ShiVi TS~ Ramrati & Raavi...bestfriends!(completed-pg1) - Page 2

Awww 🥺❤️

This is soo pyaraa. Bachpan walee shivi ❤️

Can't wait to read more 😍

This was beautiful .❤️

Raavi’s best friend Ramvati 😆

I loved how picked up the short scenes of them both pre leap and post leap and combined them for a story.

You have really good talent girl🤗

I over the last part, I felt like crying 🥺

Raavi is so pure hearted ❤️

Shiva

Oh Jaanu this was so beautiful! My second cry session today! I loved all the references of dialogue to canon! I also loved how you covered aspects of their relationship! And childhood ShiVi k stories k to alag hi charm hote hain! You did a wonderful job! Loved it!!😍😍😍😭😭😭

haaye💖💖 dil aa gaya........

raavi ♾ ramrati

👍👌😘🤗

Janki❤️!!!! Super freaking cute! And so emotional😭! Pan dobi Raavi jitni bhi dobi kyun naa ho, dil tho safed se bhi zyada safed hain uski!

Glad Shiva got to see and understand that. And that she made it clear that she doesn't hate him. It's only him hating her... Pre wedding at least! Loved the hissa wala dialogue too...

Also, Ramrati as Raavi's best friend!!!! I was imagining Harminder, the kid who played chotu Shiva, and how gods damned cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!

kaash tum pandya store ki writer aur editor hoti.....kaash🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺

JAAANUUUU

YAAAR

i know you love long comments but my heart is so full with bachpan shivi!

❤️

Okay the first part i was giggling, second part start mei i was giggling and by the end i got all emo 😭

It was a cute sweet two shot Janu ❤️

Write more adventures of Raavi and Ramrati 😆

This was so cute! I haven't seen the show from the beginning so I don't know anything about the kids' roles except for what I've seen in the flashbacks but the kiddos were too cute! I liked how you recreated their saari scene from haveli! Just adorable ❤️

That is soo cute. It almost seemed like flashback parallel to the scene 8n the show when they escaped from haveli for the jeera kaand. Wait knowing you, I'm sure that was the inspiration of sorts.

But loved chotu shiva andnl Raavi. Trying their best to get him back his 23 kanches.