RamYa FF : Second Chances (Discontinued. Note on Page 37) - Page 18

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Redrose1208

Lovely story....the pace is so good, the portraying of emotions and the story line everything is just wonderful....please do continue giving such nice and quick updates....waiting with bated breath for ram and priya to actually fall for each other. Also I love the fact that in your story Ram and Priya are shown to be talking and behaving like a couple to some extent which I find missing in the show. There they both are shown too detached from each other.


Yeah. I hope the show's Ram and Priya start talking at least, if nothing else.


And thank you so much for the kind words. My heart is so full right now. Thank you! ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Finally after such a long wait….missed your FF badly last week BlurredLines. Hope all’s well at your side.

Your portrayal of Ram makes me love him more and whenever I watch the serial I keep looking for such small traits in the character too. All in all….I keep checking the forum for your next chapter as I enjoy visualising the story….it’s moving forward steadily n beautifully.

Thank you! 😊

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Posted: 3 years ago

God! I am just loving the way you are penning down this captivating story <3. Will be waiting for the next update.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Ahhhh...this story is such a relief from the mess the show has been. Thank you for writing it !!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Awesome Chapter😊

I'm enjoying reading this ff so much😃

Please continue soon😳

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: BlurredLines10


Hey hey. I am so sorry. I went away on a trekking trip and there was no network at all. I didn't realize that I should have put a message here.


Hope your Diwali was fabulous. ❤️


Ohh! That sounds great!

How was the trip? Hope the leeches didn't find you😆

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Posted: 3 years ago

Had missed your update for long…

“Ram was fast turning out to be her ray of sunshine. “ lovely ending line!!!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Loved how they both went lights out for the nap without a care in the world😆


Priya's explanation of the Tiffin time speaks volumes & Ram's being such an understanding partner. I'm so happy to see their equation already developing🤗


Pri has already started asking'bt the Family. I'm glad 😌


I love the Pri-Bri Team already 🥰


Loved the line - " he seemingly had a bottomless pit of patience, empathy and stupid humour for her. "

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Posted: 3 years ago

Her ray of sunshine. How adorable was that?

You're doing such a fantastic job with this FF! I apologize for not commenting on each part (admittedly, I lost track of the FF in the middle).

I love how apt your characterization is - and how smooth the writing is. It feels as if I'm watching this happen on the show itself.

Great job, seriously! You are so talented!

I can't wait to read more of this beautiful FF :)

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Posted: 3 years ago

Hey this was beautiful :) the slow transition is relationship is beautifully depicted :) Please continue soon 🧡

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