SURROGACY AND HEALING RELATIONS (PART-VII pg 15) updated 27/2 - Page 6

Originally posted by: Khoobsurat123

Loved the progress of Shivi for being reluctant to being supportive😳

I already said never want this in show but you wrote the story exceptionally well and that attracts me to read it further🤗

I hope Raavi survives and they got the happiness of being together

omg omg omg i just hope raavi is safe pleaseeeeeeeee

alsoooo i can totally imagine raavi all plumpy and cuteeeeeeeee

Originally posted by: Iktara22

omg omg omg i just hope raavi is safe pleaseeeeeeeee

alsoooo i can totally imagine raavi all plumpy and cuteeeeeeeee

Please update the next part soon. Eagerly waiting for it.

Originally posted by: sandrasheron

Please update the next part soon. Eagerly waiting for it.

PART-V

"Doctor, Raavi....... "

Shiva asks hopefully and doctor says,

"Raavi....... App log mere sath cabin mein aaye main kuch discuss krna chahti hoon aur baby ko humne NICU mein shift kiya hai kio kii premature delivery thi iss liye toh app aa sakte mere saath........... "

Shiva was very tensed and walked with doctor Gaura also followed them they went in cabin and doctor told them,

"Pehle main yeh kehna chahungi kii Raavi khatre se bahar hai......"

Everyone looks at the doctor and she continues,

" uska accident ho gya tha aur fir yeh delivery easy nahi hota hai par vo survive krr gayi hai iss baat ka bhut shukriyaada krna chahiye............. Yeah sirf by god's grace ho paya hai.........Usse app logon ka support bhut jaroori hai aur baat yeh hai kii shayad Raavi ke baby conceive krne ke chances bhi bhut kam ho chuke hai.. . . .. . Uska umbical cord damage ho gya hai humne usse bata diya hai aur vo iss wajah se bhi kafi dukhi hai.......... Apko uski care krni ho gi.............. Yeh prescription hai kal discharge mil jayega.............par apko regular check up ke liye aana hoga.... Aur baby bhi theek hai haan baby ko discharge kal nahi mil sakta apko next 2 weeks aana hoga kio kii baby NICU mein hai.......All the best"

They move out and Shiva cries clinging to Gaumbi and says,

"Gaumbi meri Raavi........ Itna kuch kaise..... Ho sakta hai........ "

Gaura tries to console him but he keeps on crying and saying,

"Usne hamare liye itna sab kiya......... Itni mushkil se sab kuch theek hua tha............ Abb uske saath fir se itna sab......... "

Dhara says,

"Gaumbi usne hamare liye itna kuch kiya abb vo khud kabhi maa nahi ban payegi ......... Hamari Raavi sabke jeevan main khushiyaan bharti rehti hai par uske jeevan main itna dukh kyon hai..... Shiva tujhe uske liye strong rehna hoga tu hi hai jo Raavi ko sambhal sakta hai......... "

Gaumbi also becomes firm and says,

"Shiva Raavi tujhe pyaar krti hai tujh par bharosa karti hai........ Tujhe use sambhalna hoga Shiva....... "

Shiva nods and goes to Raavi's room where she was resting and Gaura went to see the baby in NICU, Shiva goes near her and holds her hand she looks pale and gloomy she says,.

"Shiva baby theek hai na.. "

"Ekdum fit and fine hai... "

Shiva replied and than continues,

"Ae chipkali......... Tune toh jaan nikal di thi yaar...........aur itni weak lag rahi hai main toh pyaar se teddy bear bolta tha tu toh gussa hi krr gayi... "

She looks into his eyes than hugs him and cries and says,

"Shiva....... I am sorry...... Tujhe babies bhut pasand hai mujhe yeh pata hai....... Yehi ikk aisa gift tha jo main tujhe dena chahti thi aur main vo bhi nahi krr sakti........... Tere liye kuch nahi krr sakti....... "

Shiva looked at her she looks so dejected , Shiva broke into tears himself, he spoke making his hold stronger,

"Tu yeh kya soch rahi hai, tune toh mera jahan gifts se bhar diya hai...... Baby hai toh hai........ Aur mete pass pehle hi ikk cute sa baby hai jo mere saath rehta hai....... Meri chipkali...... Mera teddy bear........ Meri Raavi....... Toh mujhe kisi aur ki jaroorat nahi hai.......... Tu hai na mere paas pagal hai kya............."

Raavi keeps on crying clinging to him but than Gaura brought little baby to her room by doctors permission, they entered and Raavi looked at the child and Dhara forwards the baby towards her she holds the baby and looks at the admiringly and says,

"Dhara dii yeh yoh apki tarah dikhti hai........."

Saying this she kisses the head and shiva comes behind her and holds the baby with her in way Raavi leaned back to his chest and both had a eye lock Shiva assured her everything will be fine. A lone tear escapes her eyes and both looked at baby.

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FEW WEEK LATER,

Intial weeks were very much difficult for Raavi as she was not able to come up with the fact that she can't conceive a baby of her own which she can say her and Shiva's.Tara was brought home after proper NICU treatment, Raavi was now better and had again started to come back to life. Whole family try to cheer her up but still her loss was irreparable. One day Raavi was talking to Rishita when they both heard suman and Dhara talking suman said,

"Bhagodi ki beti,Raavi ne teri beti ko janam diya hai vo teri beti ke itna karib hain par dhyan rakhna vo kagdi ki beti hai kahin teri beti ko cheen na le aur uski khudki aulad toh hone se rahi tu apna dhyan rakh........"

Dhara said,

"Maa,app kya bol rahi hai yeh......"

"Chup...........meri baat maan aur apni beti ka dhyan rakh"

Raavi feels like a knife have stabbed her heart she looks at Rishita and moves to her room and sat on the bed crying, Shiva was now happy about that Raavi has stooped being gloomy and is now again started chattering with everyone he enters in the room with a smile to meet Raavi but when he enters the room looks at her and gets worried and cups her face and said,

"Ae chipkali.......kio ro rahi hai......."

Raavi holds his hand which is on her cheek and said,

"Shiva, main na Tara se bhut pyaar karti hoon, par maine kabhi nahi socha ki main tara ko Dhara dii se cheen lungi......kabhi bhi nahi......"

Shiva says by looking direct in her eyes,

"Tujhe kis ne kaha hai yeh mujhe pata hai tu kabhi aisa nahi karegi"

Raavi breaks down and hugs him clinging to him while choking and sniffing she spoke,

"Shiva........kaki.......ne.........mmuujheee kaha kii ......main massi maa ke.......sath........toh main..........Tara ko......cheen lungi.........kio kii meri...khud ki aulad.........nahi hogi........."

Hearing this Shiva got shocked he said to Raavi,

"Raavi maa ne tujhe aise bola "

Than Raavi tells him,

"Kaki dhara dii se baat kar rahi thi......tab maine aur rishita ne suna "

Raavi kept crying clinging to shiva and shiva caressed her hair and let her take out her Exhaustion , after an hour or so raavi slept hugging Shiva and Shiva just comforted her than he turned out to have a detail of the matter, he went to rishita and asked,

"Bhabhi, maa aur Dhara dii kya baat kar rahe the jo Raavi itna roo rahi thi"

Rishita tells shiva each and every word and now the whole scenario became clear in front of him, he went to Dhara and enquired the same thing Dhara also yold him the same and he asked her,

"Bhabhi kya apko yeh lgta hai kya kii Raavi Tara se pyaar karti hai taki vo use apse cheen sake..."

Dhara replied,

"Shiva Raavi jaisa masoom koii bhi nahi hai vo toh kabhi aisa soch bhi nahi sakti...........vo toh sabko bina kidmsi swarth ke pyaar deti hai..."

Shiva takes a breath and says,

"Bhabhi badi hi mushkil se Raavi wapas se khush huyi thi, dubara jindagi jeene lagi thi aur fir yeh sab hua jo nahi hona chahiye tha uska dil saaf hai, vo kisi ka bura nahi sochti toh uske sath yeh sab nahi hona chahiye........."

Saying this he leaves and when he comes in the aangan his eyes also filled with tears he saw Raavi looking towards the crib where Tara was sleeping and she had a longing in her eyes, Shiva can't resist himself and went towards Raavi and hugged her tightly in the aangan and she cried again clinging to him whispering,

"Main aise nahi hu Shiva, sach mein........."

Suman came out and said,

"Ae shiva yeh aangan hai kya kar rahe ho tum dono..........."

Everyone comes out and hearing suman shouting, meanwhile Raavi tries to seperate from Shiva but shiva holds her tightly shocking suman Raavi looks at shiva pleadingly and says,

"Shiva kaki dant rahi hai........ "

Shiva looks at her and turns and keep his hand on Raavi's shoulder and sumam says,

"Ae shiva tu bhi petticoat chaap ban gya........ 9 mahine nahi huye tum logon ko aur tu bhi bandh gya na iss ke pallu se...... "

Shiva stays silent and tighten grip on Raavi's shoulder and suman continues,

"Aee markundi gay........ Agar mujhe pata hota ki tu mere bete ko badal hi degi toh main kabhi tujhe uski jindagi mein aane hi nahi deti vapas........ Ae shiva tu na isse talak lae hi le vese bhi mujhe toh mere shiva ka ansh chahiye....... Jo ab yeh Raavi nahi de sakti...... "

Suman was cutt in mid sentence as Shiva roared making everyone shocked,

"Maa........ Tu kya bol rahi hai.......tujhe khud ko bhi samajh mein aa rha hai kya.....tu kaise soch sakti hai yeh sab..............talak du main usse kis liye haan kis liye........."

Raavi clutches shiva's arm and shiva looks at her she nods her head in a no and looks at him pleadingly, Shiva says,

"Mat rok Raavi......... Ajj mujhe agar khud bhagwan bhi roke main nahi rukunga........... "

He steps forward and looks at gaumbi giving gaumbi a assuring look, and continues,

"Maa tune toh bade hi aaram se keh diya ki talak de du........ Kis liye ki isne Tara ko iss duniya mein laya ya iss liye ki isne hamare liye itna kuch kho diya........... Arre maa vo ikk mahine ke baad fir chahkne laggi thi vapas purani vali Raavi ban rahi thi uss sadme se ubhar rahi thi kii tune ajj fir uske jakham khuraid diye.......... Tune aisa kaise soch liya ki vo Tara ko bhabhi se dur krna chahti hai........... Maa uss ladki ne Tara ko 9 mahine pet mein rakha pichle ikk mahine se usse doodh pila rahi hai...... Arre tab nahi cheena toh abb kaise cheene gi......... Ikk baar bhi khayal nahi aaya kya tujhe kaise usne bhabhi ko rota dekha toh itna bada faisla le liya......... Aur main ise talak du...... Kio kii yeh abb........ Tune yeh bhi nahi socha kii uss par kya beet rahi hogi........ Maa pyaar krta hoon main usse.... Biwi hai vo meri....... Vo abb shayad kabhi maa nahi ban sakti toh tu chahti hai main usse chod du arre usne gaimbi aur bhabhi ke liye itna kuch kiya...... Hum use saman bhi na de paye maa....... Samaan toh kya humne toh usse kabhi Thank you bhi nahi bola.........maa tu kaise bhul gayi sab kaise....... "

Shiva goes to Raavi and sit on his knees and say,

"Thank you Raavi itna kuch krne ke liye aur ikk baar bhi na jatane ke liye thank you............ aur sorry......... Itna kuch..... "

Before he could complete Raavi sits on her knees and hugs Shiva tightly and cries and says,

"Shiva please sorry mat bol please........"

Shiva says,

"I love you Raavi....... Sorry iss liye ki tune toh mujhe sab kuch de diya par main shayad tere liye kuch nahi kar paya nahi yuhhe khush rakh paya aur nahi Tujhe saman de paya.... "

Raavi whispers and sobs,

"I love you too........"

This gave suman a reality check of her words her eyes filled up with tears and she than says,

"Maine suna hai kii meri bachi Raavi buut bade dil wali hai agar ho sake toh mujhe maaf krr dena beta bss samajh hi nahi tere dard ko..... "

And than she extends her hand towards them both and both of them come and hug her, and Raavi says,

"Kaki app maafi mat mangiye... Please"

Suman says,

"Tujhe pata hai shiva ajj tune mujhe garv mehsoos krwaya hai.... Tune mujhe ehssas dilaya ki main kitni galat thi........... Tum dono ko kisi ki nazar na lagge....... "

Everyone join the hug and pull afar the grief and grudges.

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Hey guys this was from my side for this part and next part will be their soon hope so you all liked it........ You can drip suggestions for next part also and please tell me did you like this or not.

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ODETTE_DELUSION

well written yaar🤗🤗

so good

Awesome. Well written👏

... waiting for next part. 😊

Lovely update! Glad to see everything resolved.. will wait for happy moments to be back 💖

Originally posted by: virangna2005

well written yaar🤗🤗

so good