Sochta hoon ki vo kitne maasoom the - Page 8

Thanks pragya for this one.....but maa bete ke conversation ne mujhe literally rula diya yaar.....

Omg asawari and madhav are so cruel here😒😒😒😒

Malhar ke saath itna kuch hone ke baad bhi he stiil respects eleders👏👏.....jyada taarif nhi krungi kyu ki malhar ne bhi kalyani ke saath utna hi galat kiya hai

Malhar stopped themselves to watch her on tv.... Acha blunder create hota agar dekh lete to😅😅😅😂😂

And finally last that conversation 😭😭😭😭😭

Moksh kitna chota fir bhi knowingly or unknowingly knows the truth jo sb maante hai or jisne jo dekha hai.....

Kalyani's reaction on knowing it💔💔💔...... But gave him strength or mujhe bhi hope mili hai ki they will unite when u mentioned ki hide and seek khel rhe hai......

That boyfriend wala cute conversation but fir bhi rula diya yaar😞😞😞😞💔💔💔💔.....

Malhar ne galat kiya par he doesn't deserve what AS is doing to him and galatfehmi m bhi jee rha hai...... Or kalyani bhi💔💔💔

Anyways loved it....tune ek khwaish puri ki meri...thank u

Originally posted by: Autumn09

Malhar bechare ne pyaar ke badle itne dhokhe khaaye hain ki koi uske ghaav par marham lagaane bhi aata h to use lagta h use chot pahunchane aaya h. Same thing happened with Kallu. Bechari thought the best for him but Malhar ne khud hurt hokar use hi sabse badi chhot de di.

Ab bataa which would you prefer- Agni taking revenge from Malhar or love story between them?

Bas ab Pillu aur Kallu ki meeting karaani h

Aur Anu ki bhi Kallu se meeting

I was thinking of including some scene with Agni giving muhtod answer to Baapji for his misogynistic soch but kahin rude to nahi lagega apne sasurji ko jawaab dena?

Accha ye bhi batana aage vale chapters me revenge vale part zyada rakhun ya emotional vale?

Tujhe kya chahiye Badass strong Kallu ya emotional Kallu?

Not to interrupt it praggu..... Bas agni or malhar ke bich ki jo kallu mallu wali mu thi vo dhire dhire clear kr de.....and rest is upto you tu revenge dikhaye ya lovestory..... I am gonna love it.....

Or sasurji ko jawaab nhi degi vo....unki bhi mu clear hongi about wrong perception for girls......

And sorry too if you minded tune vanshu se pucha or maine ese suggestion diya..... But its totally upto u how u keep it going💓💓💓

Originally posted by: PRAKRITI_12

Not to interrupt it praggu..... Bas agni or malhar ke bich ki jo kallu mallu wali mu thi vo dhire dhire clear kr de.....and rest is upto you tu revenge dikhaye ya lovestory..... I am gonna love it.....

Or sasurji ko jawaab nhi degi vo....unki bhi mu clear hongi about wrong perception for girls......

And sorry too if you minded tune vanshu se pucha or maine ese suggestion diya..... But its totally upto u how u keep it going💓💓💓

Are Praku no issues. Main to tere se bhi poochne wali thi when I'd see you online. Ye bataa story sahi direction me to jaa rahi h na? Normally meri stories sirf 6-8 chapters ki hoti h, so long stories likhne ka confidence nahi h mere me

Originally posted by: Autumn09

Malhar bechare ne pyaar ke badle itne dhokhe khaaye hain ki koi uske ghaav par marham lagaane bhi aata h to use lagta h use chot pahunchane aaya h. Same thing happened with Kallu. Bechari thought the best for him but Malhar ne khud hurt hokar use hi sabse badi chhot de di.

Ab bataa which would you prefer- Agni taking revenge from Malhar or love story between them?

Bas ab Pillu aur Kallu ki meeting karaani h

Aur Anu ki bhi Kallu se meeting

I was thinking of including some scene with Agni giving muhtod answer to Baapji for his misogynistic soch but kahin rude to nahi lagega apne sasurji ko jawaab dena?

Accha ye bhi batana aage vale chapters me revenge vale part zyada rakhun ya emotional vale?

Tujhe kya chahiye Badass strong Kallu ya emotional Kallu?

Par haan malhar ka abb past dekhkein lagta hai he deserves a chance but not that easily ...uski story tune jaisi sochi hai vaisi hai ..abb tu aaram sein kar aur jaisa praku nein kaha inki love ya hate jo story hai dikhani vo tu aaram sein dikha

Aur haan tu baapji ka murder bhi karwa degi na kalyani kein haathon tabhi yahan kisi ko koi takleef nahi hogi likh kein rakh loon🤣🤣

Aur rahi baat kallu ki story mein jab jiss kalyani ki jaaroorat lagein vo tu aaram sein dein ...👍🏼

Originally posted by: Autumn09

Are Praku no issues. Main to tere se bhi poochne wali thi when I'd see you online. Ye bataa story sahi direction me to jaa rahi h na? Normally meri stories sirf 6-8 chapters ki hoti h, so long stories likhne ka confidence nahi h mere me

The update is cute and emotional.

Sach mein these ranes and deshmukh elders are of no use, other than to insult and hurt people.

Kallu aur pillu ka conversation is soo cutee. Chota sa bacha bhi itni jaldi apni maa ko pehchan liya woh bhi usse bina mila aur dekhe.

I really want badass kallu giving muhtod jawab to everyone.

But she should also see that even malhar is suffering. Should clear their misunderstandings.

Really waiting for agni and pillu meet.

Originally posted by: PRAKRITI_12

Thanks pragya for this one.....but maa bete ke conversation ne mujhe literally rula diya yaar.....

Omg asawari and madhav are so cruel here😒😒😒😒

Malhar ke saath itna kuch hone ke baad bhi he stiil respects eleders👏👏.....jyada taarif nhi krungi kyu ki malhar ne bhi kalyani ke saath utna hi galat kiya hai

Malhar stopped themselves to watch her on tv.... Acha blunder create hota agar dekh lete to😅😅😅😂😂

And finally last that conversation 😭😭😭😭😭

Moksh kitna chota fir bhi knowingly or unknowingly knows the truth jo sb maante hai or jisne jo dekha hai.....

Kalyani's reaction on knowing it💔💔💔...... But gave him strength or mujhe bhi hope mili hai ki they will unite when u mentioned ki hide and seek khel rhe hai......

That boyfriend wala cute conversation but fir bhi rula diya yaar😞😞😞😞💔💔💔💔.....

Malhar ne galat kiya par he doesn't deserve what AS is doing to him and galatfehmi m bhi jee rha hai...... Or kalyani bhi💔💔💔

Anyways loved it....tune ek khwaish puri ki meri...thank u

Thank you Praku 💜💜💜💜 behna picchla vala chapter was for Vanshu aur ye wala especially maine tere liye likha tha. Tujhe ye pasand aaya, I'm so glad. Ab Rekha, Swathi aur Priyu se bhi poochungi...vaise bhi this FF is dependent on aap logon ki marzi😊😊😊...

Originally posted by: Phlo004

teri story hai tujhein jyaada pata hoga ...🤗

Par haan malhar ka abb past dekhkein lagta hai he deserves a chance but not that easily ...uski story tune jaisi sochi hai vaisi hai ..abb tu aaram sein kar aur jaisa praku nein kaha inki love ya hate jo story hai dikhani vo tu aaram sein dikha

Aur haan tu baapji ka murder bhi karwa degi na kalyani kein haathon tabhi yahan kisi ko koi takleef nahi hogi likh kein rakh loon🤣🤣

Aur rahi baat kallu ki story mein jab jiss kalyani ki jaaroorat lagein vo tu aaram sein dein ...👍🏼

Na re Baapji ke murder tak to baat nahi jaayegi...soch rahi hoon Athu/Sampu ka karwa Doon 😎😎😎 Vaise bhi itni dushtta ke baad sirf jail mujhe fit naa lag rahi in logon ke liye.

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Originally posted by: sathwi_99

The update is cute and emotional.

Sach mein these ranes and deshmukh elders are of no use, other than to insult and hurt people.

Kallu aur pillu ka conversation is soo cutee. Chota sa bacha bhi itni jaldi apni maa ko pehchan liya woh bhi usse bina mila aur dekhe.

I really want badass kallu giving muhtod jawab to everyone.

But she should also see that even malhar is suffering. Should clear their misunderstandings.

Really waiting for agni and pillu meet.

Thanks a lot Swathi 💖💖💖💖

Please let me know what you want in next chapter. In this FF, I'm trying to write story according to wishes of you all 😊

Originally posted by: Autumn09

Na re Baapji ke murder tak to baat nahi jaayegi...soch rahi hoon Athu/Sampu ka karwa Doon 😎😎😎 Vaise bhi itni dushtta ke baad sirf jail mujhe fit naa lag rahi in logon ke liye.

Pata hai when I was 21, I wrote a novel. Thoda dark tha, magar na usme bhi do logon ka time se pare connection tha (though it was just platonic)