SaiRat OS What If: Mending Hearts - Page 3

Soo beautiful, loved it❤️

wish we had got something like this in the show☹

So beautiful and very well written. Wish Sai would apologise to Virat for her insolent behaviour and Virat to tell her outright what hurt him so much. But, I guess we will never get to see an apologetic Sai.

Loved it... Kaash real mein Sai ne itni samajhdari dikhayi hoti 😭

Good one❤️❤️ Despite disagreeing to Virat’s actions and the butchering of his character, I still felt sorry for him during that episode. She was way too rude and hurt him really bad. But his actions later cant be reasoned though. So you picked a very sensitive track and treated it so nicely.

And I understand what you wrote about criticising your own writing. It’s natural, because when you set out to write (draw or design etc) you have a certain vision through your imagination. But sometimes when you put that down on paper it doesn’t appear the same way. And that’s where the comparison and the criticism comes. And it’s only the creator who will be able to make that comparison because only he/she knows the two versions(imagination and actual). So it’s fine. Don’t beat yourself for it. I feel so too many times. Sometimes I fumble to just place the right words in a simple sentence also. And that puts me off. And somedays you have written something you wanted, but the words used dont bring in the desired effect. Its all part of it. Relax, chill, write some more and share❤️❤️❤️ Would love to read more from you😇😇

Ok. 1st of all, if you didnt want people to feels like you are fishing for compliments, you shouldnt have written this things for everyone to read either. You should have rather just pointed it out in the pm or something to the person who messaged you. Just sayin, that's all.

2nd, this story had many problems. It was all over the place and while the scenes were nice, it felt as if youbwrote it in a hurry. The lack of proofreading was visible clearly.

I really was expecting better...but nvm.

Originally posted by: Devikadish

Soo beautiful, loved it

wish we had got something like this in the show☹

Originally posted by: monsi08

Loved it... Kaash real mein Sai ne itni samajhdari dikhayi hoti

Originally posted by: fatssrilanka

So beautiful and very well written. Wish Sai would apologise to Virat for her insolent behaviour and Virat to tell her outright what hurt him so much. But, I guess we will never get to see an apologetic Sai.

Thank you so much!!

I always wanted to see an apologetic Sai and an angry Virat...who will of course melt after seeing her fat tears. We got something like that in the college fest track but it was comedic rather than serious.

Originally posted by: NoKidding123

Ok. 1st of all, if you didnt want people to feels like you are fishing for compliments, you shouldnt have written this things for everyone to read either. You should have rather just pointed it out in the pm or something to the person who messaged you. Just sayin, that's all.

2nd, this story had many problems. It was all over the place and while the scenes were nice, it felt as if youbwrote it in a hurry. The lack of proofreading was visible clearly.

I really was expecting better...but nvm.

I am really sorry if I made you feel like that. As I mentioned in the post, seeking compliments is really not my motto here. I appreciate both the compliments and the comments. Both of them motivate me to work harder and better.

Right now, also, I really, truly, appreciate your criticism. Tbh I was in a hurry to post the story, because this took me really long to write, and I didn't get any chance to proofread it. Also, usually I write my stories in one go but this time, maybe because I feel so disconnected with SaiRat currently, it took me several days to complete it. Every day I used to write a little so, I get that maybe the emotions felt a bit inconsistent.

I will of course try harder next time. In fact, I am working on a story right now, and I will try my best to improve my writing.

Thank You🤗

Originally posted by: ShipIsSailing

Thank you so much!!

I always wanted to see an apologetic Sai and an angry Virat...who will of course melt after seeing her fat tears. We got something like that in the college fest track but it was comedic rather than serious.

I hope we get to see an apologetic Sai and an angry Virat in this track.

So beautifully written

Beautifully presented OS 😍👏💖