ShiVi TS~ Ramrati & Raavi...bestfriends!(completed-pg1)

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It was the last day of exams and summer vacations were about to start, after giving their last exam they had planned to meet at their adda, i.e. the gola-wala on the edge of the gali of their houses, it was one of the scorching afternoons in Somnath. Raavi was late, she came there running and panting, she slowed down only to find this all-time laughing and teasing trio sitting with their heads down.She was 9, Shiva was 11,Dev was 12 and Krish was 7 then.

She saw these three sitting all gloomy, so she went to gola-wala and ordered four special golas with their all time favorite flavors, and went to the bench where they were sitting, she decided to change the aura, so she flashed a big bright smile, she was curious as no one greeted her, she asked, "Yeh tum teeno ko kya hua murjhayi hui tubelight jese kyu bethe ho?Aaj to last exam tha na aaj toh khushiyan manao,naacho gaao agle do mahine tak no padhai!!!Aur yeh kya tumsab ne gola bhi nahi liya, kuch serious baat hai kya?", she asked with concern in her voice; Krish looked up, he smiled a little and said "hi", and she directly asked him because out of all three, Krish was anyways known for spilling out the beans.Also, to her astonishment, Shiva just glanced at her, neither did he shoo her away, nor did he irritated her today, it was a strange day.Krish narrated her the whole matter, as she passed golas to everyone and sat their sipping golas.

"Oh toh yeh matter hai,kuch zyada hi serious case hai yeh to but don't worry why to fear when Raavi is here,mai kuch sochti hu", she said with glorious smirk,Shiva stood up, went near her and shouted, "Ae mami ki behen ki beti tu toh dur hi reh, mere se kaand hua hai na toh mai hi solve karunga, har baat mein chipkali ki tarah reng rengke mat pohoch ja" with annoyance on his face. She rolled her eyes in order to ignore him, and focused on the gola instead, they were all sipping golas and pretending like they were analyzing the whole matter from technalities but all they were thinking is to not let elders know about it and solve it.As Raavi finished her gola, she hopped with a smile, she smirked as she said, "Milgaya mujhe idea milgaya ke hum un bade seniors ke paas se Shiva ka bag wapas leneka!!", to which Dev looked up and said, "Arre waah Raavi tum to bohot smart ho", and Krish said, "Waah Raavi tu toh ekdum dhinchak hai!", to which Shiva got vexed and said, "Ae gadhedo pehle iska idea toh sunlo kya pata iske matar jese dimag mein kya aaya ho ese hi taarif karna shuru kardiya?", Raavi sighed, she knew it was meaningless to argue with him so she started explaining.

"Toh Suno...voh log humse bade hai par hum unke atyachar nahi sunenege hum sab milke unhe boycott karenge aur humara haq, humare Shiva ki bag wapas le ke rahenge...taoyaar ho saathiyoo?", she said as if she was encouraging some soldiers, but Shiva cut her in the middle and said, "Ae somnath ki sasti jhansi ki rani yeh tera bakwas apne paas rakh aur yeh humara humara mat bol mai tere hisse mein nahi aata samjhi?", to which she said pouted her mouth and started looking the other way; Dev and Krish tried to ask her but she ignored, so Shiva rolled his eyes and said, "Aye nautanki...apna taanpura chala aur plan bata", to which she narrowed her eyes and said, "Toh Suno hume 12th standard ke ladko se Shiva ki bag leni hai jis mein ek choti bag hai jismein pure 23 kanche hai...toh hum ek kaam karenge kal sham ko annual function ke waqt mai jaungi aur voh log watchman ke piche wale parking mein baithte hai toh mai jaungi aur mai unke paas se leke aaungi" and she put both of her hands on her waist, and raised her head in pride, to which Shiva pulled her braid and said, "Aye Chipkali yeh tha tera plan?Dikha diya na apna matar jesa dimag...aur tum dono gadhede bhi wah wah kar rahe they", Raavi narrowed her eyes and made a face and she continued, "Aye gadhede puri baat suntoh..yeh kya chetak pe sawar hoke bole jaraha hai...kal mai lehenga choli pehnungi aur dance hai mera usme ghoonghat bhi daalke rehna hai toh mai jaake chillaungi ke mai bacchhi hu aur mere makeup and changing clothes ki bag leli aur mai unki complain karungi, ab ladki ki bag sunke koi check bhi nahi karega aur wapas bhi dedega...", to which Dev gave her shabashi by patting her shoulders and Krish saluted her, but Shiva still looked unconvinced.

I hope y'll like it, will update the next part soon!

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Lovely start Jaanu. Kid ShiVi >>>>>

Janki🤗! Little Raavi seems to be as dobi as old Raavi! My gut says she's going to end up in trouble for some reason or the other though....😆 So I'll be on the lookout for the next part!

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"Ek yeh gadhedi toh kuch bhi bakwas kar rahi hai aur tum dono gadhede iski haan mein haan mila rahe ho...aur tu dobi kahiki, akele jaayegi vaha, voh bhi andhere mein?Ghar pe light chali jaaye toh tu chillam chilli karke sabke kaan behre kardeti hai aur tu akeli jayegi parking mein jaha chuhe aur chipkali hote hai", Shiva said as he chuckled and slightly hit her head, the big smile on her transferred to terror all over her face when she heard about rats and lizards.

She fumbled as she said, "Agar...agar chuhe aur chipkaliyan hai toh mai nahi jaungi...ek kaam karna..tum dono..haan tum dono jaana..tum dono meri chaniya choli pehenke jaana", she said as she pointed Dev and Krish. Both of them looked at each other alarmingly, and Dev said, "Tumlogo ko lagta hai mere se kuch hoga?", and Krish added, "Na baba na ese kaand mein mere jese single pasli ko kaha chuho ka khana banake kha jayega nahi nahi hum nahi", everyone got silent again and went into deep thinking, slowly, both Dev and Krish looked at Shiva, Raavi saw this and breaking the silence, she said,

"No no bilkul nahi bad idea...very bad idea..iss bandar ko nahi bhejsakte voh log jo de rahe honge to bhi nahi denge", to which Shiva said, "Maine to pehle hi bola ke mera kaand hai mai sambhalunga pan tum teeno ne hi na bola", to which Dev said, "Raavi ki baat hai toh sahi, pan karenge kya?", to which Krish hopped and said,

"Idea! Shiva ab waqt aagaya hai ki tu Shiva se Gauri banjaye", only to find all three looking at him with a questionable face, and Shiva replied, "Hein?", and he explained that he can go with Raavi by wearing one of the cholis of Raavi and it would be easy as Raavi will get the company and would be easy if any unforeseen happens, nonetheless Dev and Krish will be standing on the gate to distract anyone who was coming there.

Raavi clapped and jumped in joy while Shiva passed on a deathly glare to three of them.He bluntly said, "Ae gadhede bhagwan ne tujhe bheja toh bheja pan bheje mein bheja hi nahi bheja..mai esa kuch nahi karunga mai nahi pehnunga iss gadhedi ke kapde", to which Raavi rolled her eyes and replied, "Dekh Shiva yeh ek hi mauka hai easily leke nikal jaayenge aur tu kal sham ko mera group performance last hai hum pehle jaake le aayenge fir tum teeno mera dance dekhna okay" with a bright smile as she swayed in happiness.Shiva had no choice but to get the kanchas this was the only way they came up so he agreed.

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The next day, they all went to their school auditorium where Raavi had reached early, she was ready in her pink choli, with accessories, bindi, and light make-up looking like a doll, she helped Shiva wear one of her blue choli, and she made him wear the dupatta in a way that his soft, ruffly hair were covered and tucked two pins above his forehead so that the dupatta won't fall and he can look cute. Raavi chuckled and said, "Tu na ese ekdum dhinchak lagraha hai ekdum cute", and he replied, "Haan thik hai thik hai tera yeh khi khi vaha mat chalu kardena".She patted herself on doing an excellent job.Krish and Dev too giggled but controlled and appreciated Raavi when Shiva gave them a deadly glare, all four left for the parking area.As they reached the gate, Dev and Krish stood there, now it was Raavi and Shiva's turn to go there, so as they were about to enter, Shiva held her hand tightly and said assuringly, "Tu darna mat, mai hu tere sath", to which Raavi replied, "Haan aur tu bhi ghabrana mat aur gussa mat hona, mai bhi..hu tere sath".They entered the place holding their hands.

As they saw bunch of boys and girls of secondary section standing there, they looked upto the hook,were his bag was hanging, they took a deep breathe, as they saw two girls approaching, they shifted their attention there. Both of them stood infront of them, Raavi went forward and said, "Goodevening bhaiya,goodevening didi...can I ask you something?", a girl out of the group went to Raavi and most of them smiled as Raavi said this.The girl said, "Hi aapka naam kya hai?", to which she said, "Didi my name is Raavi and I'm in third standard.", she smiled again and said, "Nice name Raavi, pucho kya puchna hai..", and Raavi softly said pointing to the bag, "Mujhe voh bag chahiye, voh mera bag hai", and all of them looked in that direction.The boy from behind said, "Pan yeh bag toh voh ladke ka hai jo humesha gussa karta rehta hai ek number ka shararati hai ekdum rudely baat karta hai", to which Raavi replied, "No no bhaiya Shiva esa nahi hai voh to mera bestfriend hai mera bohot dhyaan rakhta hai aur ekdum clean and clear heart hai uska, ekdum coconut jesa", Shiva's heart fluttered,he smiled under the veil, to which the other asked, "toh uska bag tum kyu lene aai ho voh aake sorry bolega fir hi usse bag denge", and Raavi said, "Bhaiya voh bag na mera hai, kal na mai bag bhulgayi thi toh Shiva mere liye bag dhundhne aaya tha voh bag na important hai kyuki usme mere mumma papa ki photo hai and mumma ki diary bhi hai voh padhe bina mai so nahi paati", the girl asked, "Kyu?", to which Raavi replied with a small smile, "Didi mai jab 10days old thi na tab hi mere mumma papa stars bangaye toh mai to masima ke sath rehti hu voh bhi mujhe bohot pyaar karte hai", The girl had tears in her eyes, she gave the bag to her and hugged Raavi, she said caressing Raavi's cheeks,"Tumna bohot pyaari ho", Raavi smiled and said, "Thankyou didi, mera performance hai aap sab dekhne aana byee..." as she turned backwards,a boy said, "Yeh tumhare sath kon hai?". Raavi turned and smilingly replied, "Yeh meri bestfriend hai Ramrati" and went towards Shiva grabbed his pinky finger and came outside.

Meanwhile Shiva was totally overwhelmed for how she helped him and how did he never saw the pain of this little girl behind her giddiness, his eyes were watery,he felt bad, in his mind he promised himself to always be there for her and help her no matter whatever circumstances would be.They reached the edge where Raavi checked his bag and said, "Chale meri Ramrati" and giggled, Shiva held her hand and asked, "Tujhe sach mein tere ma baba ki yaad aati hai...kitna akela lagta hoga na tujhe..", to which she said, "Yaad to aati hai pan itni achhi do do pyaari pyaari family mujhe pyaar karti hai..masima mausapa, sumankaki,dharadi,gaumbi,anita di,krish,dev aur tu..", and he replied, "mai?", and she said, "haan haan pata hai tu hate to karta hai pan secretly protect bhi karta hai aur tere samne mai kuchhh bhiiiiii bolsakti hu toh tu mere hisse mein bhi aata hai,ab chal", he smiled as she said this, he would probably never be able to tell her or reply to her but he knew that she was his,always.

yeah so i hope y'all like this, honest reviews appreciated.

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Loved it ❤❤

Their friendship at that age was awesome ❤

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aint able to tag you sakshi :(

This waa so so cute and emotional😍😍💖 kaash aise hi bachpan k scene show me dekhne ko milta as flashbacks🙁 wish ps writers forum k writers se thoda inspiration leke apne shivi scene likhte 😒😒

Keep writingsuch cute stuffs💜