ShiVi OS: Night Changes - Page 2

Blisssyyyyy how wholesome was this!!?? Ooffff I loved it! The setting was beautiful! They way their feelings erupted was described so beautifully! Pre wedding ShiVi are my fav and this is another added in my favs!! You thought it’s long… I wished it didn’t end😂😂

OH MY MY....GUESS WHO IS BIGGEST SLOWEST SABUN AKA GADHEDI TO READ THIS SO SOO LATE.......AND OOH, THIS HAS SHIVI TRACLELLING(PRACTICALLY A JEERA KAAND AU)-I'M SORRY ITS JUST MY MIND WORKS THAT WAY, LMAO.

THERE WERE LIKE n NUMBER OF TIMES I WOULD'VE FASCE-PALMED MYSELF ON SHIVA'S ONE LINERS & RAAVI'S DOBINESS...

PUNCHES ON POINT, AND ALL THE WHOLESOME CUTESYY STUFF...I LOVE LOVE LOVEE THIS!!

P.S.-I'M NOT RAAVI BUT EVEN I DIDN'T WANTED THIS(os) TO END.

ALSO, I LUBS LUBS YOU FOR THIS!

Originally posted by: Kfof

It was awesome ❤❤

Thank you Kshama 🤗

Glad you liked it!❤️

Originally posted by: PoohNotFound

Blissy, what a really cute one-shot. I always enjoy reading your works and this has done it again.😆

Vaise, where are you? It's been a long time.😊

Thank you Pooh 🤗

I'm super glad to hear that 🥺💕

I know it has been a while 🙈

You can blame Twitter for that 😆

These days I'm more active there, but I'll try making a few rounds here as well!❤️

Originally posted by: Nicky-nish

Lovely and cute ❤️

Thank you so much 🤗❤️

Originally posted by: Odette_delusion

Loved it 😘😘

Thank you hun!❤️

Originally posted by: Pixiepadhi

Blissyy ❤️❤️❤️

This was such a feelgood read. Pre wedding shivi have their own charm and you perfectly managed to keep it intact.

So shivi.raavi being the annoying chipkali that she is and shiva indulging her and protecting her 😍

I loved how they shared the same bed.they are so comfyy with each other.

I wish this never ended.aise hi likhte reh ❤️

Pixie 🤗❤️

I'm so glad you liked it!

I wrote on pre-wedding ShiVi after quite a while so I wasn't sure if I was keeping their essence intact but reading your comment made me feel content 🥺❤

Haha you wished this would never end, meanwhile I was hoping for it to finish quickly but it wasn't happening 🤣 I even scrapped some scenes that I was supposed to include in this but shh 🤫😋

Originally posted by: blissfulcanyon

Pixie 🤗❤️

I'm so glad you liked it!

I wrote on pre-wedding ShiVi after quite a while so I wasn't sure if I was keeping their essence intact but reading your comment made me feel content 🥺❤

Haha you wished this would never end, meanwhile I was hoping for it to finish quickly but it wasn't happening 🤣 I even scrapped some scenes that I was supposed to include in this but shh 🤫😋

@bold whyyy? 🥺

Ek to PS editors ka dukh ,upar se FF writers bhi edit karne lage? 😭

I need those scenes in another os 😉

Originally posted by: Pixiepadhi

@bold whyyy? 🥺

Ek to PS editors ka dukh ,upar se FF writers bhi edit karne lage? 😭

I need those scenes in another os 😉

Ab apne laziness ka jugad toh nikalna padega haina 🤣

Don't worry, I've planned to include them in another OS 😳

Too long you did much hard work for this piece👏

Loved it pre wedding Shivi are absolute bliss😳

There is another charm in them I can read this piece again and again

Raavi being too clingy just like her name 🤪

And Shiva being too caring as he always been whether its when he headed to take her back or in Dhaba scene it's too Shiva🤗

Raavi finally hugging him and planning to meet him next day too😆

It's a wonderful piece I took my time because it was long and glad I was able to make it😛

Loved it will like to read another shot in future👍🏼