writing the two new pieces 🥺

The premise of the first one touched me to the core. Just having a little insight into Shiva's thought process before he said those lines that we all treasure to this day, made it all the more special.

I giggled at dikshit, but when he uttered those words, I was like "yeah, he's aptly named, kid or not" 😛

Loved the way you weaved those same words of his back into their lives, and this time Shiva stood up to his bully of a mother. I loved loved loved it so much 😭❤️

2nd piece, kash thoda aur lamba hota (me greedy 😈)

Again, having that insight into Shiva's thought process before he takes an action makes it all the more heartfelt. I love that he's considering the few good words of advice that were given to him (because this family lol rarely gives good advice)

The end confused me at first, I thought Raavi was leaving him or something (heart attack de diya baap re baap 😭) but as i read on, I felt like "puchku incoming" 😆

That was the cutesssst!! And I'm not going to lie, it made kinda emo 😢❤️

He took one step towards her, and she gave him her eveything. Oh, their dynamics are so beautiful, I will never stop gushing 💖

Shyna🤗! Itni lambi comment dekh ke hi main mar gayi! Khushi se😆!!! Shiva is such an introverted person that sometimes we barely get insight into his thought processes... And he actively avoids calling her by her name, so I figured there might as well be a deep rooted reason behind it, ya know😉?

And yes, he does need to stand up for Raavi against Suman. Not once or twice but whenever it's required.

As for the second piece... It felt like the perfect place to end things, but I suppose it is relatively short compared to the first one.. I tried to hint at Puchku coming right at the start you know😆? With the "hands on her back" as opposed to on her hips or something else... Too subtle of a clue😳?

All it takes is one indication that this person wants her, needs her... She's just so pure at heart, our Raavi!

Originally posted by: Kfof

This was so beautiful!!!🔥❤

Both the drabbles and their connection to the serial were awesome❤❤

Loved it !!

Thank you Kshama❤️! Glad you loved both the drabbles!

Double Update Part 1

I love love love how Shiva stood up for Raavi. Yet again. In front of his mother. I get some sadistic pleasure in watching Shiva shut down Suman and her worthless names she gives Raavi. And the symbolism of their names, and Shiva googling them for a joke is just pure Shiva behaviour.

Loved it ❤️

Double Update Part 2

One step forward from Shiva and Raavi came running to the store. Oof the parallels 🙈

And the moment I read Anita and Mami taking Raavi for kaayde, I knew she was pregnant and I was like

Shiva not wanting his pregnant chubby wife to go home, and he wants her to be with him just 🥺❤️

I love it. Keep it coming!

Originally posted by: Foxii

Beautiful Parallels

The Name Calling was so powerful

What a beautiful scene... him realizing that he refused to give Raavi the entitled Power but could let others deny her that

Standing up for her❤️

Then the other one... taking steps towards her

Pregnant Raavi❤️

He wants to keep her close

I'd say that him not giving her that power is a defensive move, in fact. To keep their strong connection, from becoming overpowering...

And Shiva and Raavi can barely stay away from each other even when they're fighting to death every time they meet! Once they're in their happy place, I envision both of them, especially Shiva, being the best sort of clingy.... 😆

Thank you❤️!!!

Originally posted by: Paru95

Sathyaaa🤗

Both the drabbles were amazing

Loved the twist at the end👏

This smitten Shiva is my favourite and forward Raavi is just adorable😳

The article of urban asia about Alice has perfect reasons why we just love Raavi...and these drabbles just perfectly penned it down🥳

Just loved it dear☺️

Waiting for more👍🏼

Hellooooo🤗! Glad you loved both the drabbles... Smitten Shiva is truly the best! And Raavi is truly so good, so pure, isn't she?

Originally posted by: Luvs_SanIsh

Love both chapter, so beautifully written 🥰

With “Pyaar se pukaarun,, so true about the power/meaning of a name, their name suits them perfectly 😊

And with “Agar main kahun” …uff🥰😍the your last line “He'd taken one step towards her, and she'd taken a thousand towards him in return.” Totally love this line💕💕💕💕

Hello Love! It's been a while since I've seen you around... 😳

Glad you loved both, the power to names is a very personal thing. Did you know that in lots of folklore it's a belief that telling someone your name gives them literal control over you? The ability to do dark magicks and things like that? 🤪

That line is one of the only good pieces of advice Shiva has ever received in life, so let's not let it go to waste! 😆

Originally posted by: sillysatchel

Double Update Part 1

I love love love how Shiva stood up for Raavi. Yet again. In front of his mother. I get some sadistic pleasure in watching Shiva shut down Suman and her worthless names she gives Raavi. And the symbolism of their names, and Shiva googling them for a joke is just pure Shiva behaviour.

Loved it ❤️

Double Update Part 2

One step forward from Shiva and Raavi came running to the store. Oof the parallels 🙈

And the moment I read Anita and Mami taking Raavi for kaayde, I knew she was pregnant and I was like

Shiva not wanting his pregnant chubby wife to go home, and he wants her to be with him just 🥺❤️

I love it. Keep it coming!

Meg❤️! As for part one, Suman's a bit beyond redemption now, so shutting her down is the next best thing, really. The symbolism got to me too when I was looking it all up, such beautiful meanings their names have!

Part two? Puchku incoming🥳!!!! But a lot of people didn't guess at it, you know? Shiva never wants Raavi away from him, pregnant chubby wife or not! 😆

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Hellooooo🤗! Glad you loved both the drabbles... Smitten Shiva is truly the best! And Raavi is truly so good, so pure, isn't she?

Yesssss❤

Love them❤️ Love your drabbles

PS: Can you pls tag me too when you write something new🙈

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Of course!!! ❤️

Thank you❤️