CHAL GHAR CHALEIN (part 7 pg 17) completed - Page 5

Hey guys...........

Yesterday I uploaded last chapter for this story but today I after watching the episode I thought to continue it by linking it to Dhara's track............

Would it be good idea or should I leave it here......

Suggestions are welcomed

Yours

ODETTE_DELUSION

Please continue .....

Its great

You should probably continue... Let Suman and the rest of the family see the strength of Shivi's bond... ❤️

Originally posted by: Goodluckok

Please continue .....

Its great

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

You should probably continue... Let Suman and the rest of the family see the strength of Shivi's bond... ❤️

Originally posted by: Tanvi-Agrawal

Plz continue

Originally posted by: Radhi12

Please do continue.

Read all chapters in one go

Well I loved how the story proceeds🤗

Raavi helping orphanage children a great idea

Also you expressed her emotions in top level👏

Suman is beyond repair I can't even imagine if someone say these words to her still she will feel even an ounce of shame

Amazing story and Shivi confession is all love❤️❤️

Originally posted by: Khoobsurat123

Read all chapters in one go

Well I loved how the story proceeds🤗

Raavi helping orphanage children a great idea

Also you expressed her emotions in top level👏

Suman is beyond repair I can't even imagine if someone say these words to her still she will feel even an ounce of shame

Amazing story and Shivi confession is all love❤️❤️

For liking it........ I would be continuing it soon hope so you will like it😘🥰

PART-IV

It has been 1 week since Raavi had returned and Shiva apologized to her. The whole family was happy for the couple their progress was commendable especially everyone was surprised on Shiva as Shiva do the most unexpected things for Raavi making her feel happy, showing his love for her he never leaves a chance their banters were continuous but at the end the end up in each other's arm. The whole family teased them when were caught. One such day Raavi was getting ready and she saw set of new bangles on the table and a smile appeared on her face as she remembered what happened last night.

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FLASHBACK STARTS,

Raavi was busy doing kitchen work late night and Shiva was waiting for her to come siting on the bed with his head resting on headrest but. When Raavi came she saw Shiva and said,

"Kya hua tujhe........."

Shiva ignored and Raavi spoke again,

"Kya hua hai bolega bhi..... "

Shiva simply said and turned his back towards her side and laid on the bed,

"Time dekha hai..... "

Raavi understood that he was waiting for her but the way he is behaving like a child was a sight Raavi loved she first thought to change and come but he was looking so adorable that she can't wait and she went and wrapped her arms around him such that her chest was flushed with his back and whispered in his ear,

"Sorry....... Woh kaam tha na kitchen mein iss liye late ho gayi..... "

Shivers ran down his spine as she spoke and a smile appeared but he didn't replied and slept like a Chattan pandya he was and Raavi tried to turn him around but was unable to so she started to place kisses on his ears to his neck slowly covering the whole area and Shiva's resistance broke he turned and now Raavi was under him, Raavi looked at him innocently and he said,

"Main wait kar raha tha..... "

"Sorry na..... Kaaam bhut tha kitchen mein...... "

Raavi replied with a small pout which was so kissable that Shiva graabed her wrist and kissed her pout but in process Raavi's bangles broke and Shiva looked at her and smiled sheepishly and Raavi said,

"Shiva........ "

And both burst into laugh and slept in each other's embrace.

FLASHBACK ENDS

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Raavi's trance was broke when Shiva came inside the room and saw her smiling he simply hugs her from back and rest his chin on her shoulder looking into the mirror and said,

"Achi lagi... "

"Bhut achi hai Shiva yeh.... "

"Chal main pehnata hoon.... "

And Shiva made her wear bangles and said,

"Ajj hum orphanage ja rahe hain........ Tere nanhe soilders ne mujhe kaha tha ki tujhe lekar aaun toh ready ho jaa okay......... "

Raavi becomes very happy and nods.

After sometime they leave and drove off to the orphanage. Raavi entered with Shiva and was welcomed by chirping of children in the ground, Raavi's eyes twinkled seeing this and this was not unnoticed by Shiva he loved to see this Raavi which just like these little kids around and than nishant and ronak came and shouted,

"Raavi dii........ "

Raavi bent down and both hugged her tightly and kissed her cheeks and ronak said,

"Kaise ho aap"

Nishant added,

"Aapko kisi ne tang toh nahi kiya na....... "

Raavi said smiling and said,

"Nahi...... Tum dono kaise ho..... "

Both said in unison,

"First class.... "

Raavi giggled and ronak called Shiva by gesturing him to sit down and nishant said,

"Friends...... "

Shiva shook hand with him but nishant and ronak hugged him too and ronak said,

"Abb toh app bhi hamare hi ho..... Apne apna promise pura kiya na "

Shiva was also very happy with them and Raavi was adoring the sight in front of her. The day was spent well Shiva and the two kids became very close and played together Shiva was equally releshing their company but than it was time to leave and the kidos said to Shivi,

"Jaldi aana phir........... We love you both....... "

And they left.

Shiva said to Raavi,

"Bhut cute hai na dono yeh"

"Maine kaha tha na tujhe.... Yeh log tujhe bhi bhut pyaar karenge....."

"Yrh dono toh kisi ke bhi face par smile laa de"

"Bilkul.....mere bache hai nhi aise.......acha Shiva aur jaldi chal dhara dii ke liye party rakhi hai ajj........"

"Haan main toh bhul hi gaya chal..... "

They reached home and joined the celebration. It was great celebration full of dances eating and happiness.But suddenly dhara fainted and was took to hospital. Here everyone was shocked to hear about Dhara's condition and the option which seemed most relevant at that time was to terminate the child. Gaumbi did it with a heavy heart and trembling hands he signed the papers. When Dhara came into consciousness she realised that her child is no more she went numb and didn't talked to anyone and she wasn't reacting to anything.

Tho doctor came near gaumbi and told him,

"Dhara ko PTSD ho gaya hai Post Traumatic Stress Disorder yeh hota hai kafi tym jab pregnancy terminate krwani padti hain...... Patients bhut hi udaas ho jate hain apko unhe cheer up karna hoga...... Iss ke liye koyi medications vgara use nahi hota hai bass apko unhe mentally aur emotionally khush rakhna hoga......All best...... Inhe discharge mil jayega app log formalities complete krr lijiye"

Saying this doctor left leaving behind a heart broken family. Raavi cane near gaumbi and said,

"Gaumbi kuch nahi hoga Dhara dii ko vo upset hain par dekhna sab theek ho jayega...."

And gaumbi hugged her everyone joined them.Dhara was brought back but she was no more that Dhara who had a smile on her face who had a hope on her face she was broken a broken mother. Everyone was worried as she neither ate anything nor say anything just was sitting like a dead body her condition was worsening day by day. Everyone tried to cheer her up but in vain.

It has been more than 2 weeks since dhara had spoke a word gaumbi health was also not fine as he was himself mentally exhausted and broken. Dhara's numbness was making everyone tensed.

One day Shiva came to Raavi and laid his head on her lap crying,

"Raavi..... Dhara bhabhi kuch bol kio nahi rahi maine bhut koshish vo toh mujhe daant bhi nahi rahi....... Please unhe theek kar na please....... Tu toh bachpan se hi jugaadu hai na....... Please kuch kar na Raavi........ "

Raavi caressed his head and said herself crying,

"Shiva dhara dii bhut hi weak ho rahi hai aur gaumbi bhi....... Mujhe khud samjh main nahi aa raha main inki help kaise karu.......... Kya jugaad lagau kuch pata nahi lag raha....."

She paused and than an idea stuck her mind and she cupped Shiva face so that he looks at her and she said,

"Shiva tune hi kaha tha na ki nishant aur ronak kisi ke bhi face par smile laa sakte hai....... Hum kal unhe lekar aaye.......... "

"Par Raavi....... Agar bacho ko dekhkar bhabhi ka maan udhaas ho gya toh..... "

"Shiva atleast vo react toh karengi......... Tu kal unhe le aayega yahan....... Par tu unhe kuch batana mat dhara je bare mein..........dekhna vo dhara dii se koii na koii reaction jaroor nilkwa lenge......."

"Theek hain main le aaunga...... Kal"

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NEXT DAY,

Dhara was sitting in the hall staring at particularly nothing suman was also siting there, Shiva brought the two kids in the house and Raavi stood inside the kitchen because she wanted kids to meet dhara first and Shiva went to suman and told her that he will explain her later. Raavi knew the kids will go to Dhara first as they both can't see anyone unhappy just like they cheered Shiva up when he was finding Raavi. The kids entered and their eyes fell on Dhara both looked at each other and nodded as if they had made a plan and both sat on either side of dhara who had still not noticed the kids, and ronak said by knocking his finger on one side of dhara's face,

"Knock knock"

Dhara looked at ronak and Nishant replied,

"Kon.... "

Dhara looked at nishant and Ronak said,

"Smile...... "

Nishant says,

"Smile kon....... "

Ronak says on standing in front of dhara,

"Aree wohi jo inke face par nahi hain.. . .. . "

Dhara looked at him confused and than ronak stood in front too and said,

"Toh aa jao.. . . "

Ronak says,

"Toh main aa jao.. . .. Main aa jao".

both went near her pulled corner of her lips upside and kissed her each cheek and Dhara smiled and had tears. Both children looked at her and wiped her tears and nishant said,

" Smile karte huye rote nahi hain.. . .....Raavi dii kehti hain jab rona aaye na toh na kisi ko jor se hug kar lena chahiye.. . .. . .. "

Ronak says,

"Toh main hug karu.. . .. "

Dhara pulled both of them in hug and cried both kids let her hug them till she wanted when she pulled back Raavi came out and stood with Shiva they all were happy that after a long time Dhara has reacted to something and than dhara said,

"Aap Raavi ko jaante ho..... "

Everyone was elated as she spoke something and ronak said,

"Hum toh Raavi dii ko jaante hain......."

Nishant continued like singing a song,

"raavi dii ke Shiva ko jante hain krish bhaiya ko jante hain............ "

Ronak says,

"Ikk minute app Dhara pandya ho na........ "

Nishant adds,

"Ha hum kaise bhul sakte hain apko........ Bhut batein suni hain apke bare mein humne....... "

Raavi comes to them and says,

"Aree Aree saans toh lo dono..... "

Nishant and ronak turn and nishant says nonchalantly,

"Raavi diii..... Hume na apka bhootnath leke aaya hain"

Raavi hits his head lightly and says,

"Nishu aise nahi bolte.... "

And dhara says,

"Raavi yeh bache kon hai bade hi pyaare hain..... "

Raavi eyes filled up after hearing her name from dhara's voice and she gushed up to tell her everything meanwhile kids met Suman, Dev , krish and Rishita. Dhara called the children and children came near her and she said,

"Thank you...... "

Ronak says,

"Apko na hume thank you nahi khud ko sorry kehna chahiye... "

Nishants nods and adds,

"Raavi dii kehti hain kii smile ikk aisa gift gain jo hum khud ko dete hain par tears ikk punishment hain aur vo bhi khud ko dete hain toh phir app batao apko gift ache lagte hain ya punishment........ "

Dhara smiles and says,

"Gift... "

Nishant hold her hand and make her stand up and started moving like a merry go round (the way three brothers used to do in intial episodes after leap) and said,

"Toh phir uss gift ko enjoy karo na....... "

Ronak says,

"Main bhi.... "

And three of them laughed. Shiva came to Raavi and said,

"Thank you.... "

Raavi hold his hand and both joined the trio.

After a long time people were happy in pandya niwas Gaumbi came in the house and looked at the sight of Dhara laughing he had tears in his eyes Dhara looked at him at moved towards him and said,

"Gaumbi... "

Gaumbi was beyond happy he engulfed her in hug and said,

"Dhara Tu kahan chali gayi thi haan........ Tune toh mujhe akela chod diya tha... Ikkdum..... Meri jaan nikal rahi thi..... "

Dhara wiped his tears and said,

"Main vapas aa gayi gaumbi"

Both had tears in their eyes and ronak and nishant marched towards them and ronak said,

"Raavi dii app toh kehti kii yahan sab log bhut happy rehte hain... "

Nishant adds,

"Par hum toh jabse aaye hain sab ro rahe hain.... "

Both of them wipe their tears and say in unison,

"No rona just smile...... "

Gaumbi looks at Dhara and everyone asking about the kids and tthan Shiva narrates the whole story to gaumbi, meanwhile Dhara was making the kids eat food and kids were making her eat. Gaumbi was happy that Dhara is back to normal after a long period. And gaumbi went to Raavi in kitchen and said,

"Raavi thank you beta...... Tune mujhpar bhut bada ehsaan kiya hain...... Meri dhara mujhe lauta kar........ "

Raavi looks at him and Shiva enters and Raavi says,

"Gaumbi........ Thank you kio bol rahe ho app dii kya hamari kuch nahi hai........ Chalo abb app aur mat royiye aur jaakar dhara dii ke paas baitho i am sure vo app se baat karna chahti hongi...... "

Gaumbi hugs Raavi before leaving and go out Shiva says,

"Chal tu bhi bahar aa ja unn dono ne Raavi dii yeh kehti hain Raavi dii vo kehti hain bol bol kar sara ghar utha rakha hain sari par..... "

Raavi giggles and comes out both kids run to her and says,

"Raavi dii aap kahan ho aao na baitho hamare saath........ "

Nishant says,

"Dii apne toh sach kaha tha gaumbi aur Dhara dii bhut ache hain..... "

Raavi sat with them and suman says,

"Hume nahi pata tha ki hamari Raavi itni baatein dikhati hain sabko........ baache jab se aaye hain itni achi batein bata rahe hain........"

Raavi gives a sheepish smile and Shiva says,

"Abhi jane ka tym ho gaya hain aayan ne itna hi tym diya tha inn logon ko apni classes mein bhi jana hai...... "

Both kids look at Raavi and Raavi says,

"Jana toh padega aayan ne bulaya hain..... Aur padhna bhi toh hain...... "

Dhara looks at Shiva and than at Raavi and Kids and says,

"Abhi toh aaye the yeh...... "

Raavi says,

"Dhara di inki classes hai toh jana padega par app chintaat karo yeh phir aayenge.... "

Both kids kiss Raavi's cheeks and goes to Dhara and say,

"Abhi toh jaa rahe hain par hum na jaldi aayenge...... "

Nishant adds,

"Par agar hume yeh complaint mili ki app roye toh nahi aayenge......Raavi dii hume report chaiye....."

Raavi and dhara nods at them smilingly. And Shiva drove off with them to orphanage.

After a long time Pandya niwas wa filled with giggles.

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Hey guys, it was indeed a long part...... Hope so you all like it...... Please tell your honest views should I continue the story or not...... Willl glad if you share your suggestions.

Yours,

ODETTE_DELUSION