Sochta hoon ki vo kitne maasoom the - Page 7

Originally posted by: rekha_crm

Happy to see Sampada and Atharv crawling and begging in front of Agni..

Sampada... What a heartless woman she had been to a bleeding and crying Kalyani.. 😡

They are such evils who deserve this treatment and much more..

Malhar pehle din hi meeting bhool gaya?

Ok ab secretary hoga Agni ka..

Nice update Pragya

Thanks Rekha. Malhar bechara disturbed h due to Moksh's health aur oopar se wo thug doctor...and uski job bhi chalo gayi

Originally posted by: PRAKRITI_12

That's really good praggu.... Fantastic I mean.....

Kallu acha revenge le rhi hai.... It's tit for tat... That flashback made me so emotional 🥺🥺🥺..... The way they tortured her..... Inhumans🙁🙁🙁..... But i am glad she is making them pay.....

The scene where she crushed samples fingers made me so relaxed after reading it.... They deserve it.... And I laughed where they doesn't have a coin and chale hai 50 crore ka loan lene😂😂😂😂.....

Kalyani malhar ka nafrat wala scene bhi acha tha...... He did very wrong to her but still has a heart for her..... And ghajini scene😂😂😂😂

Omg she controlled her self from revealing truth but calling" aap"..... Malhar ji demoted.... I am sure ise koi flashback scene yaad aaya hoga..... 😶😶😶😶

Keep going baby

Thanks a lot Praku 💖💖💖 Yaar tu bhi idea de kucch next chapters k liye

Originally posted by: rekha_crm

Anu and Malhar's bond was good in the beginning but later on after Kalyani became her daughter, that bond was just thrown for a toss.

Absolutely, even my favorite was MalMoksh bond and Malhar's honesty and integrity towards his duty.

He loved and cared for every family member but no one understood that he was duty bound too.

Frankly I wanted to see that in Kalyani after she came as IAS. But no, she never got above Aai and Pillu.. And at the end it was always only Aai..

Vahi to. I mean even when we joined workforce, even on probation, there was so much work pressure. Aur Idhar IAS hone ke baad bhi cycle chal rahi h...

Originally posted by: Autumn09

Vahi to. I mean even when we joined workforce, even on probation, there was so much work pressure. Aur Idhar IAS hone ke baad bhi cycle chal rahi h...

True.. Kalyani's DM job was not even an ounce of what a normal working person would actually undergo.. How many hours you put in at work..

Yahaan toh it was made to seem that DM ka job was as easy as wasting time on nonsensical things. 😆

Originally posted by: rekha_crm

True.. Kalyani's DM job was not even an ounce of what a normal working person would actually undergo.. How many hours you put in at work..

Yahaan toh it was made to seem that DM ka job was as easy as wasting time on nonsensical things. 😆

I am working since I was 21 and it was not that it was a super lucrative job. But seriously itna time aur energy Deni parti thi.

And my second job... during studies I was the most chill person even during boards magar ek saath itni responsibility aur pressure aa gaya

Woowww the update is too good pragyaa

I enjoyed it a lot.

Agni punishing atharv and sampada for their deeds. She is taking very good revenge on them for their past doings.

I really want kalyani to taunt malhar and make him realise his mistakes. Can't wait to see secretary and boss taunting game and romance.

Chapter 8

Finally Madhav and Asawari had arrived from the wedding. As soon as Malhar went to pick them up from railway station, Madhav burst on him, "Ye kya sun raha hoon main Malhar? Tumhe naukri se nikaal diya gaya hai, vo bhi Rishwatkhori ke aarop mein?"

"Baba...vo...," Malhar was going to explain himself when he heard the familiar, "Badi dusht hai ye duniyaa!"

"Are Malhar, tumne apne Baba ko nahi bataya," Malhar didn't know Aau Saheb materialized in the railway station, "Is poore hafte me Newspaper me tumhara hi to chehra chhaya raha. Kehna padega Madhav, tumhare bacchon ne kya naam roshan kiya hai tumhara- Chhota beta kidnapper, Bada beta rishwatkhor, aur Beti Swara ek kaayar...aakhir wo bhi kya karti, aise bhai kisi ko mile to usse to maut hi bhali."

"Aau Saheb," Malhar's fists clenched.

"Malhar," Madhav raised his hand to stop Malhar, "Badon ke saamne apni had me raho, bhool gaye maine kya sikhaya hai tumhe."

Malhar said in his heart, "Kucch nahi bhoola main Baba. Sirf isliye hi aaj tak Aau Saheb ki har baat bardaasht karta raha kyonki unki umar ka lihaaj karta hoon. Jhooth bolkar Sampada se meri shaadi karake zindagi inhone ne meri barbaad ki, Swara ko itna torture kiya ki usne apni hi jaan le li, fir ye mujhe kis baat ke taane deti rehti hain." Then Malhar remembered about Rao Sahab and Nal and whatever he was going to say to Aau Saheb, he kept to himself. If his mother was killed unintentionally in an accident by Rao Sahab, he also had unintentionally caused deaths of Rao Sahab and Nal. If he thought like that, he could at least try to sympathize with AS, but till when he was going to be punished like that? All he wanted was for Moksh to escape this cycle of hatred and revenge.

"Chaliye maana, Swara kaayar aur Malhar rishwatkhor h," Asawari said, "Magar aapki poti? Vo to shadishudaa hote huye kisi aur..."

"Baba..."Malhar tried to stop her. He was glad he hadn't brought Moksh with him. To his horror, Asawari even said that extramarital affairs run in the blood of AS's family. "Ahilya ji, kahin isi vajah se to Rao Sahab ne..."

"Ho gaya aap logon ka," Malhar said, "Moksh uthne wala hoga. To ab binaa koi naya bakheda kiye ghar chaliye." Sometimes he wondered how he hadn't gotten mad living with such elder persons who were supposed to guide him. He couldn't leave even Moksh alone with Asawari. One day he heard Asawari telling Moksh that his mother was an adulteress because his father couldn't make her happy.

When Moksh opened his mouth, Malhar was stunned with horror that he was going to ask the meaning of an adulteress. But Moksh innocently asked, "Do I have a mother?"

Whenever Malhar tried to feel Kalyani's perspective, his helplessness whenever Moksh searched for his mother in the faces of strangers stopped him from doing so. Malhar remembered how afraid he felt when Sampada left him for Atharva. He lashed out at everyone. Everyone saw his anger. But more than angry, he was scared. He was too young when Madhav abandoned him. He didn't know a thing about being a parent. And Sampada left him all alone. He had no one to turn to, ask to help him. Then Kalyani came, and more than he loved her as his wife, he loved her as Moksh's mother. But she did the same thing to him like Sampada did. And he didn't know why, if Sampada's betrayal had shattered his heart, Kalyani's betrayal sucked the soul out of. Malhar told himself he was glad that Kalyani died and he wished that she would rot in hell for hundreds of years.

Inside Malhar's new house on rent

"Tum ek aurat ke neeche kaam kar rahe ho?" Madhav threw the glass of water on floor, "Kya matlab tumhare padhne likhne ka? Isse accha to tum anpadh reh jate. Ek aurat tumhe hukum degi...tabhi Sampada aur Kalyani...chii mujhe to bolne me bhi sharam aati hai."

"Aur kya Malhar? Isse accha to mera Ahir hi tha," Asawari added kerosene to fire.

"Ungliyon par nachati hogi vo Agni ise," Madhav said, "Aur ye ek pille ki tarah ghoomta hoga Yes madam Yes madam karke. Vo teri kulakchhini biwi kya bulaati thi Moksh ko-Pillu. Asli pillu to tu hai beta. Jaanta hoon itna paisa kamaane ke liye kya kya gul khilaye honge usne."

"Bas Baba," Malhar said, "Vo itni kaamyaab isliye hai kyonki vo din raat kadi mehnat karti hai. Agar ham employees se vo poori mehnat expect karti hai to khud uska hazaar guna karti hai. Maine dekha hai use. Kaam ke alawa kucch nahi dikhta use. Aur vo jitni intelligent h...mera matlab jo kucch Agni ke paas h...vo sab vo deserve karti h balki usse bhi zyada deserve karti h."

"Waah Malhar," Asawari taunted, "Vo do takke ki Kalyaani to tujhse sambhaali nahi gayi, Agni ke pairon par gir bhi jayega na to teri koi aukaat nahi h uske saamne."

Tabhi Moksh daudta hua aaya, "Papa aapki boss ka naam Agni Naidu hai na? Unka interview aa raha h TV par. Kitni sundar hain vo? Papa aap unse hi shaadi kar lo fir main bhi doston par impression jamaunga ki meri mummy itni beautiful aur successful hain."

"Zara ham bhi to dekhen Malhar ki boss ko," Asawari went towards TV but Malhar stealthily made the power off of the whole house. If his father had reacted so strongly for his boss being a woman, how would he react when he discover Agni looked exactly like Kalyaani.

"Ye light kaise chali gayi," Asawari said.

"Pata nahi," Malhar said innocently.

Late at night Malhar was busy in work when he thought to confirm the meeting from Agni herself. Malhar called her number.

"Hello! Who's this?"

"Sorry ma'am," Malhar said, "Sorry for disturbing your sleep."

"Main company ka weekly revenue analyze kar rahi thi," Agni said, "Teen ghante se zyaada sone ki aadat nahi h mujhe."

Suddenly Moksh sat up on the bed. The phone on his ear, Malhar said, "Soye nahi abhi tak tum? So jao varna kal school jaane ke time roge."

"Malharji...hamara beta" Then Agni corrected herself, "Malhar...tumhara beta h na vo? Kaisi hai ab uski tabiyat?"

"Ab theek h," Malhar said, "Bas apne Baba ko pareshaan kar raha hai."

"Baba baat karao na unse meri," Moksh pouted, "Mujhe bhi itni pretty aunty se baat karni h varna main aaj nahi sounga."

"Moksh zyada jid ki to ek thappad padega," Malhar scolded. Moksh started crying.

"Kya karte hain aap Mr. Rane?" Agni said, "Rula diya na aapne Pillu ko. Phone dijiye use."

Malhar gave phone to Moksh.

"P...Moksh, kaisa hai mera baccha?" Agni said.

Moksh started giggling, "Main accha hoon. Pata hai aap bahut beautiful ho. Maine jitni girls ko dekha hai na un sabse beautiful. Aapke to bahut saare boyfriends honge na jab aap itni beautiful aur rich ho?"

Agni started laughing, "Boyfriend kisne sikhaaya tujhe ye sab?"

Moksh said, "Dadi kehti hai meri mummy beautiful thi isliye mere papa ko chhor ek gande uncle ke saath bhaag gayi. Fir god me unhe punish kiya aur vo mar gayi. Par pata h Agni aunty?"

Agni said with heavy voice, "Kya?"

Moksh said, "Mujhe unki bahut yaad aati h. Unka chehra nahi dekha maine kabhi Magar aapki photo dekhi na TV par to mujhe laga meri mummy bhi itni hi sundar hogi. Aur mujhe nahi lagta meri mummy gande uncle ke saath Papa ki vajah se gayi hogi. Sam aunty kehti hai na ki main bad boy hoon. Isliye mummy mujhe chhorkar chali gayi."

"Kisne kaha tu bad boy hai?" Agni said though her heart was breaking into million pieces, "Aur kaun kehta hai teri mummy tujhe chhorkar chali gayi h? Vo to bas hide and seek khel rahi h tere saath? Samajh le ye tera test h ki tu apni mummy ko pehchan paata h ya nahi?"

Finally after seeing Moksh this happy for the first time in his tiny life, Malhar got so relaxed that sleep started embracing him. Just then he thought why Agni called Moksh Pillu? Only Kalyani called him Pillu? Why Agni?

But when he woke up in the morning, Malhar decided that he had just dreamed Agni calling Moksh Pillu.

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Originally posted by: sathwi_99

Woowww the update is too good pragyaa

I enjoyed it a lot.

Agni punishing atharv and sampada for their deeds. She is taking very good revenge on them for their past doings.

I really want kalyani to taunt malhar and make him realise his mistakes. Can't wait to see secretary and boss taunting game and romance.

Thanks a lot Swathi 💖💖💖💖

Ohh it was such a cute chapter pragyu I loved it 💗☺️☺️🤗 my sweetheart 🤗🤗

ye baapji vahan bhi aise hi the yahan bhi aise hi hai khadoos akdu badtameez same aausaheb also sab ek jaise hi hai ye log kabhi nahi sudharenge 🤪

Chalo malhar ko realised to hua ki vo inn logo kein saath rehkar kabhi pagal kyun nahi hua glad to know that he is still a person who feel emotions kabhi kabhi itna bura lagata haina Malhar kein liye beachara humesha jindagi bhar dhoka khaya hai aaj uska pov dekhkein pata chala ki uski galti bass itni hai ki vo aise logo sein mila 😭😭

Kalyani and pillu scene aww ye ladki pighlegi aur apna bhandha phodegi pakka par phir bhi they are cutest I am telling you

Aswari is such a horrible person who teach such things to such a small child this lady has to gone soon agni pls kill her with her dearest husband mr .madhav rane sada hua insaan 😈

Originally posted by: Phlo004

Ohh it was such a cute chapter pragyu I loved it 💗☺️☺️🤗 my sweetheart 🤗🤗

ye baapji vahan bhi aise hi the yahan bhi aise hi hai khadoos akdu badtameez same aausaheb also sab ek jaise hi hai ye log kabhi nahi sudharenge 🤪

Chalo malhar ko realised to hua ki vo inn logo kein saath rehkar kabhi pagal kyun nahi hua glad to know that he is still a person who feel emotions kabhi kabhi itna bura lagata haina Malhar kein liye beachara humesha jindagi bhar dhoka khaya hai aaj uska pov dekhkein pata chala ki uski galti bass itni hai ki vo aise logo sein mila 😭😭

Kalyani and pillu scene aww ye ladki pighlegi aur apna bhandha phodegi pakka par phir bhi they are cutest I am telling you

Aswari is such a horrible person who teach such things to such a small child this lady has to gone soon agni pls kill her with her dearest husband mr .madhav rane sada hua insaan 😈

Malhar bechare ne pyaar ke badle itne dhokhe khaaye hain ki koi uske ghaav par marham lagaane bhi aata h to use lagta h use chot pahunchane aaya h. Same thing happened with Kallu. Bechari thought the best for him but Malhar ne khud hurt hokar use hi sabse badi chhot de di.

Ab bataa which would you prefer- Agni taking revenge from Malhar or love story between them?

Bas ab Pillu aur Kallu ki meeting karaani h

Aur Anu ki bhi Kallu se meeting

I was thinking of including some scene with Agni giving muhtod answer to Baapji for his misogynistic soch but kahin rude to nahi lagega apne sasurji ko jawaab dena?

Accha ye bhi batana aage vale chapters me revenge vale part zyada rakhun ya emotional vale?

Tujhe kya chahiye Badass strong Kallu ya emotional Kallu?