Maan is gonna be knight in shinning armour for Geet !!
Eagerly waiting for them to meet!!
Great writing. Keep it up!!
Maan is gonna be knight in shinning armour for Geet !!
Eagerly waiting for them to meet!!
Great writing. Keep it up!!
Nice update..
Maan was curious to see geet..
Waiting for next update..
Beautiful update well written
The desperation between Maan & Geet increasing day by day. Whenever Maan is somewhere near Geet feels him and same with Maan he tries to see her but only her side is visible to him
They have to go to registration office and Maan thins that they will meet but Brij comes alone Maan asks why she dint come Brij hesitant and Maan asks if she will be in pain if she comes here, Maan feels her pain and its overpowering
Hope they meet soon
Nice update. Was Geet cheated.
Oh God they still havenβt met but going by the precap they hopefully will soon π
What a spiritual connection they have... Soul to soul communication.... Unknown pull and of course destiny is binding them to each other.
Just got another part but already waiting actually hungrily waiting for the next.....
And you are writing again in geet forum so I had to come and read that. Its too destinies pull, you know ππ€π
Part 6
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One week passed with Maan being busy analyzing the surrounding and how to start and all related planning. Though never letting the lingering thought of Geet going away from him. It always brought welcoming smile on his face.
βKya hai yeh ladkiβ he would say after the thought would linger long. Only thing that worried him about her was the pain that he felt surrounded her. Why was he thinking on that line? May be it was something else. To know everything was fine with her used to overpower all his logical thinking.
While in Handa Haveli whole rest family came after visiting the marriage of some relative. Her Papaji, Mohinder, Tayii ji, Taya ji and cousin Nandini. There was no feeling of cousin between them and just like Brij Veerji, she was more like her own sister and nothing less dear than Rajji. Nandini being almost same age as Geet, just 6 months younger, share more among them.
Nandu in Geetβs room βYou should have come Geet. Marriage was fun.β But she stops.
βKoi naβ¦ I am fine. Looks like you had blast without me. Cry Baby that I have becomeβ
βShut up. You know I was so much missing you every time.β
She paused βOk tell me, Shivu marriage you will miss tooβ
βNo Nandu. I wonβt. I want to be strong and face things. I just canβt keep missing big days of my dear ones.β Nandani is really surprised at Geetβs sudden confidence gain. She loves it though.
βOhh Geetuβ¦ I love you. Please come back to usβ βI will.βNandu feels so positive and happy with change in Geet.
βOk thee--eenn, I got you lehnga from there for Shivu Marraigeβ
βNandu nahii.. bas will pick something just decent naβ
βNo, a big No. Got itβ
βYou are wearing this lehnga but only thing isβ she smiled naughtily
βYou have to do little work, get matching chunri of it yourselfβ
βNoo-oo nahi hogaβ βHOGAβ Nandu declared.
Geet could not say no to her. Nandu was working her own way to bring her Geetu back and Geet wanted to try.
Next day Nandani forced Geet to go to shop and select the matching Chunri. It was tough task for present Geet, but then she has to start facing things. She cannot keep staying in shell whole life.
Geet was in the shop struggling to find matching Chunri for the lehnga but nothing was working.
βUncle I am not able to select anyβ βBeta see so many are there, see these all go with this color.β
Geet was already pissed with this Chunri selection thing. Frustrated she turned to leave. But the moment she turned to leave her foot stuck where it was. He slowed his jeep and stopped it exactly opposite of the not so broad village road and turned to look for some shop he was trying to locate. And in this their eyes met.
Geet who was already standing like statue in trance just looking at him. Never seen him from front, did not need to. She knew it was him. He was Maan.
Maan just could not move for a while. At last he was able to see her from front and in full. He always had limited vision of her but he knew it was her. She was Geet.
It was unknown acknowledgement, he did not feel awkward that her eyes were stuck at him, she did not feel awkward that his eyes were stuck on her. It was natural.
Maan felt the pull and started walking towards her. Geet very naturally simply signaled him to check on bike coming towards him as he was crossing the road. The feel was different. It was the feel of own-ness.
As Maan was approaching and now almost 4-5 feet away, Geet turned to shop-owner and said little louder
βUncle am not able to select any color of Chunri, I am leavingβ It was intended to make someone hear it. That someone by that time was on footsteps of the shop.
Obviously his whole attention was already on the speaker, got the message. It was all unspoken, message was sent and received and accepted.
He moved to shopkeeper βI want to select somethingβ
βJee kahiye, kyaβ Maan got confused. He forgot the word Chunri.
βChunri I am not able to select uncle, what to doβ she turned to shopkeeper.
βYou show me some Chunri, I donβt have much timeβ Maan took shopkeeper's attention. Shopkeeper knew Geet had ample time as she was so confused. For Maan, by view, he knew will not give much time.
βThese are the colors sir and rest all are hereβ He showed the whole rack. Now what was Maan to do. He was completely not into these type of things. But was anything in his control at that time.
βUncle please show me matching for this colorβ she kept her lehnga on the table. Maan closed his eyes. He could imagine her in that light mustard color lehnga. It was fraction of second, he opened his eyes. He scanned the rack and signaled the olive green color Chunri .
βI think I like that one. Keep it aside for me.β βJee. You wonβt buy sir.β
βNot now. The one I want to buy for should like it too. You keep it aside.β He turned and left.
βUncle I think that Chunri matches my lehnga. I will take itβ βBut beta he already selected it.β βOnly selected, did not buy it. I will buy it now.β
Shopkeeper was all confused with her. First she was all confused and now she want exactly the one other customer has selected. But other customer also selected and left. He had to think of current profit. Thus she bought and left.
What was this. Neither Geet cared nor Maan. So much restlessness they both have felt with the proximity of each other when they have not seen each other. Not knowing how the other one is, how they will feel when they see the other. But the moment their eyes met, automatically the right was shown and given.
Maan simply sat on the jeep and left for his guest house. Was he in state to remember what was he in the market for?
βWow Maanβ he said to himself βNow you are selecting the Chunri. Did you even know what Chunri is before this?β he questioned himself
Then he had naughty grin on his face βI selected it but let me see if she is able to make me see it on herβ he paused βI did mine part, let me see if she can do hers or notβ.
In real they have never ever met each other, their eyes met and the own ness just came.
Geet was in all other world. Did she even remember the scar of her heart? Did it matter to her at this moment? No.
She composed herself as she entered haveli.
βGeet puttarβ called Tayii ji. She was so pissed off with Nandu sending Geet alone for Chunri selection. What was the need to force things on Geet, she had shouted at Nandu.
βJi Tayi Jiβ βPuttar she sent you aloneβ tayiji said worried
βFine Tayi ji. Chunri has been selectedβ and showed it.
Nandu showed winning face to her Mom. She had been getting scolding.
Geet in her room. Whole thing was just repeating in her mind. Nothing and nothing mattered to her at this moment. He selected it for her. She was having a sweet jitter in her belly. Was her scar in heart able to stop her from getting lost in that feel. NO. It had no power to stop this strong feel. Everything felt so small in front of this feel. She let her guards off and wanted to go with flow. It was not actually the matter of her wanting or not. It was not in her control to not feel this whole thing and get lost in it.
She smiled to herself βHe did his part. Now mine. How do I make him see me wear thisβ she smiled and giggled as if he was the first man in her life? Was he not? Yes, he was. Rest all were just lies of her life. The practicality of world can consider that part of her life. For her now that part did not matter. She had failed taking the world practically. She was going to leave all practicality of life on him now. She is going to go with flow.
βHe will handleβ she said to herself.
Precap β How will she make him see her
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Part 6
Fascinating and so Lovely Update
I like how both Maan and Geet communicate silently
yet the message was received
Maan choosing the best for Geet and she with no doubt
ask the shopkeeper for the one Maan chose
Wow soooo cute update fabulousπβ¨
Still keen to know what happens to Geet the whole family is protective of her.
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