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Posted: 2 years ago
#11

Oye hoye kya baat hai soniyo…

Dil khush kar ditta…


It’s awesome πŸ‘


Handsome professor ki late latif student..πŸ˜†

Bechari kallu se apne late hone ki wajah hi nahi kahi jaa rahi hai πŸ˜†


Professor sahab apni student ko itna kyu pareshan karte hai πŸ˜‰


Ghar me bhi miyaji ki alag hi class chal rahi hai πŸ˜³


I really liked it …



Aise hi likhte raho balike..


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Posted: 2 years ago
#12

You killed it bro seriously πŸ€ͺπŸ˜‚

Mujhe laga hi tha ki kalyani ka professor Malhar hi hoga hayee Malhar ki waja sa Kalyani college ma ana ma late hogayiπŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

Abhi tak Kalyani ki Freud's Kalyani ka husband sa nhi mila jab unha pata chalega ki wo or koi nhi unka new professor hai

And in the last it was on fire vanshu ka likha romance humehsa awesome hota hai ha na?❀️❀️

But the update was beautiful

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Posted: 2 years ago
#13

I swear to God this was πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯πŸ”₯ if u don't do a second part u know I won't talk to u also make it hotter πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆ

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Posted: 2 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: Kalma92

Love it! Quite a hatke concept from your other FFs (him being her teacher, them being married and nobody knowing about this in her college)... please continue!! It has potential!

thank you riya ..glad to know you loved this ..I will surely update it's second part sooon ..😳

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Dekh vanshu 

Second part sochna hi nahi karna please please please 

Seems so Mysterious

Why did commisioner saab take up.tje job of a guest lecturer

And what will be the reaction of sab when all knows that he is the so called jeejaji 

And tum to romance ka queen he kallu 

Kitne ache se likha he tumne 

I couldn't read a line without a smile on my face 

So so beautiful 

I know u are busy so I don't say that you need to go for an FF 

But this one chapter se ending it is so unfair 

Keep it atleast 2 or 3 chapters 

It is beautiful baba 

Please write 

Lots of love keep writing my Rockstar

πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ‘€πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—πŸ’—

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Posted: 2 years ago
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First mein hi jab kallu entered, tabhi main  samajh gayi thi ki this teacher is kallu's love interest. Aur ye os hain so full love story nehi bata sakhte matlab aisa nehi ho sakhta ki pehli baar mile hain as it's an os aur ek chapter mein hi end hogi so utna likhne ka chance nehi hain. But when mj said  Mrs.Rane, I got so excited! Tab main pura samjhi. Aur last mein to full on mood mein aagaye the professor sirπŸ™ˆπŸ˜†πŸ™ˆ unki itni hot student...I mean paani ko dekhke wo bhala kaise control karenge!!πŸ™ˆπŸ˜†

But kallu's character in this os felt a little dominated. I mean mj mein jo Aag hain wo Aag thodi kallu mein bhi hona chahiye haina?? Aur iss  os ke aur chapters please likhna...main tumpe pressure nehi dungi cause pehle tumhe ek ashiyaan ka update dena hainπŸ˜…πŸ˜… but iska update bhi jald hi likhna jab time mile...Basically ye bol rahi hu ki iss os mein abhi bhi bohot chances aur scope hain. Please isko continue karna❀ 

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Posted: 2 years ago
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                                     Promo :- 


Malhar ::say it kalyani...kya keh rahi thi tum kal raat ..." He said while making soft circles on her waist which is doing nothing but creating havoc in her body ...she is burning in his igniting fire ... 

" Agr bataogi nhi to mujhein kaise pata chalega .." he whispered huskily in her ears she clutched his collar tightly

She with great difficulty open her eyes and said 

" Aap humesha aisa karte hai kal raat bhi aapne mujhein sone nahi diya ..this is cheating malharji .." she said softly hitting his chest which make Malhar giggle on his cute wife antics ..

                                                                                            


Filling the tub with rose petals and scented oils ..Malhar takes his wife in his arms ....

"Ahhh ....mall...harjjji..." Her moans and his groans  are only thing which heards after that ...

She knows and she liked this teaching ...

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jara567

First mein hi jab kallu entered, tabhi main  samajh gayi thi ki this teacher is kallu's love interest. Aur ye os hain so full love story nehi bata sakhte matlab aisa nehi ho sakhta ki pehli baar mile hain as it's an os aur ek chapter mein hi end hogi so utna likhne ka chance nehi hain. But when mj said  Mrs.Rane, I got so excited! Tab main pura samjhi. Aur last mein to full on mood mein aagaye the professor sirπŸ™ˆπŸ˜†πŸ™ˆ unki itni hot student...I mean paani ko dekhke wo bhala kaise control karenge!!πŸ™ˆπŸ˜†

But kallu's character in this os felt a little dominated. I mean mj mein jo Aag hain wo Aag thodi kallu mein bhi hona chahiye haina?? Aur iss  os ke aur chapters please likhna...main tumpe pressure nehi dungi cause pehle tumhe ek ashiyaan ka update dena hainπŸ˜…πŸ˜… but iska update bhi jald hi likhna jab time mile...Basically ye bol rahi hu ki iss os mein abhi bhi bohot chances aur scope hain. Please isko continue karna❀ 

awwww thank you so much jaru baby for this much kind and beautiful words πŸ€—πŸ€—

I specially made Malhar character a little dominating in this story as he is senior to her and a cute kalyani we always wished to see πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆ so I made them like that but as usual to melt Malhar only her innocent eye is enough where he burn world alive just to get her ..  πŸ˜³

Updated promo tell me how you find that should I continue it πŸ’—πŸ’—

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: GAYATHRINAYAR

Dekh vanshu 

Second part sochna hi nahi karna please please please 

Seems so Mysterious

Why did commisioner saab take up.tje job of a guest lecturer

And what will be the reaction of sab when all knows that he is the so called jeejaji 

And tum to romance ka queen he kallu 

Kitne ache se likha he tumne 

I couldn't read a line without a smile on my face 

So so beautiful 

I know u are busy so I don't say that you need to go for an FF 

But this one chapter se ending it is so unfair 

Keep it atleast 2 or 3 chapters 

It is beautiful baba 

Please write 

Lots of love keep writing my Rockstar

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thank you gayu baby for this much love and support will surely continue it ...πŸ€—

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: PRAKRITI_12

VanShu.... Kya mast update di hai tune.... Sach m tujhpe bohot pyaar aa rha hai.... Pta hai main tujhse naraz thi kyu ki teri meri baat nhi ho pa rhi thi... Par saari naarazgi door krdi tune apne iss update se😍😍😍😍 

Main kya kahu... Yaar this was unexpected and really loved it..... Starting main mujhe laga hi tha ki ye professor ji humare malharji hi honge..... Ese description unhi ke hote hai naπŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ 

SacH MAin vanshu..... An extrem thank u for updating this one...... And glad ki iska 2nd part bhi aayega....❀️❀️❀️❀️❀️

thank you so much praku baby glad you like it ...πŸ™ˆπŸ™ˆ

Mujhein pata tha sab aaram sein guess kar lenge after all sabko kalyani ko padhne kein baad aisi story main seedha Malhar chahiye hota hai β˜ΊοΈ