ShiVi OS: Night Changes - Page 3

Originally posted by: Miss.M

Blissy... I read it and it was beautiful!! I love pre wedding shivi so much!!! Can you please please please write more!!!

Thank youuu ❤️

Being a fan of your works myself, I'm super happy to know you liked this 🥺💖

I will definitely write more 🤗

Originally posted by: Anu_V

OH MY!!

perfect execuition of the lost on highway, hotel room and the dhaba trope!

i love pre wedding shivi so so so much ❤️

please keep wtiting

Anuuuu, thank you 🤗❤️

Originally posted by: mpks1

Shyna, yet another gem from you! ❤️

Pre marriage Raavi and Shiva 😆 Raavi indeed had the guts to go with him inspite of their history. She did have an adventure and ended up sharing the bed with him😆 Raavi slow change if heart and wanting to spend more time with him and didn’t want the day to end Shiva, the savior and protector of Raavi always and forever,

Thank you Prema!

Glad you enjoyed it ❤️🤗

Originally posted by: Luvs_SanIsh

💕🥰🥰Such a beautifully written piece👏, loved it❤️💕

Thank you for the kind words, hun!🤗

Appreciate it ❤️

This piece has my whole freaking heart!

First things first...I absolutely dig the length.

Ik, Ik it is practically a death wish to write long pieces and by the time you're done with it you just can't feel your fingers but holy lord are those the best ones or what//

From the start to the end I was completely in the story.

Not once did I loose interest.

From possessiveness to comfort to realization.

Everything was written perfectly!

Him switching places with her >>>>>>>> <3

Liked the flashback scene a lot too.

Please Blissy write more Prewedding Shivi man. I LOVE THEM. ❤️

Originally posted by: Foxii

Amazing, loved it.

Raavi being a chipkali in her sleep🤣

Thank you!❤️

Glad you enjoyed chipku Raavi 😆

Originally posted by: sunsaathiyaa

this is your longest & cutest work so far 🥺

pre-wedding shivi just does things to my heart, good things 🤗

soooo, 9700 words of this is just like food to my heart & soul ❤️

• Ahhhhh, okay.🥺 Thank you bubsieee, this makes my heart sing with joy ❤️

I just love love this story soooo much 😆

because this took me to a wholeass trip down the memory lane

& you're the one who did it 🤗

• You say I took you a trip down memory lane? Well, the pleasure is all mine 🤗

I can totally imagine this on them ❤️

~o~

1.

Shiva chuckled cynically. "Tujhse nahi ho payega. Jab dekho toh har koi jagah girti padti rehti hai. Dhang se chala toh jata nahi, badi aayi bike pe baithne. Kya pata, bike par se bhi gir gayi toh? Phir toh main uthane nahi wala."

5 minutes later..

"Toh? Saree pehen kar bike pe baith sakti hai toh aise kaandhe pe bhi latak sakti hai." Shiva countered.

yes sir, we can clearly see how you won't uthao her 🙄

• The way I didn't even notice I was writing his opposing thoughts and now I'm seeing this in a different light 😆
  

2.

"Mujhe uss bhoothnath ko tang karna hai." Raavi mumbled, flattening her palm across Shiva's back.

"Sapno mein bhi kaisi chudailon jaisi khayalat hai." Shiva huffed, but soon, his focus shifted onto her palm resting upon his spine.

funny story, this exact thing has happened with me & me no likey 🤡😭

• Uffff, the way I'm smiling reading this now 😆 Are you sure you belong to this world? Or have you just escaped from a fictional world and made your place here? 😛 You no likey, but me likey This is cuuuute

3.

"Arrey baap re." Raavi let out in a soft tone. "Yeh toh apni side pe hai, main hi isske upar chadi ja rahi hoon."

excellent going 😉

please do it properly 😳

• I concur, show mein bhi mil jaye 😳
  

Saru bear, this lamba comment, coming from you means so much to me ❤️🤗

Originally posted by: Suparna2210

Blisssyyyyy how wholesome was this!!?? Ooffff I loved it! The setting was beautiful! They way their feelings erupted was described so beautifully! Pre wedding ShiVi are my fav and this is another added in my favs!! You thought it’s long… I wished it didn’t end😂😂

Aww Sups, thank you so much 🤗

You have no idea how happy it makes me when you say it's added to your list of favs ❤️

So glad you loved it!

Originally posted by: Iktara22

OH MY MY....GUESS WHO IS BIGGEST SLOWEST SABUN AKA GADHEDI TO READ THIS SO SOO LATE.......AND OOH, THIS HAS SHIVI TRACLELLING(PRACTICALLY A JEERA KAAND AU)-I'M SORRY ITS JUST MY MIND WORKS THAT WAY, LMAO.

THERE WERE LIKE n NUMBER OF TIMES I WOULD'VE FASCE-PALMED MYSELF ON SHIVA'S ONE LINERS & RAAVI'S DOBINESS...

PUNCHES ON POINT, AND ALL THE WHOLESOME CUTESYY STUFF...I LOVE LOVE LOVEE THIS!!

P.S.-I'M NOT RAAVI BUT EVEN I DIDN'T WANTED THIS(os) TO END.

ALSO, I LUBS LUBS YOU FOR THIS!

Aww jaanu meri jaan!❤️

I'm so happy you loved it!🤗

And yes, you wouldn't be jeera queen if your mind wouldn't think of jeera kaand in some way, shape or form, now would you? 😛

Originally posted by: Khoobsurat123

Too long you did much hard work for this piece👏

Loved it pre wedding Shivi are absolute bliss😳

There is another charm in them I can read this piece again and again

Raavi being too clingy just like her name 🤪

And Shiva being too caring as he always been whether its when he headed to take her back or in Dhaba scene it's too Shiva🤗

Raavi finally hugging him and planning to meet him next day too😆

It's a wonderful piece I took my time because it was long and glad I was able to make it😛

Loved it will like to read another shot in future👍🏼

Aw thank you so much ❤️

This means a lot to me 🤗

To know you loved it and would like to read more in the future (which I will of course be posting) 😆

I appreciate this comment so much ❤

@bold- I am glad you made it!😛