Let Me Love You ♥️ A MaAn story- completed / 14.11 - Page 3

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Omgggg so grateful..thanks a lot sweetie😍😍 Loving this post..keep it coming baby🤩😛😛🤗🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Thanks a ton dear..so sweet of you to take time to wish me🤗🤗🤗🥰🥰

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: hinz

Teaser page 1



He missed her!

....and she missed him too!



Of course she did and how could she not, when all she could think of is him...his ways, his face and everything about him....


every time she held the keys to her house, it reminded her of his untiring support and heartening gestures...


when she cooked halwa, it took her back to the time they made halwa together in his kitchen...


the times she went to the mandir it made her think of their visit together and how easily he shared his feelings and made her share hers, without any pretensions...she never felt the need to pose as something when with him...she only and always felt a sense of comfort and understanding, the kind she never felt with anyone before.


when she danced, she thought of their dance at the reunion, at navratri and the night they danced with the kids..only he could bring forth the childlike carefree quality in her...


she looked at the empty chair in his cabin and thought of the countless times he motivated her and appreciated her passion to make a difference and even called her a rockstar which made her believe that she was one...


every time she took an auto, she would think of all the times he joked and lightened her mood with his silly banter and wisecracks.



Every single thing reminded her of him...



******


Sitting on the sofa in her house, she longingly shuffled the snow in the snow-globe he had gifted her...though it represented the belief that she alone was enough to take on the world by herself, she felt something was missing...she felt incomplete...yes she could take on the struggles of life by herself but there was a part of her that yearned a sense of belonging, a part of her that wanted to share and be complete...and it was him she wanted to share it with...


Could this be that dreaded feeling they call ‘love’? perhaps yes, but she didn't feel the need to give it a name...she’d rather call it togetherness if she had to call it something...cause by now she knew it was more than just friendship...and she had to let him know!


“JSK Kaka” she answered her phone


“JSK beta, maine teri kal subah ki tickets karwa di hai, tujhe akele jaane mein koi dikkat toh nahi hogi?” asked GK rhetorically.


“nahi Kaka Anuj ne mujhe sab sikha diya” she replied boasting with pride and gratitude.


“Anupama beta, mai kuch kahoon bura toh nahi maanogi? “ GK was sure she wouldn’t mind him saying anything but wanted to give her a heads up on what he was about to say...


“ nahin Kaka aap toh mere aur Anuj ke bade hain, aapko haq hai” she loved taking his name over and over again, it made her feel close to him...


“ beta, ye toh tum bhi jaanti ho aur mai bhi ke Anuj aise Mumbai kyun chala gaya, mai bas itna kehna chahta hoon ke tu usey galat mat samajhna, Anuj bada hi emotional aur sensitive hai, usey ye guilt...” and she stopped him right there to save her further embarrassment...


“Kaka aapko koi safai dene ki zaroorat nahin hai, mai hamesha se jaanti thi ki Anuj ka mann saaf hai aur jo hua usmein unka koi kusoor nahi” a quick flashback of the Diwali night played in her head...


“ main bas wahan jaakar ye baat Anuj ko khud batana chahti hoon” she cheered thinking of the moment she will be able to see him again...


“ thanks beta, sada sukhi reh” said GK and ended the call with his blessings


A huge smile crept up her face as she packed her bag and tucked in a box of halwa just for him.



*****


Blankly staring at the projector screen he flicked between slides...


“Sir aapse koi madam milne aayi hain” informed the office attendant.


“huh? kaun madam? matlab kuch naam bataya unhone” he asked curiously thinking he had no scheduled appointments that morning.


“nahin Sir naam toh nahi bataya unhone, kehdoon ke aap busy hai?” he asked looking at how uninterested the boss looked.


“haan kehdo ke kuch important baat ho toh mujhe email kar de” said Anuj and sent him off.


A short while later his phone beeped with an email notification, but he didn't bother checking and randomly flicked through the slides again.


And when he was bored of that too he got up to leave the room and checked his phone as he was passing the reception lobby....he stopped in his tracks and traced back when he saw through the frosted glass, a blurred image of a saree clad lady sitting on sofa...the image matched hers entirely but ‘it can’t be her’ he muttered and tapped his head to brush off the thought and walked to the elevator....while waiting, he checked his phone again to find an email with a subject title that read ‘Anuj’....and he knew it was her in the lobby...











chalo aaj ke liye itna hi, kal milte hai with another part, might have to post a few cause I have a lot to say😳 please please please post a comment to let me know what you thought and if you are as excited as I am to see this play out on screen if we are lucky enough😳


the song I had in mind while writing this part was Samjhawan, feel free to use you own or may be you dont need one, whatever floats your boat😆



Brilliant!!! I could actually visualize the whole scene in front of my eyes!!! Tuu yaar mardalegi...

Aage kya!! Woh ladki apne belonging ko wapas le aaye and shah ke muh pe zor ka thappad mare

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: sunshine36

Omgggg so grateful..thanks a lot sweetie😍😍 Loving this post..keep it coming baby🤩😛😛🤗🤗


Happy bday again!!!!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I loved this ❤❤🤗🤗 so exciting🤗😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Aise aadha adhura chodke jane ka nai re baba. Anuj ke saath hame bhi cliffhanger pe chod diya 🤣


Pls to let Ms.Anupamaa share her dil ki baat asap.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#27

Maine sab imagine kiya. She missed him too. Achaji. Anuj..... Ye bhi thik hai...

GK kaka is always at his best.

Second part pilijjj😉 jaldi se ho bhi.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#28

Jaldi jaldi milwa bhi do unhe

Itna mat tarsao humein

Anuj ki beaming wali smile ke darshan kara hi do humein

Posted: 4 years ago
#29

Teaser pg 1

Part 1- pg 2



Part 2-


“Anu!” he sighed and with cloudy eyes he caressed the screen of his phone with his thumb and lovingly hovered over her name .... as though the name spelt magic...like it were a painkiller that could drive all his pain away...she was indeed some kind of everything....


At first he hustled to get back to the lobby with excitement, heaps of positive energy and a lot of hope but then his pace decelerated as he saw her sitting there with her laptop, anxiously waiting for a reply.


As he inched closer there was a myriad of emotions congesting his heart and head...how he wished to run up to her and sway her in his longing arms to never let her go...she was so precious to him and the thought of hurting her, hurted him...


Bemused with the overwhelming rush he tried to detangle each emotion and placed it in the order of what he felt the most... happy was the first, relieved a close second with excitement and anxiety catching up swiftly...


After a lot of this and that he finally got to the sense that stayed with him the longest and that was guilt and discomfort...he knew not why and he could give his everything to rid himself of the awful feeling that made him behave irrationally and leave her by herself when she must have needed him the most...


His eyes welled up and his heart was in his mouth as he fast approached her at the slowest pace gathering every bit of courage to face her...


The short span from the lift to the reception felt like a barren desert he had to cross through a mirage of overpowering emotions in the quest of reaching the oasis.


Clueless on how to react he cleared his wailing throat and pushed his glasses to the forehead and brushed the tears away to make himself presentable before he finally went up to her...


“Anujjj” she mouthed on seeing his tall figure right in front of her and he melted into a puddle in that very moment, with his eyes tearing up again just like hers...


“Anu...pama... tum yahan? “ he asked even though he knew why...


“haan...mai yahan! “ she exclaimed and arched her brows zealously while he was still awestruck to see her there.


“sorry mai tumhe expect nahi kar raha tha isliye aise...” he said in an effort to convey his confused feelings..


“aapko lene... nai matlab...aapse milne aayi hoon.....” already floored by her deliberate fumble, he looked at her intently to let the feeling sink in, which made her nervous instead...


”aapko disturb toh nahi kiya maine?...agar aap biji hai toh mai wait kar sakti hoon...matlab jab tak aap free nahi ho jaate...main yahin sofey par intejaar kar sakti hoon, aap jayiye aur apna kaam khatam kar lijiye, surri mujhe bata kar aana chahiye tha...par maine socha ki surprije doongi lekin ye nahin socha ki aap biji bhi ho sakte hain...“ she rattled on like usual and made him feel like the old times...


Though he could watch her talk all day, he felt a little intimidated with the audience she had pulled with her blabber...


“Anupama, hum kahin bahar jaakar baat karey?” he gestured to the people watching them...she bit her tongue with embarrassment and quietly followed him to the elevator uttering a ‘surri’ under her breath...


Gosh, he’d missed her antics terribly...his eyes were fixated on her as they got in and out of the lift then walked towards the exit to the building....


Breathing in the fresh air, they stood outside facing the sea...the inviting smell of waves stirred a reminiscing feeling in them and they both yelled in sync “samandar chalein? ” and laughed happily thinking some things will never change....



******



Though it was a short walk to beach from the office, the very justified yet awkward silence made it feel like a whole lot longer...


While he struggled to process and prepare his defence for leaving abruptly, she was engrossed in her conflicting thoughts on his reaction of seeing her there...was he happy? yes she said to herself, was he angry? she asked and no was the answer to that for sure.. wondering how to start the conversation that she had mentally rehearsed a hundred times on the way, she rebuked herself and rushed slightly ahead of him....


While fighting the conflict in her head, she misread the oncoming traffic and stepped on the busy road when a car screeched its brakes inches away from her...


“Anu!!!!! “ he screamed as he saw his life flash before him...with his heart pounding in his chest, he leaped across to pull her off the road and yanked her straight into his arms...




*******






so yeah that happened😳 I know I’m testing your patience but please comment and tell me what you liked so I can focus more on it in the next part, which by the way will be posted by evening woh bhi IST not BST😆, the song that could justify Anuj here was abhi mujhe mein kahin, love it again for many reasons...ok phir shaam ko milte hai, thank you for all the comments before mann khush ho gaya🤗

Edited by hinz - 4 years ago
Posted: 4 years ago
#30

https://youtu.be/ktIdwvywpg0



song link and tag, let me know if you’d like one fir the next part😳

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