OS: Somewhere in the future. epilogue pg 23 - Page 14

Beautiful ending❤️❤️❤️❤️

I wish this could continue.....

My god. This beautiful. So so beautiful. I read the whole thing twice. ❤️❤️ :')

Originally posted by: Nja91

This was really well written! But I wish the FF could continue....

Please continue to write other stories too...

Hey Neerja Di, this was supposed to be an OS.

And writing is my passion as well as profession.

I have written for many serials😳

Originally posted by: Dee10

This was beautiful.❤️ Talking to each other was what was needed all along. It was such a pleasure reading this. 👏👏👏Thank you for taking out time to write it and tagging every time.😊 I hope you write more stories in future.

Yes, talking to each other (and listening) is what is needed most of the time.

Writing fiction is my passion as well as my profession.

Thanks for the wishes.

Originally posted by: Thanuj

Give us an epilogue. Their marriage. A warm welcome from the family to sai.

I thought of an epilogue based on the nok-zok that enthralls us generally. I had written one such scene for another serial, I can adapt it to Sairat.

Originally posted by: Forgetmenot620

Beautiful ending❤️❤️❤️❤️

I wish this could continue.....

This was an OS. Only one or two chapters, but got stretched to six.

Thanks for the wishes.

Sometimes, simplicity has a beauty that complexity doesn't. Your last chaoter is an embodiment of that. While complexity is emotionally more influential, simple conversations and simple moments make life cherishable and adorable. I love the way you have skipped theatrics and went straight to confession and heartfelt conversations. Something, I always fail to do in my own stories. Your last chapter taught that to me today.

I absolutely loved being on this stories journey to its destination and can't wait to read more of your works. Especially that OS about Sai's uniform and normal dressing or something along that line.

Love 🤍

Thank u. But a beautiful os. U penned both their emotions beautifully. Exciting for epilogue.

Originally posted by: Potterhead3009

Sometimes, simplicity has a beauty that complexity doesn't. Your last chaoter is an embodiment of that. While complexity is emotionally more influential, simple conversations and simple moments make life cherishable and adorable. I love the way you have skipped theatrics and went straight to confession and heartfelt conversations. Something, I always fail to do in my own stories. Your last chapter taught that to me today.

I absolutely loved being on this stories journey to its destination and can't wait to read more of your works. Especially that OS about Sai's uniform and normal dressing or something along that line.

Love 🤍

Perfect observations.

My mentor once told me, "Dont write something which has the reader reach out to a dictionery everytime!" Simple language, crisp sentences have much more impact than long ones, wherein the reader gets mentally tired by the time the sentence ends.

Always focus on the target audience. Luckily we have simple English speaking audience here, most of them at a +12 level. I cannot write in Hindi, though I would prefer to. Some situations, particularly Indian ones, cannot be penned down in English. That language has its own beauty and limitations.

Better not be a Shashi Tharoor..nobody will read a book that he has written.

Are you a south Indian? I am a half tamilian (mother's side)

Originally posted by: Sagi.

Perfect observations.

My mentor once told me, "Dont write something which has the reader reach out to a dictionery everytime!" Simple language, crisp sentences have much more impact than long ones, wherein the reader gets mentally tired by the time the sentence ends.

Always focus on the target audience. Luckily we have simple English speaking audience here, most of them at a +12 level. I cannot write in Hindi, though I would prefer to. Some situations, particularly Indian ones, cannot be penned down in English. That language has its own beauty and limitations.

Better not be a Shashi Tharoor..nobody will read a book that he has written.

Are you a south Indian? I am a half tamilian (mother's side)

Your mentor is absolutely right. Complicating our language sometimes, drains out the emotions we're supposed to put in our words. I'll definitely remember your advice, it's an important one to keep in mind while writing. Because sometimes, in flow, we might lose the point we're trying to make

I guess we can leave Shashi Tharoor to university classes and research papers (God he's exhausting while being used as a source)

I'm a south Indian as well. A Telugu speaking person. And a full Andhraiite at that. So writing in Hindi is not really my forte, though I can read, speak and understand.