Jasfa ka the end - dewali treat for all ( a short story) - Page 3

Originally posted by: FieryLioness

superb Ani 🤣

I loved this groom swap idea 🤣

Btw Tune bhi makers ki tarah dhokha de diya.

In EDT ur idea was something make her fall from cliff( if I am not wrong)

Main end tak wait karti rahi ab kisi twist mein Fateh usse Dhaka marega

Hua hi nahi aisa kuchh 😆

ML killing lady considered cruel. That will make him like a villain.

Originally posted by: Aniash

Hi riv

Female as well. I am married and in my thirties

Niceee<3

I'm 18 so if you don't mind I'll still call you Anita/ ani?

Thanks Ani for the tag. Again one of your witty stories. Rather than the show your stories are more interesting

I like newly wed with a twist part🤣🤣🤣

This was super hilarious. But u forgot to get jasmin slapped. Atleast usaki MIL se to karavati yaar. I was so looking fwd to that😜😜😜

Omg I Loved This Alot I Wish This Actually Happens To Jasmine In The Show.

No Hope From The Writers.

Your A Better Writer Then The Tv Serials Writer.

🤗

This is your best one yet! 🤣 🤣

Originally posted by: Shruti_0505

Thanks for the tag.

This was epic. Hilarious.

Jasmine deserves this.

Next part: fatejo marriage and the bride is swapped cause tejo wants to marry angad

I really wish what u say happens. Tejo leaving fateh for angad will be the best punishment for him.

Originally posted by: Ashviniv

Thanks Ani for the tag. Again one of your witty stories. Rather than the show your stories are more interesting

I like newly wed with a twist part🤣🤣🤣

This was super hilarious. But u forgot to get jasmin slapped. Atleast usaki MIL se to karavati yaar. I was so looking fwd to that😜😜😜

The slap is included in the torture package . I didn't write details. 😁😁

Originally posted by: moumita13

"Newly wedded with a twist! " This cracked me up!🤣🤣

Kya story hai!😍 Fateh ka bhi koi intezam karde behen

Hahaha , fateh ka intezam kash ho jata. Lekin mushkil hain coz he's ML not villain.

Hi Mayuri

Are u still active in forum

This is latest story i wrote

Dewali treat

Happy dewali

This was hilarious Ani 🤣🤣 Ab jaldi se iska part 2 likho jisme Fateh dekhta hi rahe jaye aur Tejo ko Angad uda le jaaye. Fateh ke haath kuch nahi aana chahiye 🤣🤣